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Original song "By your side" __ *EDITED*

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*SO I EDITED THIS AND WIPED OUT THE LINK BECAUSE I DID A SECOND / BETTER QUALITY UPLOAD AND I ALSO CHANGED THE CHORUS COZ I DIDN'T LIKE THE FIRST ONE. I'M DELETING THE FIRST UPLOAD*

These are the lyrics I wrote to the song/ music that was given to me  :)

(SECOND BETTER UPLOAD)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wahQ_CeXBSo

 

 

LYRICS:

"By your side"

If your sad I will be sad with you
When your crying I will dry your tears
Turn your fears around 
I'll stand with you and laugh with you
By your side always for all your life
Your not alone 

 

Chorus 
Oh, I'm by your side
Forever more
I'm by your side
Love you've never felt before
I’m by your side 
Be the change you wanna see
I'm by your side
Yeh, I'm with you

 

Your heart is broken I know
Mine breaks with you
And I know how you always feel
It's not the end
Oh, there's so much more for you
Your gonna make it through
Hush now

 

I'm there with you
Through good and bad
I'm there for you
When you get sad
It’s not all bad
Cause you are precious
And I'm not going anywhere
Yeah your an angel
And it’s never fair 
Your not alone 

 

Chorus 
Oh, I'm by your side
Forever more
I'm by your side
Love you've never felt before
I’m by your side 
Be the change you wanna see
I'm by your side
Yeh, I'm with you

 

You don't deserve what you've had to see
But its all for a reason
One day your gonna see
Just lift yourself up now
Just stand strong somehow
Cause choosing to live
You cant go wrong
Yeah choosing to live 
You can’t go wrong 
You can’t go wrong 

 

© Tamara Farmer 2018 


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It sounds to me there is a reservation in your voice like your trying to focus on hitting notes as opposed to feeling them out (Something I've struggled with) and the rhythm of the vocal is a little out. Did you write the lyrics before the music? If i do that i have to end up chopping them up and rearrange them. These are 2 things I've battled in writing music and i used to get disheartened about not being able to create what was in my head. The thing I've learned is that creativity is a process, If you try to create what was in your head completely you may fail (in your own mind) you need to be able to make changes cut things out, add bits and progressively work on a piece. Keep it up, I subscribed to your youtube channel. I'ld love to hear more. There is a song on my youtube channel called Beautiful life and its one of those songs where It meant so much to me lyrically that i was very uncompromising in its composition Ie what was in my head was how it stayed I never reworked it and its a total bomb, its awfull, potential but awfull. Some times you just need to look at work objectively and when your displaying your heart and soul can be difficult. I hope this was helpful and if you would like my opinion in future feel free to ask. Anyway keep up the journey!  

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Thank you for your input :)

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