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Since I'm new around here, I thought I should at least share something. This is a lyric inspired by one of my favorite people. :D

 

Sing Me A Smile

V1

Up there on the Stage
Under the soft Lights' glow
Through the Noise of the crowd
his Music fills my Soul
Heals & makes Me Whole
And he

 

(Chorus)

Sings me tears of joy
Eases my pain
His Song offers a sweet
His song offers a sweet embrace 
he sings me a smile
Sing me a smile

 

V2

The dam breaks in my mind
words start to flow like a waterfall   
the raging storm fades away
In the clearing I see
The strength to chase My Dreams
Because He

 

(Chorus)

Sings me tears of joy
Eases my pain
His Song offers a sweet
His song offers a sweet embrace
he sings me a smile
Sing me a smile


 V3                                                                                                           
Picked up my guitar       
Workin out a little tune
Gonna try and spark the flame
Of passion and desire
An pass it on to you
An' I will

 

(Chorus)

Sing you tears of joy
try to ease your pain
Offer you a sweet
Offer you a sweet embrace
And sing you a smile
Sing you a smile

 

(bridge)

Can a whisper in thin air tell us who we're meant to be?
Can the secret of a song set a frozen heart free?
Mountains of worry
Dark clouds of fear
One song comes along
and makes 'em all disappear
because He

 

(Chorus)

Sings me tears of joy
Eases my pain
His Song offers a sweet
His song offers a sweet embrace 
he sings me a smile
Sing me a smile

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There is no link to the song. Or is that on purpose?

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14 minutes ago, s.l.wolf said:

There is no link to the song. Or is that on purpose?

 

Right now there is only a rough demo of this song and the musical arrangment and melody have changed since that demo was made. When we get the time to record a new demo I will add the link.☺

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Very nice!

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23 hours ago, kuya said:

Very nice!

 

Thank you! 

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Nice work - I love the hook - very unique.

And I always like when the verse ends with words that lead into the chorus like "Because he.."

 

There are a few spots that could be stronger but I'm not sure you want that sort of feedback in Artists Cafe - there is a section called "Lyrics feedback" if you do..

 

Good work!

Paul

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1 hour ago, PaulCanuck said:

Nice work - I love the hook - very unique.

And I always like when the verse ends with words that lead into the chorus like "Because he.."

 

There are a few spots that could be stronger but I'm not sure you want that sort of feedback in Artists Cafe - there is a section called "Lyrics feedback" if you do..

 

Good work!

Paul

 

Thhank you Paul, for me, this song is finished. It took me two years to complete this song. I've forgotten how many rewrites this song has had. The melody and music are done, all that's left is to record it. This is my first completed song, ever. I have many others I will welcome feedback for but this one I am quite happy with.

 

I really like verses that have a lead into the chorus. I don't always use it but I do when it's possible. 😊

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