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  1. All eyez on: Shaney 23 Please give a Feedback to our latest Hip Hop/R'n'B Song Production. Feel invited to: Subscribe, Like or Comment on the Track on YouTube and SoundCloud. Here are the Links: Shaney 23 - Alle Augen auf mich Shaney 23 - Alle Augen auf mich (SoundCloud)
  2. I don't know if I even make any good music these days . wut u guys think ?
  3. Looking for feedback on a recent project I did.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUaARpGdUDs
  4. https://soundcloud.com/user-285980049/absorption-2
  5. This is a song I made a bit ago I know it's not the usual style of this place but I'm looking for feedback on delivery/lyrics/mixing pretty much anything that isn't the beat.
  6. Yooo my name is Lukas Trip and I'm a singer/rapper looking to start a music group. I have about 4 years of music experience including recording, releasing, CD printing, and doing concerts. Some of the influences for my writing process are:Tyler the Creator/Odd FutureBROCKHAMPTONLil PeepTrippie ReddLil Uzi VertXXXtentacionLil YachtySki Mask the Slump GodI'm a huge fan of alternative/emo genres as well as newer rap, raggae genres, punk, and some 90s rap. A little bit about me: I'm 18, live in the USA, and accepting of anyone regardless of their gender, racial background, religion, or sexuality. Below is my email and a link to my debut single off of my upcoming album. If you vibe with it, then hit me up! Email is for serious inquiries ONLY!!Email:Itslukastrip@gmail.comLink to my music: https://soundcloud.com/lukastrip/enuff Thanks!
  7. Hey I'm kind of a new artist can you listen to my songs and tell me what you think about it:
  8. Hello! Just posted new beat to my soundcloud. Would like to get some feedback, because im not too experienced yet and would like to improve my work.
  9. Hi all People there! Shaney 23 presentz: This hot new Song: "Rich & Royal" with U.S. Feature Rapper K-Oz the Wizard and our singer Gina G. in the Chorous. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lH7hdYY4Naw&t=6s Feel invited to: Listen, Comment, Like and Subscribe the Channel.
  10. This is the third single off of my Debut Mixtape called 'Questions of Life' (Free Download here: http://www.abacusmc.co.uk/music) The song is called Sent to Win: If you like it feel free to subscribe to my YouTube, Follow my Soundcloud, and Like my Facebook Page, or maybe even Download the Mixtape!! Much Love Abacus
  11. I don't know how many people care but i thought id talk a bit about BANQUET and the references, and just the track in general. Excuse the grammar and punctuation, im typing this off my phone. So its a politically charged song, ive tried to take the 'eat what someone says' phrase literally. The track is about a group of politicians (im from Australia) at a banquet table eating an extravagant meal...us. The followers. Instead of questioning what we are told, we blindly follow, we are left in the dark by the powers. Maybe its paranoia but its just my opinion. So the politicians are eating us, a reference to them taking advantage of us. Also, it makes for a good final line 'and yet WE eat what THEY say'. Thats the bones of it, i could be more detailed but ill hold it there. Ive included some extra lyrics here that I may use in the song, not arranged yet. My cousin is going to feature on the track hopefully, if he can come up with some lines. Otherwise ill have to work some of these lines in. Thoughts? EXTRA LYRICS Listen in to the clatter of the cutlery and the lack of idle chatter, they get straight to business round here, no time for banter Candle light dancing over sallow faces, appearances always more evil in the dark with a light shone beneath it Appetiser completed, out comes the main course, the main corpse, they say the meat tastes best when it comes from an oblivious host Comparable to lamb I suppose Giants to the gnomes, putrid sound of marrow been sucked from bones I got my invite in the post the other day, I didn't go, a party without Jane Tyrrell isn't worth going to Laughter at the party is more shallow than Chris Hemsworths emotions, anyone who'd date Miley Cyrus deserves that roast And so it goes, I'm sure the saying is work to the grave and keep your head buried in the earth There's a price you pay for asking questions, ask Juanita Nelson Let's face it, we all know she was skinned alive, dismembered and stuffed in plastic bags, distributed worldwide With that in mind, they hit the media with smiles, claim that we're equals but to them we live in the shadows of animals The politicians of the banquet table, their main course devoured, morsels of meat stuck between teeth ten times the size of ours As the sun sets a bad moon rises, our existence pitiful in the eyes of our powers A glass clings and a toast is raised dedicated to the declining state of the individuality of the human race Claim to fame, painted grins like clowns and just as haunting, taunting, daunting, recipe is unrelenting Welcome to the circus of freaks, they can't juggle, swallow swords or spit fire but they're masters of trickery Warlocks of the dark arts, magicians of cannibalism, Issei Sagawa, how can we fight when they won't let us compete against them? We're fighting a losing battle like me against the mainstream, commoners against the elite, like Narnia this cabinet was built on deceit Platters licked clean, reflections inhumane, fact is scarier than fiction, Freddie Krauger versus John Wayne Pause for a break in the action to play some party games, anybody up for a spot of follow the leader? Back to your seats and conversation continues, wiping clean mouths with napkins the size of beach towels The meeting is now so close to its close, impatience is setting in, desert is served to calm some of the tension Alright, I've been told you can't right a wrong but I can write a wrong and I'm proof you can't wrong a Wright, so maybe we stand a chance against these martyrs after all if we fight Where did our will go to survive? As they're feasting on our tender flesh, peeling our skin like potato jackets and taking all that we have Gathered at this banquet they have their discussion, there's no way we can pull the blinds away And yet we eat what they say? All i know is if you rachel one of their khoos you'll get AIDS Excuse that last line, Im hoping we are grown up enough to handle that kind of thing. So I just included some references and what they are, for interests sake but it also makes the lines make more sense. I might have missed some. ISSEI SAGAWA: He was a Japanese guy who killed and ate his victims. He got out of jail (or maybe even didnt get convicted, can't remember). Then he made it famous as a food critic in Asia. It is messed up. RACHELLING SOMEONES KHOO: Rachel Khoo is an English chef, she has a TV show. It just sounds kind of sexual so it might make the lyrics. I'm not about been a mainstream artist, underground all the way so some things I write might not be suitable for everyone. JOHN WAYNE GACY: Probably don't need to explain. JUANITA NELSON: A reporter in Australia who dug up too much on the government years and years ago. Think it was Sydney. She disappeared and to this day her body hasn't been found. JANE TYRRELL: Just a great Australian singer. I reference her a lot in my tracks. But thats what rap is all about. THE WATCHER: In America this house got sold then the new owners got anonymous letters saying the house was watched and 'new blood was requested' and weird shit like that. Its a really interesting story, the address was 657 Boulevard and the new owners are currently in court over the matter. Hope I didn't miss any or bore you all. Cheers for reading, big ups and hope to hear from you!
  12. Hey guys its my first time posting and so far this seems like cool community id love if you guys could check/critique/comment on my two songs pls THX IN ADVANCE <3
  14. Dawk


    I'm somewhat new to serious song writing, but I have tough skin. PLEASE rip into me I want to get better Woke up this morning and looked in the mirror Everything morbid, foggy image no clearer Thought about you yesterday wished you were nearer So close to crying and i don't know what I'm crying for If today was my last day I'm not sure who I'd be dying for Since you rejected been trying to put up a fort but i cant afford to lie no more So i write my wrongs in these song Breaks my heart it feels already broken I'm jumping out of every life boat into every ocean Cause I don't feel warm in the boat And i cant feel safe on the coast And the ocean holds promise That one day it won't be freezing cold I'm choking on this life I'm losing my hold //Chorus They said I cant miss what I never had 'said it couldnt be that bad They called crazy laughed in my face And here my shattered pride lays //Verse 2 I had it in the bag I chocked I let it back To were I used to be reminiscing and dissing To forget that Im missing You in every picture I see And everything that I breathe Reminds me That there will be no memories Of what never could be Cause you never even left me You just said no Left me to never glow An ever going never knowing Were Im going next Cause I dont know whats up for me on this quest //Chorus //Verse 3 Dont worry about me Im here in my dreams No one hears my screams No one cares it seems Shut the door to everyone else Cause it aint worth another spell Of rejection that comes with the confidence Coinciding with me trying to be confident So i sit here dreaming Scheming screaming Not sure whats real and whats in my head Fuck, is there even a difference That deep shit swirling round in my brain Another round down I feel the burning pain Another round I get by a train And now you write me off as I'm insane //Chorus 2x