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My new song...God's Plan

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Hello everyone, it's been a while since I have posted but I have a new song that I just wrote and would like some feedback on it. I recorded it on my laptop in my kitchen at the table this morning so I am not looking for mixing, or sound recording advice. What I would like to know is how the song impacts you, if at all, and why or why not. I have found this site to be very helpful in fine tuning my songs and am very thankful to everyone who contributes.

 

 

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Well it does have an emotional impact, a melancholy overall feel which I think really works well. I kept waiting for a powerful chorus but it never came. the guitar playing at the end is very nice and I felt like it would work well leading into the powerfully sung chorus I kept waiting on. Overall I thought is was good and kept me interested till the end.

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I really like the sound of this......would like to read the lyrics as the music plays, however. Love the vocal!!

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Hello SlowD, 

        I also enjoyed this. Everything I've heard from you I've liked.  I think there isn't enough musical contrast between the verses and the chorus. 

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I really enjoyed this. Except for maybe recording it cleaner, there's not a lot I'd change. Good stuff

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