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  1. “Don’t Lie To Yourself" was written & recorded in 2002. (*Song title is an mp3 link. You're welcome to listen as you read.) The Idea When I began the writing process, there wasn't much to work with. · A simple chord progression, which evolved into my chorus section. · The hook (title) – “Don’t Lie To Yourself” with a tentative melody for those 4 words. That was it! Subject Matter Titles like this one paint a clear picture of the intended message. Simply put, it’s lyrical advice – “be honest with yourself”. Typically, lyrics with a ‘telling” tone are discouraged in songwriting circles. It seems that people don’t enjoy being told what to do…even in a song. Regardless, I decided to make an exception. In my mind, the title’s strengths outweighed its weaknesses. It was memorable, flowed nicely & would contribute to the mood I was hoping to achieve. Since the title was my central message, chorus sections were used to re-enforce that message & expand upon the “whys”. Verse sections were written last. They were used to set the stage…creatively describing why the chorus message (lyrical hook) was important. Lyrical message … in a nutshell Verses Regardless of what we’re taught as children, lying is one of the undesirable realities of life. The older we get, the clearer that becomes. It goes by many names in polite society…fabrication, mis-speaking, embellishment, selective omission, spin & stretching the truth. But once you strip away the niceties, it boils down to varying degrees of one thing – "something other-than the absolute truth". Choruses Although lying is an ingrained part of our existence, we need to be honest with ourselves. Self-delusion benefits no one…least of all “you”. Lyric Spend our lives…tellin’ tales Stretch and bend…the truth Learned that when…reality fails A lie may do But don’t lie to yourself You’re the only one to lose Don’t lie to yourself A lie only a fool would choose Life demands…shaded truths Hype & spin…abound As we grow…beyond our youth Truth is rarely found But don’t lie to yourself You’re the only one to lose Don’t lie to yourself A lie only a fool would choose Don’t lie to yourself You’re the only one to lose Don’t lie to yourself A lie only a fool would choose Copyright 2002- Tom Hoffman Song Structure Introduction / Verse / Chorus / Instrumental Verse (guitar solo) / Verse / Double-Chorus / Brief Ending Musical Fundamentals The song is set in the key of E minor. BPM 116 Unusual as it seems, the “introduction” was the last thing added to this arrangement. What can I tell ya’? It happens! Fortunately, I recalled a guitar didi that I’d stumbled upon the year before. It fit the texture of the song, but I needed something to merge it with the first verse. My solution was a single bass note, sounded on the last count of the intro. In the final mix, that note begins quietly, then grows into the verse…gradually becoming louder. That intro guitar didi consists of 2 separate acoustic guitar tracks. The first plays nothing but 2-note intervals. The 2nd is comprised of open string harmonics, which generate an eerie texture. The guitar arrangement for this song was a bit of an experiment. Other than bass, there are no electric guitars. It contains 3 separate acoustic guitar tracks, each performed on my trusty Yamaha & recorded through an MXL condenser mic. The simulated strings you hear weren’t part of my original version. I had no keyboard capability back then. They were added to the existing 2-track master a few years later. Real drums were used. The part itself employs both half-time & full-time beat structures. Half time is used exclusively until the 2nd chorus section. Both the 2nd & 3rd chorus sections are set in full-time. Finally, it switches back to half-time for the ending. Final Production Notes The recording was done on a Tascam PortaStudio 788. It’s an 8-track digital deck, consisting of 6 mono & 1 stereo channels. - Drums were recorded to the only stereo pair of tracks (7 &8) - Everything else went to single mono tracks....no doubling of any parts Performance Credits Drums, Acoustic Guitars, Bass, Keyboard Strings – Tom Hoffman Vocals – Tom Hoffman Supplemental Video (50 sec. clip of guitar solo portion) - https://youtu.be/vHfuWSaYYYI Tom Hoffman "About Me" Muse Member pg. Tune-Smith.com Tom Hoffman YouTube *BTW that MP3 link at the top is set-up as free download. If you'd like a copy for your personal use, you have my permission.
  2. My Baby Girl

    [Verse 1] The first time you called me Daddy Before I gave your mom her ring I knew then I had a daughter And that made me feel like a king [Verse 2] Soon, your mom and I were married And then you became my step-child But forget about that nonsense Terms like that just get me all riled [Chorus] But, no matter what’s on paper You are always my baby girl You'll always be my baby girl Until my death; my baby girl [Verse 3] Now, you've already turned fourteen Years fly by so fast, it's insane But, at last, we got the money And the judge gave you my last name [Repeat Chorus] [Verse 4]? Someday you'll change your name again But you'll still be my very own And wherever life takes you My house will always be your home [Bridge] Come what may, I'll claim you as mine Even if you have crossed the line [Repeat Chorus] [Fade out]
  3. Daddy's little shadow

    I just started this. Does it look like it's worth continuing? Daddy's Little Shadow V1 Coming home after the work day Before I can even mention How much I loathe being away He demands all my attention V2 Yesterday he was an infant Today, he is in his third year I loved him in the first instant I'll kiss away every tear. Ch He follows me around at home He is Daddy's little shadow He has my heart and my genome. He is Daddy's little shadow
  4. I Want To Be a Country Singer *This song includes lyrical tributes to Blake Sheldon, Trace Adkins, Toby Kieth, Tracy Byrd, and Bad Company. Bass drum in rapid succession for 8 beats. Verse 1 (Start slow <) Growing up in my family's redneck trailerhood; Barefooting through the tall grass and on roads of dirt and stone; Romping through field, creek and wood; Yeah, that's where I found my hillbilly bone! Mr. Byrd was from the country and he liked it that way; Yeah, I can easily see where he's coming from; That's my life and my world each and every day; Can't you hear it in every guitar strum? Chorus: (loud and proud) I'm a country girl singing country music all over the countryside! I've always known what I want to do, what I want to be; Never been a choice to make, nothing to decide; Oh yeah, all I want to be is a country music singer; Singing songs about me from sea to shining sea! Not a shooting star, I want my music to forever linger; Oh yeah, all I want to be is a country music singer! Verse 2 I didn't have a luxurious childhood; But my needs were always met; I don't always behave like I should; But my folks' love never failed, you can bet! Don't wanna be broke, not trying to be rich; Just wanna keep doing what I love to do; Can't expect everything to go without a hitch; But I'm going to keep on plowing through! Verse 3 I don't want to be a rapper or a rock star; I don't want to be a diva, nor a pop artist; But, I really want to go far; When I'm gone, I'm hope I'm missed! Gonna be a Country legend, Everyone's gonna know my name, Ain't gonna fade, break, or bend, Gonna fight to stay in the game! Repeat Chorus Twice ©opy ®ight 2015
  5. Gold Digger

    Gold Digger Well, I had no warning That she’d be gone this morning. My friends are buying my drinks Cuz they know I’m in mourning. Somehow I’ll find endurance To live on with assurance. Tomorrow the drinks are on me When I cash in that life insurance. Well, I’m seventy years old Haven’t much longer I’m told. Gotta live life while I’m alive So, I’ll find me another to hold. [chorus] Gonna buy me a gold digger. She’ll have a luscious figure. She’ll be just nineteen years old And she’ll be plumb full of vigour. My gal loved train engineers Thus we was married 43 years But now she's all gone Guess it's time to shift gears. Well, we buried her in the rain Trying hard to bury my pain I'll need to find someone new Or I'll surely go insane Do you have any good leads? I've always had a thing for Swedes Surely, my kids will be irate But they can't meet my needs. [repeat chorus] I'll sure miss my baby She was a wonderful lady But I have to move on A cowgirl will do maybe Well, I have a big Texan farm My wife filled it with charm But it's too much for just one Need a lady draped on my arm I can still shoot vipers Like the best of snipers Just need a little assistance For things like changing my diapers [repeat chorus twice]