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J.Ø.X (@itsjayohaxe) • Instagram photos and videos



It's such an unfortunate
That the sun is always punctual
How I wish it to be late
So she wouldn't have to go
Oh why can't she just stay
And postpone it one another day?

Sitting on the roof
As we watch a new day rise
I'm being such a goof
Just too dumb to realize
That it's time to face the truth
And goodbyes never sound smooth

"Oh, it's so unfair"
I said as she lowered her head and let her face
be covered by her hair
And she said:
"Yeah, but there will always be this place inside my head"
It still sounds a little sad

She said:
"These moments that we shared
They will always be with us
You don't have to be scared"
But if I'm supposed to let her go why can't I accept the end
And let go of her hand...

Edited by Jack123
Adding Lyrics
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Welcome to the Muse. ;) Although your voice and the words are occasionally indistinct, I can hear that this has a very pretty vocal melody.


Could you possibly add the lyrics? People - especially lyricists like me - generally like to read along. ;)

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OMG thank you so much for taking the time to listen to my song and give feedback!
Sorry for not adding the lyrics before, and thank you so much for reminding me this.
By the way, I added the lyrics below the link.
I have so many songs I composed myself, but it will take time to post, 'cause I compose the lyrics, play all the instruments, record and mix the tracks - all by myself. So I've got a lot of work to do, and comments like yours are such a great incentive for me.

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