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  1. Deeptrope

    Gravity

    Please don't view me differently after this one, like so many others(NOT literary people). Several years ago, my girlfriend's son(22 at time) was living with us and had a nervous breakdown. Long story short, I tried to put myself in his VERY unsettled shoes when I wrote this one. Hopefully, artistic types won't get hung up on the mood, rather embrace it. After all, isn't that what this is all about? Enjoy? In Memory of: Lance Broussard © 2018 John Heavern 13 S-12/9/12, Gravity The weight of the world is enveloping me, darkness polluting tomorrows I see. Tightening chains, buckling brain, gravity binds at incredible speed. Ch) Pressures abound, apathy found, emptiness bleeds into sorrows I drown. Gravity preys, clarity fades, spiraling down a malevolent maze. Gravity passing a tolerant phase, gaining momentum in worrisome ways. Erratic impressions bury my soul, sinking me deeper, devoid of control. Crumbling care, sunken despair, gravity waits to devour me whole. Ch) Pressures abound, apathy found, emptiness bleeds into sorrows I drown. Gravity preys, clarity fades, spiraling down a malevolent maze. Gravity pulling me into the haze, spinning me ´round with my future ablaze. Conflicting emotions filling my plate, heart becomes heavy, depressions inflate. Mentally mobbed, reasoning robbed, gravity swelling in thoughts I create. Br) Nothing to say, nothing to do, gravity altering practical view. Dreams I envisioned falling from grace, forces of gravity hollow my face. Ch) Pressures abound, apathy found, emptiness bleeds into sorrows I drown. Gravity preys, clarity fades, spiraling down a malevolent maze. Gravity winning the game that it plays, forcing me down as my sanity strays.
  2. Updated: When The Ravens Call V1 There’s a murder of crows Outside my door Waiting for judgment day Think I’ll stay inside Wait for night Maybe they’ll fly away V2 There’s plenty of omens And I’m hoping That it won’t be so bad But things are bleak I’m feeling the heat We may all be damned Ch When the ravens call, will there be anyone to hear? Wings of darkness overhead, all light disappears Will we understand anything at all? Welcome to the land of death when the ravens call V3 A mountain explodes at night No place to hide We’re squatters on the land Drowned by rain From a hurricane It’s could be the end of ‘man’ Ch Br Wish I was the one flying away On a crow’s black wings Wish I was somewhere else Away from all the dark things Will I cry out loud or walk proud As I enter the dark unknown Plead for mercy, a blind journey To an uncaring heart of stone Ch ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I've cranked out a few lyrics in the last couple of weeks, but nothing that really inspires me well enough to hammer out a finished tune - I play around with them, then drop them on the table. This might be another. V1 There’s a murder of crows Outside my door Waiting for judgment day Think I’ll stay inside Wait for night Maybe they’ll fly away V2 There’s been plenty of omens And I’m hoping That it won’t be quite so bad But things are getting bleak We’re feeling the heat We may very well all be damned Ch When the ravens call, will there be anyone to hear? Wings of darkness overhead, all light disappears Will we understand anything at all? Welcome to the land of death when the ravens call V3 A mountain explodes at night Earth showing its might We’re only squatters on the land Swept away by a hurricane Drowned by rain It’s the end of what’s called ‘man’ Ch Br The clouds are sinking low Dampness from the mist What will you cry out When your name is called out from the list Will you walk proudly Into the dark unknown Or whimper and plead for mercy To the uncaring heart made of stone? Ch
  3. Hey guys! I made a song called Racing The Lions. The metaphor of ‘the lions’ are meant to be impossible things you want to become. They are strong, beautiful, and fast; a competitor you can’t keep up with. It's about young people, who are unhappy with themselves, striving to become something unachievable by nature. I've put the song here: https://www.triplejunearthed.com/artist/tuva-finser%C3%A5s I've gotten some reviews, but they are not saying much specific things, some specific feedback would be much appriciated so I can get better. Thank you :)
  4. chance gonzales

    all alone

    ALL ALONE(anti government) Pulled to the end^ by strain and desire Fed to the wolves all alone^ Make me believe^ ill climb up higher Letting the way set the tone^ Finding in me^ a way to expire Let this foul lie be exposed^ Free me^ from the chains and the fire Free me^ to call you liar Left me to fend for myself Come and see^ the people with power Growing up quick^ thorned like a flower Spreading so thin^ our hearts have run sour This is your fault^ all alone^ Setting us up^ for success just to fall To blind to see^ while were building our walls Pull back the curtain^ find you with no balls Hiding in the shadows^ to make all the calls Leave us be^ were fine monotone Youll always know this is your fault alone Planning to enslave us, a thought of your own Raping our people and burning our homes War wages on^ serving your dark desire Risking our lives^ so that you can retire Polluting our lands^ with greed and black metals Build on your mask^ while the dust settles Our great men die^ you pay us with money Thinking to yourself^ now isn’t that funny Grow young and die, eating your treated honey Though we chose it ourselves, this is sick irony Collect up you cash^ run off and get married Itll keep your warm, once you find yourself buried Free me^ from the chains and the fire Free me^ to call you liar Left me to fend for myself Come and see^ the people with power Growing up quick^ thorned like a flower Spreading so thin^ our hearts have run sour This is your fault^ all alone^
  5. Please leave me some feedback on my song, all feedback is welcomed. Thank You, have a nice day.
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