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  1. THIS IS JUVENOIA The fear or hostility directed by an older generation toward a younger one, or toward youth culture in general. https://youtu.be/_AXeWoI0WUU https://open.spotify.com/album/4eQjxmGzu7lJh9h1elAvr0?si=EbMEysZASwuqwbmyeizn1A
  2. stephenfm3

    SPC - Juvenoia

    Hi I'm new here but my band SPC just released our first music video and I'm really just looking for feedback/critiques on the song and video, thank you! https://youtu.be/_AXeWoI0WUU
  3. Check out this song and let me know if you wanna record vocals for it!
  4. SongWolfe

    Call to war

    I originally wrote some lyrics for a rather eccentric piece of heavy metal music but nothing ever happened of that collab so I've reworked the lyric. My main task was to try to bring a more conventional structure to the song as the original music had 5 sections and none of them matched up. Anyway, here's my reworked attempt at the lyric. It's still intended to be a metal song, maybe something close to Metallica in style. Comments welcome Call to war (Verse 1) War comes hard Nothing new We stand firm Steel blade for you Sword on sword Spear on spear, Blood rains down The sky rains tears. (Verse 2) Days turn dark Death mask grey, Grave plots rise Mark each new day, Still the steel Fierce it strikes The world turns And still we fight (Pre Chorus) You would Take our oil, pollute our Earth Take the spoils, to us no worth Resist Retake! Hold to what’s precious Throw our arms around the world (Chorus) Call to war This is the call Our call to war Hear the hammer fall This. Is. Our. CALL TO WAR! (Bridge) We brazen few that stand in line We link our arms, hold back the tide Your long boats come to steal what’s ours We’ll stand firm against your power! Your long boats come to steal what’s ours We’ll stand braced against your power! (Verse 3) Skies rain tears They bullet down Fall to Earth And stain the ground. Blood runs free Its essence rent Earth shows scars Not Heaven-sent (Verse 4) From all ends New starts arise Shooting stars Dissect the skies, Worlds must heal Though we may die, Swords on chests Sleep where we lie. (Pre Chorus) You would Take our oil, pollute our Earth Take the spoils, to us no worth Resist Retake! Hold to what’s precious Throw our arms around the world (Chorus) Call to war This is the call Our call to war Hear the hammer fall This. Is. Our. CALL TO WAR! (Outro) You declare war From your ivory tower Seeing us fail Is your happy hour, But we will rise Spears glinting bright Like a million stars Shining through the night
  5. SongWolfe

    Army of the Damned

    The context to this lyric is that a singer who I'd worked with on a metal track, asked me if I could write something 'dark heavy and slow. Kinda Sabbathish'. I listened to Black Sabbath's Paranoid album and then wrote this lyric. Would be good to get people's thoughts on it Army of the damned (Verse 1) (Slow) This is not a cold war Though a chill fills my head This is not a cool war Just go and ask the dead. (Chorus) (Faster) Heat is on Burning sun Kicks like an atomic bomb. Feel the fire Cook your eyes Keep on going When the next man dies. (Verse 2) This is not an old war Though these lines mark my face But it is a cruel war That stops the clock on age. (Chorus) Heat is on Burning sun Kicks like an atomic bomb. Feel the fire Cook your eyes Keep on going When the next man dies. (Bridge) We find new ways of killin’ people Now the fallout coats this land Choking on all apologies Eyes bulging, tongue lolling We’re the army of the damned. (Chorus) Heat is on Burning sun Kicks like an atomic bomb. Feel the fire Cook your eyes Keep on going When the next man dies. Keep on going When the next man dies Then the next man dies And the next man Army of the damned Army of the damned Army of the damned
  6. Hi guys !I am 17 and its my second song recorded in Reaper.I have been changing this song a few times and i think its a final version.I dont think that this song is perfect,because i know that those riffs dont match 100% correctly.Solo of this song is half in japanese scale and classic modal scale.Takeshi Kitano is an badass action film actor and he was my inspiration during making this song .My style is inspired by Death and Megadeth mainly.Their guitarists are awesome for me.I am trying to combine playing agressive and melncholic riffs.Tell me what you think about it I will post by rock blues song too when i will improve it.Your opinions are the most important for me https://soundcloud.com/kajetan-zduniak/takeshi-kitano
  7. SongWolfe

    Funeral of a war hero

    Have worked on a metal song with some talented people recently so thought I'd have a go at writing another lyric that would fit with that genre. I had System of a Down in mind in terms of style - with a mixture of gentle and loud bits. Structure-wise, I think it's basically AABA but with an intro and outro tagged on. Verse 3 is a repeat of Verse 2 although might change that if get inspiration for a new 3rd verse Any comments / suggestions? Funeral of a war hero (Intro - acoustic) This is the funeral of a war hero We got his body back And we do what we know, We lower his coffin down Draped with the flag Hold onto more of him Than's in this body-bag. (Verse 1) WAR!!! Steaming war stallions Their nostrils flaring Gun-mounted warships Attack sirens blaring DEATH!!! Across the ages It's all the same Extinguish what's good In the searing writhing pain! (Verse 2) HATE!!! Screaming battalions Their hearts uncaring Uncounted corpses Their colours fading PAIN!!! Across the eras Who's to blame We choose to fill the skies Molten lead that falls like rain! (guitar lead) (Bridge) Love hurts more than hate It squeezes our hearts And teases bloody tears from our eyes. Love hurts every day It crushes our ribs And pierces shoddy veils of lies. (Verse 3) HATE!!! Screaming battalions Their hearts uncaring Uncounted corpses Their colours fading PAIN!!! Across the eras Who's to blame We choose to fill the skies Molten lead that falls like rain! (Outro) Funeral of a war hero Who just wished to stay at home Funeral of a war hero Remember him playing games. Died a long way from those he'd known Just trying to save the day Funeral of our war hero Gone but not forgotten in his grave.
  8. Vara La Fey

    nOiZe

    More EDMetal. Maybe you'll like this one better than the last one I posted.... I dunno, you tell me. :-) All words and music © 2017 Vara La Fey. - - - n O i Z e That ain't music, that's just noise Whoa-oh You know it's good when the retros call it- noise nOiZe It's our nOiZe and it makes the body move we love our nOiZe Feel it Feel the sound take over and fill the world with- nOiZe All you little critics got it all reversed All the sounds you're talkin down are rockin all the earth Move Move the body Move and make some nOiZe
  9. Rewriting one of my songs as dancepop with a hard-rock edge. Or some combo like that. I'm a trans-girl and it's a humorously naughty LGBT theme in the lyrics. DaHell do I know about dancepop?? Not much, but I'm studying it and some of it, I really like. I'm not sure I can write dancepop by myself. Or do those kind of synth tricks. Ya prolly don't need to be LGBT to collab this with me, you just have to be able to put up with a humorously naughty LGBT lyric. :-P Don't wanna describe the song further in public, but I have several reasons to believe it's a good idea that can be picked up by DJs doing the Phoenic-area LGBT dance circuit and open a few doors and maybe expand from there - if written well enough. Msg me if interested. :-)
  10. ONE For All! All For ONE We have done a vocal and guitar this time Arch Enemy - Nemesis!!!! Hope you guys Like it!!! Video: If you like it plz give us a like and subscribe our channel!!! More Cover video is coming up, STAY TUNE!!! Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/AsiansPlayMetal Twitter: https://twitter.com/AsiansPlayMetal
  11. ONE For All! All For ONE We have done a vocal and guitar this time Arch Enemy - Nemesis!!!! Hope you guys Like it!!! Video: If you like it plz give us a like and subscribe our channel!!! More Cover video is coming up, STAY TUNE!!! Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/AsiansPlayMetal Twitter: https://twitter.com/AsiansPlayMetal
  12. Hey guys!!! I've done a panic attack vocal cover!! though my voice still not very good, hope i can get your support!!! If you like to hear more cover of mine, plz subscribe and like the video!! Love you GUYS!! Vocal Cover here!! https://youtu.be/ptWscOrsfSQ
  13. This is my first time recording a cover video. Hope you guys like it. subscribe to my channel, more cover video will be coming out!!! Thank you!!!!
  14. Vocal cover here!!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tNacSdyqvuE This is my first time recording a cover video. Hope you guys like it. subscribe to my channel, more cover video will be coming out!!! Thank you!!!!
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