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Hit it Raw (Explicit Lyrics)

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This is a song I made a bit ago I know it's not the usual style of this place but I'm looking for feedback on delivery/lyrics/mixing pretty much anything that isn't the beat. 

 

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You neglected to post a song link :blush:

 

Tom

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4 minutes ago, tunesmithth said:

You neglected to post a song link :blush:

 

Tom

Wow im dumb but thanks I fixed it! 

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I think your delivery on this track was pretty flawless, you were very articulate. I would up the volume ever so slightly on the back vocals next time but did enjoy that they were panned to the left, it added a sense that someone was next to me lol

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There's several points where you double tracked vocals (non-adlib) and the mixing there is good, the volume of the second vocal is perfect (in my opinion) and also there's some good stereo mixing.

You're good with near rhyme, bucket/public nuisance/stupid about/grounds 

The pacing of the second verse is a little jarring, it's significantly shorter than anything else -- it may be as long as the chorus. So to me, I get a feeling like it's (the whole song) incomplete and that I'm just getting a sample.

 

The transition into the second chorus sounds really good, delivery wise. 

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