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Planes Trains And Automobiles

 

s’on a business trip in Bangkok  banana boat in Bali

When i received your text

You said you’re sorry please come home 

Just be here on the next. 

 

Took the hotel elevator  

I raced up to my room. 

I grabbed the airport air-link train

That thing can really zoom. 

 

Plains trains and automobiles. And a taxi ride or two. 

I’d even ride a tricycle to get back home to you. 

Planes trains and automobiles Ain’t much I wouldn’t do

Cuz nothing beats the makeup sex /your sweet embrace when I get back home to you

 

Racing thru the airport

I’m jumping thru the gates

My luggage has those little wheels 

I ride ‘em like a skate

 

Love those moving sidewalks

Switching planes in Beijing

An escalator ate my shoe

Because of my shoe string

 

Planes trains and automobiles And a taxi ride or two

I’d even ride a tricycle to get back home to you

Planes trains and automobiles ain’t much I wouldn’t do

Cuz nothing beats the make up sex / your sweet embrace when I get back home to you

 

Got nothing against a rickshaw

A camel or a bike

The thought of getting home to you

It really has me psyched

 

So send the kids to grandma’s /tell your friends you’re busy

Put on your negligee

And leave the porch light on for me

I’ll be home right away

 

Planes trains and automobiles and a taxi ride or two

I’ll even walk the last ten miles to get back home to you. 

 
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It's a fun, engaging lyric but (and I'm sure this just comes down to personal taste) the "make-up sex" premise (or at least how it's so bluntly stated) makes it less endearing to me. 

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Don't mind the make up sex so much, but this guy was (I thought) on a business trip...why would he interrupt that just for make up sex?? The consequences are either a lost deal and\or a lost job.

 

I do like this a lot, and the bit about the shoe paints a great picrture of a man in a hurry, but I'd make this about you wanting to get home for something more important ===like you realize you love her and want to propose.

 

As is, you're a slave to your penis.

 

 

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^That's a better way of what I was trying to get at. I don't have an issue with prurient topics, the reason just cheapened the point of his travails.

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Hi kuya

 

Of course you know your hook is stolen :)

Apart from that, I think this is a funny lyric.

Only sugg is to get an internal rhyme here to lessen the shock value of the word :sex"

 

Quote

"There's nothing next to make-up sex"

or similar :)

 

Enjoyed it

Paul

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       Thanks for the feedback guys.  He was originally on a banana boat in Bali.  But it’s weird to take a vacation without the family. So that would change ‘send  the kids to grandmas’ to ‘tell your friends you’re busy’. 

      I’m not really enthusiastic about the make up sex line either. Wasn’t sure if I should use or not. I could easily do this as ‘nothing beats your sweet embrace when I get back home to you.’  Either way the guy is ready to drop everything for the girl. Would those changes make much difference? 

       I thought of that movie when i used p, t and a, Paul.  I don’t recall they had a theme song though.  It could be trains planes and automobiles just as easy. I appreciate your looking. Fresh eyes help. 

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33 minutes ago, kuya said:

 I could easily do this as ‘nothing beats your sweet embrace when I get back home to you.’  Either way the guy is ready to drop everything for the girl. Would those changes make much difference? 

I think so

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