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                                                                 Okay, so I wrote this last night around 1:00 in the morning, so sorry if its a little ify but I was a bit tired. Maybe you guys can help me smooth it out some but anyways:


Verse 1:

"I let you in,

thinking my lips wouldn't bruise when I kiss you

I puff out my chest,

but I'm telling you right now I miss you."

"We go from sad to sadder,

Convince our selves we are better, 

than this, we spit

on each other

we fight like we're lovers

but I'm feeling smothered , 

too much,

too much,

too many, mistakes already

This kind of thing, it gets heavy."

"The late nights, tired eyes

"take me home's"

it's no surprise to me.

too much ,

too much,

too many."


Okay so keep in mind this is just the first verse, and this song has a sadder tone too it, and the sound is kind of more indie sounding. For refrence you can listen to Zhavia or Billie Eilish, we have kind of the same sound in music. 






Edited by Neal K

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