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  1. UPDATE:New vocals and polish...hopefully someone will listen to it this time New tune...look forward o hearing what y'all think! So So So Verse 1 I don't even know but what I know is that I got a love that explodes like Pele's tears and whenever you're away all I can do is check my phone I can hardly wait til you get home I don't even know what I know but I know that my heart goes boom boom boom boom every time you walk in through the door Pre Chorus my mind goes crazy and my hips start shakin' for goodness sake I feel so great 'cause you're my baby I wanna run away with you Let's fly away and do all the things all the things that we always wanted Chorus I love you so Ah So So So X 4 Verse 2 Venice Days Paris Nights Watch the Eiffel Tower light Under Odin's Eye Let's Walk the cobbled Streets of Rome If we're holding hands We'll call it home Home Home Home Pre Chorus I wanna run away with you Let's fly away and do all the things all the things that we always wanted Chorus I love you so Ah So So So X 4 (Playing songs about love) Middle 8 If you want to get everything you can out of this life then find someone that you love and jump on a southern flight don't you stop don't you stop 'til you see the northern lights X 2 (Hey Alexa) (What's up?) (Go back to that other one) (Alright) Chorus I love you so Ah SO SO SO X 8 (Fade)
  2. Ashfi

    Half of you

    Hi, Here is my new love/sad song, which I’m working. It has two versions. A few days earlier I and my wife had some kinda silly fight. I always feel those topics are pointless based on our lifespan. Anyway, she left our home and staying with her Mom for a while. Then I wrote this one and delicate to her. I sang it, recorded 1 verse (one take straight). I felt shy because I am not a singer or performer. Send to her Messenger (pretty love story, huh? hahaha.). After reading/hearing my first version of it, Her first expression was Mehhh. I thought what if, it would be someone’s last song? The song’s appealing would take different aspect. Then the second versions idea came up. I added a new bridge 02 and outro. Rest of stanzas is still the same. Where should I put those stanza? Need your suggestions. The chorus is conflicting with bridge 02/outro. When you know you are going to die (eventually all we are) soon, it’s not relevant to talk about the old fight. It’s my point of view. Maybe it fits in. i don't know. Let’s see what you guys say/suggest. I also shared my first verse first basic tablature to understand the rhythm thing and other stuff. Half of you Verse 1: All the precious moments of our lives We have been passing through together. Only you and I stay most closely. I'm so glad that it’s our destiny. I love you. Chorus: You are the half of me. No matter how hard we fight. All is matter how good we fit. I am in you. You are in me. Bridge 1: The world is not going as we expect. Sometimes it's out of our hands. Sometimes we took silly stands. But my love all those mean nothing. Verse 2: We're sharing all emotion of our lives. We hear the heart beats each other. Like call & response each minute, Each day and night, with you my love. – I don't like this line. Any ideas? I will miss you. Chorus: You are the half of me. No matter how hard we fight. All is matter how good we fit. I am in you. You are in me. Bridge 2: My body is not going as I expect. This time it's out of my hands. My body cells are self-destructive. All the fight we had meant useless. Outro: I’m counting my last breaths. I’m sorry that I have to leave You alone here, My half of you. Be strong, we will meet again. No matter where I will go. I gonna find you, Your half of me. around 75 bpm:
  3. A song from my upcoming album. Still doing little tweaks on the mix. I might have posted an early mix of this here last year. Valentines Day V1 Broken promises, broken hearts Shattered dreams, everything comes apart Lost innocence, lost youth Lost so many years seeking out the truth Chorus You said you can grow old But don’t you ever grow up We could have a million years But it won’t be enough I wish every day could be this way Like Valentines Day V2 Love hurts, but love can heal Finally found a love that’s real Time wears down, time takes its toll We won’t let time steal our souls Chorus Bridge Another morning sunrise Another long day One more evening sunset Together we know the way Chorus
  4. Hey guys! Been a while since I've posted on the forum, but I've been working on a new track and would love to get some feedback. I wrote this with a female singer in mind. It's about being in love with someone who only loves you back (or shows it) when they're intoxicated. https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/tunnel-vision-demoThanks all!Lyrics:I switch sides of the bed in the morning 'cause I miss youWe had fun last night but the sun comes up every time it starts getting goodI dressed nice 'cause I knew that I was gonna see youI smelled better than I usually do just in case we got close and touched for a second or twoAnd ooh you've got a lot to say tonightIt looks like you've had one too many Ooh it's my favorite time of nightWhen you've had one too manyCome and give it to meAll your attention and your tunnel vision(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)Give it, give it to me i'll spend my money on your contradictions(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)And I don't care if it only lasts one night I want itOoh I want it(even if it's just tonight I want it, yea I want it)Now you're getting pretty close and I really wanna kiss youIt's been fun tonight but the sun's coming up so we better start getting goodSo come on pick it up, hurry up, do you need another one?Drink it up, hurry up, I think I need another cupI'll take itYea I'll take itAnd ooh you've got a lot to say tonightLooks like you've had one too many Ooh it's my favorite time of nightWhen we've had one too manyCome and give it to meAll your attention and your tunnel vision(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)Gimme, gimme a love you only see inside your television(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)And I don't care if it only lasts one night I want itOoh I want itI want loveI wanna feel you loving meLoving me, oh(I wanna feel your love, I wanna feel your love)RepeatAnd I don't care if it only lasts one night I want it(I really want it)Come and give it to meAll your attention and your tunnel vision(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)Give it, give it to me i'll spend my money on your contradictions(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)Come and give it to meAll your attention and your tunnel vision(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)Gimme, gimme a love you only see inside your television(give it to me right now, give it to me right now)And I don't care if it only lasts one night I want itOoh I want it
  5. <Let me know if it sounds too much like Joni Mitchell. She was definitely an influence. And also, give me tips for melody, if you can. What genre of music do you think it fits?> LYRICS: Slanted eyes and gypsy hair With a mean old crooked-smile glare She’s stupid, she’s sad, and young Swearing with her English tongue And she sings obscure forgotten songs Of lonely love and dancing nights And she laughs a little too long Otherwise she’s sighing Or even worse she’s crying Who had kissed her cowboy mouth? And caused her eyes to burn away And who could make her count the days Until he comes around He had a somber, sweet blue face And a soul of tangled tatted lace He’s crazy; spends his time alone To play his drums and xylophone Drowning out his own heartbeat And he thinks that he’s forgotten He wants to be complete But he knows he can’t defeat The aftertaste of sweetness The ugly burns of summer heat He had kissed her virgin mouth She caused his sense to go away He wanted her but couldn’t stay She hopes he’ll come around You know that he will come around In a month or two I’ll see you And I don’t care if you mind You’ll love me when you taste me I know that I’m your wine You can’t resist my cowboy mouth And you like my gypsy hair And I need your tangled tatted head And I need you to be there I know that you still care I’ll kiss your silent mouth
  6. HERE ARE THE LYRICS <Let me know if it sounds too much like Joni Mitchell. She was definitely an influence. And also, give me tips for melody, if you can> LYRICS: Slanted eyes and gypsy hair With a mean old crooked-smile glare She’s stupid, she’s sad, and young Swearing with her English tongue And she sings obscure forgotten songs Of lonely love and dancing nights And she laughs a little too long Otherwise she’s sighing Or even worse she’s crying Who had kissed her cowboy mouth? And caused her eyes to burn away And who could make her count the days Until he comes around He had a somber, sweet blue face And a soul of tangled tatted lace He’s crazy; spends his time alone To play his drums and xylophone Drowning out his own heartbeat And he thinks that he’s forgotten He wants to be complete But he knows he can’t defeat The aftertaste of sweetness The ugly burns of summer heat He had kissed her virgin mouth She caused his sense to go away He wanted her but couldn’t stay She hopes he’ll come around You know that he will come around In a month or two I’ll see you And I don’t care if you mind You’ll love me when you taste me I know that I’m your wine You can’t resist my cowboy mouth And you like my gypsy hair And I need your tangled tatted head And I need you to be there I know that you still care I’ll kiss your silent mouth
  7. HERE ARE THE LYRICS <Let me know if it sounds too much like Joni Mitchell. She was definitely an influence. And also, give me tips for melody, if you can> LYRICS: Slanted eyes and gypsy hair With a mean old crooked-smile glare She’s stupid, she’s sad, and young Swearing with her English tongue And she sings obscure forgotten songs Of lonely love and dancing nights And she laughs a little too long Otherwise she’s sighing Or even worse she’s crying Who had kissed her cowboy mouth? And caused her eyes to burn away And who could make her count the days Until he comes around He had a somber, sweet blue face And a soul of tangled tatted lace He’s crazy; spends his time alone To play his drums and xylophone Drowning out his own heartbeat And he thinks that he’s forgotten He wants to be complete But he knows he can’t defeat The aftertaste of sweetness The ugly burns of summer heat He had kissed her virgin mouth She caused his sense to go away He wanted her but couldn’t stay She hopes he’ll come around You know that he will come around In a month or two I’ll see you And I don’t care if you mind You’ll love me when you taste me I know that I’m your wine You can’t resist my cowboy mouth And you like my gypsy hair And I need your tangled tatted head And I need you to be there I know that you still care I’ll kiss your silent mouth
  8. SongCory

    Super Little Hero

    I've read the stories on how this world began, (3 seconds of music.) I've seen the power that runs through your golden veins, ( 2 seconds.) I’ve seen the price that you have to pay, ( 5 seconds.) For I wanna be your hero, super, superhero, The one who’s always standing who never leads astray, I don’t need powers to keep you looking straight, Just that smile that never leaves your face. ( 3 seconds.) For I wanna be your hero super, superhero, Just your little hero, who’s never in the way, who’s always keeping pace, who never runs away, ( 2 seconds.) For I wanna be your hero, Your Super little hero, Even if I had to I'd give it all away, cause I'll never need more than what you gave that day, ( 3 seconds.) When you were my hero my super, superhero who never ran away, the one who’s like lightning cause you never change your way, I love you anyway, and that will never change. ( 5 seconds.) Cause I wanna be your hero your super, super. Hero the one who’s always standing, who never runs away. For I wanna be your hero your super little hero, and that will never change. If you could help me with the format of the song or just the lyrics of the song, in general, both would be greatly appreciated. Also if you are interested in singing it am looking for a singer.
  9. Would so appreciate any feedback on this cover! Thank you!
  10. Ok, so I'm writing a song right now.. And this song is about when you like somebody, but you don't won't to associate with them because you are afraid they will break your heart or will destroy the image and expectation you had for them. And I started to just write it the way I experienced and felt it, but it just sounds BAD. Here it is: He’s got a smile like sunshine And I wish he was mine But he just don’t see the signs All these books and friends Tell me to get up and tell him But why would I volunteer to be heartbroken? I'm pretty confident in getting my point across, but it's not at all the way I want it to sound. It sound's like a song a Disney Channel actress would put out as their first single after finishing their show!!! Perhaps it's the topic that makes these lyrics sound so childish and just straight out BAD, but I kind of want to see if I can work this out.. Please help me out??
  11. cindyrella

    Sculpture

    As I was going off to sleep I saw this sculpture and had to jump up and write it down. Thoughts? Sculpture © 2017 indy Prince When my hand follows your curves I am captured The heat from your body makes me weak When your unzipped dress falls to the floor I am in rapture I am so caught up that I cannot speak Chorus Darling, you are so much like a sculpture Like smooth marble beneath a master's hand My love, I just want to tell you You take me to a magic land Bridge Your classic beauty so like women through the ages Like the paintings on museum walls You body like an exquisite statue Seen in ancient building's halls Your every step is taken in gracefulness I know I am so blessed To have you love me as you do You are beautiful in both mind and in spirit And if you haven't guessed I'll forever be in love with you Repeat chorus
  12. dvcsongs

    Girl For All Seasons

    Just a bit of fun... Girl For All Seasons v. She's like the winter I am frozen by her charms Then defrosted in her arms And, she is the Spring I am warmed by her heart As she brings me in c. She's a girl for all seasons There's so many reasons Why I love her so She blooms in my heart Her heat melts my soul Until it all falls apart And I'm lost in the cold She's a girl for all seasons v. In the long days of summer She gives me all that I need A cool breeze in the heat Then, when the leaves start to fall She knows that I miss her When she's gone I feel so small c. She's a girl for all seasons There's so many reasons Why I love her so She blooms in my heart Her heat melts my soul Until it all falls apart And I'm lost in the cold She's a girl for all seasons b. I can't take it when she's gone It seems like everything's gone wrong But when she comes back home to me It's better than the coolest summer breeze And finally I can breathe! c. She's a girl for all seasons There's so many reasons Why I love her so She blooms in my heart Her heat melts my soul Until it all falls apart And I'm lost in the cold She's a girl for all seasons
  13. Sofia

    Do I Deserve This?

    V1 Here's to more drinking alone in the dark Love's won and I am tired Because I've stood up a hundred times After falling head-first out of my mind Now I'd rather stare at the ceiling And watch the bad times roll Pre-Chorus But I don't want you to know I live at the bottom of a bottle Can't even string three words together anymore I don't want you to come by And get your sorry tears all over my life I'd shut you out if this bottle had a door Then you'd have nothing left to be sorry for Chorus And only God will be able to see my hands shaking Only silence will be broken by my words Only I will remember the way the days started fading Into a haze of spilled liquor Do I deserve this? V2 This one's for the fools who let down their guard And held on to every lie I've been done a hundred wrongs And hoped two could make a right Loved you to a fault And let you take your toll on me Oh you've still got a hold on me Pre-Chorus But I don't want you to know I live at the bottom of a bottle There's three words like poison, can't be said anymore And I don't want you to come by And see the flood of tears I've cried I'd shut you out if this bottle had a door Because you're not sorry now and you weren't sorry before Chorus End Darling, I've never been this low before Before I was ever one for love Finding solace on a concrete floor Too afraid of getting up Lord, is it even worth it anymore? I just need to fill my cup And wallow in my stupid luck Regretting things I've never done To deserve this
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