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Almost The Same (V1) What's happened to my best friend Beth She was always as happy as the sun Now it seems she lives under some dark cloud Instead of out with the crowd having fun (Ch) We played together since we were kids How we used to laugh at our games We grew up liking similar sorts of things People said that we were really close So close we were almost the same. (V2) She went to university which was really great But every year she drew back in a little more Last time she went, she stayed a little longer Came home 'n shut and bolted her door. (V3) I try to find a way past her defenses But her stonewalling holds me at bay Something she hides is tormenting her soul It's very bad if she dreads what I'll say? (V4) One day she broke down and fell into my arms. She never thought her life would come to this Her boyfriend from Uni' had died of AIDS And she is pregnant and the baby is his (V5) Beth and her baby have a no known cure Her face had turned a deathly white What could I say at a time like this With no way I could change her life (V6) She'd been in the water for about a week When the cops fished her out at the port Only I knew why Beth ended life this way If pressed hard, I will shut and bolt my door (Ch) We played together since we were kids How we used to laugh at our games We grew up liking similar sorts of things People said that we were really close So close we were almost the same. (Finale) So close we were almost the same.