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I was watching one of my favorite stand-up comedian and social critic George Carlin's show. He was talking about rape - we should joke about it or not! My lovely wife was giving her counter logics. As usual! Then the total idea came up.

Most of the time I try to use in minimum rhyme/metering stuff.  This time my guitar was in my hand. Somehow I managed to fit in it a simple riff. :) 

 

Love to be Childish

 

I never take anything seriously.
I make joking in wrong places.
Now you wanna try to mock me?
Cause you say I act like childish.

 

Thank God!
I am taking it 
as a compliment.
I''m not ever getting old. 

 

I am singing this song in crapy voice.
Maybe it not makes any sense to you.
The joke is just a joke, not a dick.
You need not take it so hard!

 

Solo

 

You're not gonna get what you want from me.
I keep making what I love to do.
I will be the same definitely. 
Cause I love to staying childish.

 

Thank God!
I am taking it 
as a compliment.
I''m not ever getting old. 
 

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Hi Ashfi, I love the vibe of this, you are definitely exuding sunshine with this lyric. I like the simplicity of it as well, in its' own way childish, cute, fun! I did wonder though if you might consider changing the title to I'm Not Ever Getting Old as a more relatable title for the audience. Either way great write :D

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Ashfi    7
6 hours ago, Tracy somebody said:

Hi Ashfi, I love the vibe of this, you are definitely exuding sunshine with this lyric. I like the simplicity of it as well, in its' own way childish, cute, fun! I did wonder though if you might consider changing the title to I'm Not Ever Getting Old as a more relatable title for the audience. Either way great write :D

Hahhaa.. Thank God, you could feel the childish vibe. That was my main target. :) 

Lets see, I might change the tittle as you suggest B)

 

THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS. IT MEANS A LOT TO ME. 

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