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  1. PaulCanuck

    The Truth Comes Stumbling In

    My entry for the May contest - pared down a bit. I'm in the middle of recording this now - so it has music - any tweaking suggs? The Truth Comes Stumbling In The trial was well underway Each side had been pleading its case But the Lie had convinced them And no-one would listen When the Truth came stumbling in The Lie had arrived by Ferrari The Truth - charact'ristic'ly tardy So the Lie had the show Wrapped up with a bow When the Truth wandered into the party {br} Now, the Lie was as sharp as a dagger And he spoke with a confident swagger With his mirrors and smoke The jury was stoked To believe him ahead of that laggard The Truth, to the murmurs of laughter Had the facts stacked up to the rafters Then she took her sweet time Crossing T's, dotting I's But the crowd wanted out of there faster Yeah, the crowd wanted out of there faster When you sit in your chair in the evenin' And you're tuned to the news of the nation Well, your judgement should wait 'Cause the Truth will be late Awww, you're just going to have to be patient! {outro} Yeah, she's bound to be late So you'll just have to wait For the Truth to come Stumbling.. Bumbling.. Grumbling.. Until the Truth comes stumbling in!
  2. Old school country waltz fresh from the lyrics section. Any advice or comments would be welcome and thank you for listening https://soundcloud.com/paulcanuck/when-this-bottle-lets-go-of-my-hand When this Bottle lets go of my Hand Copyright © 2017 Tennyson Road Music The bar is near empty The party-ers gone The band's getting ready To tear their gear down And I see that you've text'd me Wondering when I'll be home... Well, I'll be there just as soon as I can When this bottle lets go of my hand For years you stood by me When you shouldn't have cared For years you revived me From slumped in my chair But a drink is a mistress And she don't like to share. So I'll be home just as soon as I can When this bottle lets go of my hand {br} I feel your love streaming down through this phone But my life's spinning out of control It's my hand, not my heart that she holds And she's cold... Oh, so cold... The bartender comes over And tells me to leave I hope he won't notice What I've stowed in my sleeve Cause she'll hold me again When we're out in the street.. But I'll be with you as soon as I can When this bottle lets go of my hand I promise I'll be home.. .. just as soon as I can When this bottle lets go of my hand
  3. yolama123

    Miracle

    Hey guys! I wrote this song at the end of a storm when I finally paddled my way to shore and feeling the pure joy and relief of having made it there. In this song, I'm talking to God, having just conquered that self-inflicted storm. I really wanted to convey the pure joy and love I felt, and the love I had. How did I do? I'd also like to know how I did with the arrangement. I did some fun things with the chords and harmonies, especially in the chorus. At the end, I wanted to have this sound of a huge choir, more like an audience screaming this melody, but I couldn't sing it, so I replaced it with synths. Did I work around that well? I've also been trying to work on on the production aspect, so how does it sound? Any advice is appreciated! Miracle: It’s been a long road trying to get to you And longer still finding my way Though it’s only been one minute, maybe two It feels like millenia away Though it’s hard to see When you’re twenty miles away I’m getting closer and closer Every day And I’m better Better than I Have ever known Brighter than skies And pure as gold A little surprised At this miracle I’m better than I’ve ever been Now I know that the journey’s not over And potholes and detours aren’t few But I’ve come to know as I’ve grown older I can make it if I just trust in you And it’s hard to see When you’re twenty miles away But I’m getting closer and closer Every day And I’m better Better than I Have ever known Brighter than skies And pure as gold A little surprised At this miracle I’m better than I’ve ever been Now I still fall down And I still get scared Always discouraged, encouraged To give up and call it the end But I won’t give in No, I won’t back down I’ll rise from the ashes and lashes We’ll pave our way straight to the crown Though skies aren’t refraining from raining My heart is with you so I’m (You have made me) Better Better than I Have ever known Brighter than skies And pure as gold A little surprised At this miracle I’m better than I’ve ever been (x2) Better Better than I Have ever known Brighter than skies And pure as gold A little surprised At this miracle I’m better than I’ve ever been Better than I’ve ever been Better than I’ve ever been
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