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Hi there,

I wanted to share with you this song that I wrote a few months ago. It's a song about Italy, a country dear to my heart :)
To help you with the understanding, I added some subtitles that you need to start on youtube. I let you discover the song. Thank you all

The lyrics : 

Sweetness invites us, Near Italy
Life abandons us, In the heart of Verona

A suspicion of Chianti, One or 2 martini
Their flavor caresses us, Two spritz and we take off

It is beautiful as a Prada at sale price
as Pope Francis in gondola
A moonlight swim in Capri
Little Italy

Those too strong voices which resound
These vongole that we adore
It is beautiful my Little Ita, Little Italy

An old vespa , Lost in Lombardy         
An ice cream just the 2 of us , On the Lake Como
At the end of a narrow street, A miracle fountain
In a burning heat, Intriguing beautiful Roma

It is beautiful as a Prada at sale price
As Pope Francis in gondola
A moonlight swim in Capri
Little Italy

Those too strong voices which resound
These vongole that we adore
It is beautiful my Little Ita, Little Italy

Canals and alleys making noise
Venice is packed
An invaded lagoon
Sinking beautiful Venice

Spoken :
I know you for a long time
You run in my veins
Your thousand colors streets
I know them by heart
I recognize all your perfumes
I guess your flavors
My second homeland,ma little Italy

It is beautiful as a Prada at sale price
As Pope Francis in gondola
A moonlight swim in Capri
Little Italy

Those too strong voices which resound
These vongole that we adore
It is beautiful my Little Ita, Little Italy

 
 
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This is delightful.. The lyric is lovely - full of sights, sounds, and even smells.  I love the motion the percussion brings.  It's a seemingly deceptively simple and sparse arrangement, yet it somehow still manages to fill the space generously. Your voice is perfect for the song.  Thank you so much for sharing. -Mark

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Love it Bielka. Very pleasant to listen to. It's good to see you posting again. 

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Smooth pop song that flows along nicely.

 

I love the percussion, and the overall arrangement is great. The vocals are well done. The production is good, too.

 

As much as I liked the percussion, it sounded a bit overpowering at times. There are so many interesting elements in the song; let them have their moment in the sun as well.

 

Very cool.

 

Peace,

TC

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Thank you all for taking  time to listen to my music and give your feedback and some good advices. Take care

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You capture the spirit of Italian pop music very well here. I was transported to a cafe on somewhere near the Mediterranean.

 

J'aime que tu chante en francais, aussi! C'est tres rare ici. It's especially cool to sing about another country in a language which isn't Native to that country.

 

The percussion is great in this - did you make the beat?

 

I like your pop sense, and the song arrangement is good and effective for this style of music. Reminds me a bit of Sade in composition and production. The mixing levels all sound good to me.

 

I would strengthen the vocal delivery and/or add some effects to a final version. Some spots seemed a bit pitchy to me.
 

That's the only real criticism I can offer - overall very groovy song

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On 17/01/2018 at 04:11, syl_a_med said:

 

The percussion is great in this - did you make the beat?

 

I like your pop sense, and the song arrangement is good and effective for this style of music. Reminds me a bit of Sade in composition and production. The mixing levels all sound good to me.

 

I would strengthen the vocal delivery and/or add some effects to a final version. Some spots seemed a bit pitchy to me.
 

That's the only real criticism I can offer - overall very groovy song

Thank you for your comment. I did not make the beat. Someone helped me for the arrangement and the mixing :-) I'm happy you enjoyed the song and congrats for your french ;-) See u

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