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Hey all!

 

I have a song called "Killer" and would love some feedback. It's an interesting little ditty lol 

 

Thanks!

Micky

 

 

Lyrics:

I'm getting kind of wasted looking at you

Won't you take me up to your hotel room

We can have some fun not knowing me and you

So let's give it a run give me 4, 3, 2...

(one, one, one)

 

Now we can keep it classy if you really want to

Or we can f*ck around if you're feeling in the mood

baby sit down in this chair and let me blindfold you

Now don't you peak

I'm a freak like you

 

Didn't your mama tell you not to trust strangers?

Especially strange men who are looking at you

With a drink in their hand

This was a bad idea but it could have been worse

I'm not gonna hurt you--But I'm taking your purse

 

Chorus:

Cuz I'm not a killer

I'm just a bad bad boy

Currently unemployed

So I gotta do what I gotta do

But I'm not a killer

I just take what I need to take 

And I make sure to mind my P's and Q's

I apologize and thank you

I'm not a killer

 

You're smoking a cigar walking in NoBu Malibu

I'm looking at your car dipped in that baby blue

You know that color would go perfect with my Golden Goose shoes

I'm making me a plan gimme 4,3,2

(give me one, give me one)

 

I approach with a smile "Hello sir, how are you?"

"Leave the keys in the car i'll park it safely for you"

I sense a hesitation for a second or two

But he gives me a nod and I tell him "Thank you"

 

Now didn't your daddy tell you always trust your gut?

Listen to your belly cuz it knows what's what

It's super f*cking telling

It said "bad idea", did you listen? No. 

But it's ok...you can Uber home. 

 

Chorus repeats

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Hi Micky,

 

It's not playing. Is it me or....?

 

Update: I think soundcloud is temporarily down - I can't get on it at all.

Edited by EmilyEmily

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7 hours ago, EmilyEmily said:

Hi Micky,

 

It's not playing. Is it me or....?

 

Update: I think soundcloud is temporarily down - I can't get on it at all.

 

Hm seems to be working on my end..

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Stop me before I kill listen again!

Love it!

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Excellent. I think it has hit potential and you should pedal it around to try and get it played.

 

Mixing, vocals and instruments are superb.

 

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14 hours ago, EmilyEmily said:

Stop me before I kill listen again!

 

Love it!

 

Thank you!!! I won't stop you! haha :)

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6 hours ago, Marc G said:

Excellent. I think it has hit potential and you should pedal it around to try and get it played.

 

Mixing, vocals and instruments are superb.

 

Thank you so much! Will try my best :)

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Sounds like a hit! Little bit of an LA vibe, some humor, strong hook. I like. Good luck with it.

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i like it too.  i have to admit the instrument sound at the beginning was a touch off-putting for me but i guess that means it was original.  this wasn't an issue as the song continued and i liked the sounds, and i also liked the voice.  i found the lyrics to be a little random and a little too much like a series of cliches.  good luck.

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There's a bit of an odd ducking effect happening through out the song, which isn't very pleasant. Are you sidechaining anything perchance? Apart from that, it sounds good, and has an interesting hook. I do think 3 verses to get to the chorus is a little long. Maybe shorten it to 2 verses? I hope that helps!

 

Cheers!

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Very well done. Very new-wave, to me anyway, and that's kinda neat. (This isn't the first time I've noticed that recently. Do I sense a general return to the 70s/80s skinny-tie haircut-band sounds?) Great melodies, nice harmonies, funny lyrics.

 

Only thing I'd say is that the mix seems all high-mid, and got hard on the ears. I'm no EQ expert, but I think it could use some mid-hi cuts and some low boost.

 

I've been lucky tonite because this and the other song I cliicked on to review were both quite good. So I'm logging out while I'm still ahead.  :-)

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On 4/25/2017 at 12:26, lyriCAL said:

Sounds like a hit! Little bit of an LA vibe, some humor, strong hook. I like. Good luck with it.

Thanks so much!!! 

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On 4/25/2017 at 15:37, jonmathews said:

i like it too.  i have to admit the instrument sound at the beginning was a touch off-putting for me but i guess that means it was original.  this wasn't an issue as the song continued and i liked the sounds, and i also liked the voice.  i found the lyrics to be a little random and a little too much like a series of cliches.  good luck.

Glad you enjoyed it. It's kind of random and just kind of fun and weird. At least I think it is haha

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On 4/30/2017 at 01:12, Vara La Fey said:

Very well done. Very new-wave, to me anyway, and that's kinda neat. (This isn't the first time I've noticed that recently. Do I sense a general return to the 70s/80s skinny-tie haircut-band sounds?) Great melodies, nice harmonies, funny lyrics.

 

Only thing I'd say is that the mix seems all high-mid, and got hard on the ears. I'm no EQ expert, but I think it could use some mid-hi cuts and some low boost.

 

I've been lucky tonite because this and the other song I cliicked on to review were both quite good. So I'm logging out while I'm still ahead.  :-)

Thank you so much for your feedback !!! Appreciate it! 

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On 5/1/2017 at 14:49, Oldmanwilli said:

i can really hear this on the radio some day. ur performance in amazing. :D

Thank you :)

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On 5/7/2017 at 09:32, JLE3 said:

Love your stuff Micky! But you know that already.

I truly do appreciate it!! :)

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Like this a lot! Good tune, vocals, lyric and vibe. Not to mention the concept. Great work

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Hi Micky, it sounds very professional. Really worse songs are on my polish radios. Your song has the good melody with potential. I congratulate the talent.

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On 5/17/2017 at 09:09, Admat81 said:

Hi Micky, it sounds very professional. Really worse songs are on my polish radios. Your song has the good melody with potential. I congratulate the talent.

Thank you so much!

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On 5/13/2017 at 10:22, LooknGlass said:

Like this a lot! Good tune, vocals, lyric and vibe. Not to mention the concept. Great work

Thank you!! 

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