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    World of a child

    Iv'e tweaked it a little and added a chorus you comments are much appreciated All the best Mike World of a child (Intro) Everything is adventure in a child’s magic world A special place to go for every boy and girl See their faces change when they step into their dreams Nothing is ruled out of their wonderland schemes (1) In the mind of a child, play's an everyday thing Depends on whatever imaginings they bring Grown ups aren't really part of the deal Kids know we don't see their fantasy is real (2) They’re chatting away with an invisible friend Or flying round and round in games of pretend The girl is a princess, the boy is a knight, And fiery dragons are out there to fight Ch The world of a child, Is fun, free and wild There's nothing as magic As the world of a child (3) A cook pot is a fortress, clothes pegs are the folk Bed sheets are a tent, the bath towel's a cloak They drive a cardboard box car, camp in a duvet den These games are played over, and over again. Ch The world of a child, Is fun, free and wild There's nothing as magic As the world of a child (Br) Where fantasy is real as their dreams come true Waterfall jewels crash down mountains of hue Fairies and unicorns play round the next bend Treasure's lie hidden at every rainbows end Ch The world of a child, Is fun, free and wild There's nothing as magic As the world of a child (Finale) One day they change and leave their old teddy bear Wear trendy clothes and restyle their hair They're growing up OK but a part of them has died Gone forever is the magical world of a child.
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    World of a child

    Big thanks to Mick, Joe, and Barny good points you make easy fixes cheers All the best Mike
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    Is there a North Korean deal

    It seems to me that we forget that all politicians ultimately piss in the same pot, Prime example, all of Corbyn’s political life he has been anti E U. And as soon has gets a real chance of getting out, he jumps ship! Like the media they are paid liars, run by the men in grey or equivalents, who dance to the tune of the oligarchs and all we do do is soak up their bullshit and turn on each other, which is what they want, Divide And Rule, Meanwhile our planet is dying and most people are ether unaware or don’t give a fuck! We are' I’m sure all caring passionate humans who have strong opinions which is great, Don't sink to the level of the paid liars, by fighting ammongst ourselves Mike Clements
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    World of a child

    Thank you - S,B. S,O,C. Mick, and 9th. For your wisdom, time and effort, Your comments are much appreciated and will be reflected in my rewrite All the best Mike
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    Toys were us

    Hi Mick Very funny and clever lyrics I look forward to hearing the song, A little side story In the midlands UK there is a industrial area called- the Black Country, they have there own slang like yow for you and dow for don't, Toys Are Us was known as Toys Am We All the Best Mike
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    Blonde joke

    Why didn't the blonde call 911, she couldn't find the 11
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    May Lyric Contest

    Surprising as it seems Muse dosen't seem to like IPad for some reason I have had posting problems in the past I empathise with any one that as had similar troubles Thank you Os for being so understanding all the best Mike
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    Alexa

    Hi Barnyboy I had this in a top position in the comp thought it would do much better by far the cleverest lyric you have some good crits, I can't add much more than what’s been said but I loved the song all the best Mike
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    Gypsy Heart

    Hello No 9 This song has fine potential and you have had two of the best of Muses critics Look over your song it don't get a great deal better than that You song lyric needs tweaking that’s all All the best Mike
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    What is 'Average'?

    As there are several averages and ways of working them out and applying them, in these instances are we to take average as being another word for = OK?
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    May Lyric Contest

    Thanks for your hard work on competition Os does this now mean that the final voting date on these comps can be extended without penalty? i hope so Some really good lyrics this month well done all particually Paul's which was my top pick all the best Mike
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    The Truth Comes Stumbling In

    Hi Paul A great lyric really, really good you had my top vote for this, it was my number one for sure I wish I had written it well done All the best Mike
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    I remember Daddy

    Hi Kuya A nice song lyric you have here, better than some I’ve seen in the lyric comps A couple of suggestions for your consideration Use or lose I remember Daddy He'd come home from work so late Mama said he did that To keep food upon our plates I would bring his slippers newspapers and his pipe I would try to pull his shoes off They were always on so tight Sssshhh my mama told me As I climbed up in his lap Sssshhh and be real quiet While your Daddy takes a nap ------------ I remember Daddy I would sometimes make him mad (sometimes he'd act so sad) Mama said he saw things In the war that were real bad I would bring his slippers But some days I'd get so scared Loud noises gave him flashbacks No one close was ever spared Sssshhh my mama told me As I sat there in his lap Sssshhh and be real quiet While your Daddy takes a nap ------------------- I remember Daddy He died working late one night Mama cried all winter I told her we'd be alright I would bring his slippers I was just a little kid He never said I love you But I always thought he did Sssshhh my mama told me As I lay there in his lap Sssshhh and be real quiet While your Daddy takes a nap --------- (slower) I remember Daddy I can understand him (more) I'm older than he was then (Thank god I never saw his war) All the best Mike
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    Wishes

    Please give this your consideration Wishes Of Love (Intro) There may be many miles between us Although it doesn't seem that way When we are cherishing each other Sharing troubles every day (1) If one of us is needing help There is never cause for fear It's as if we're not alone The other one is always near (Ch) Like Guardian angels embracing one another Blessings span the distance we're apart When we're befriending, we are sending Wishes of love, from our hearts (2) Life can sometimes be a struggle And problems drag us down If one of us should stumble The other lifts us off the ground (Ch) Like Guardian angels embracing one another Blessings span the distance we're apart When we're befriending, we are sending Wishes of love, from our hearts (Br) Having intuition, interacting as we do We experience what our partner's going through Knowing what the other is in most need of. Sending selfless thoughts of endless love (Ch) Like guardian angels embracing one another Blessings span the miles we are apart When we're befriending, we are sending Wishes of love, from our hearts (Finale) Some people say that we're enchanted Sceptics shake their heads and laugh Yet we both know our devotions are true When we're connecting, we are projecting Wishes of love from our hearts
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    Wishes

    Hi Mick And thanks for your crits I am in the middle of a rewrite So I take in your comments here thanks again for your interest All the best Mike
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    Wishes

    Hi Kuya Thanks for reviewing and I take your points that you point out All the best mike
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    Wishes

    Thank you Spanish Buda and Barnyboy I take on board your advice thanks for your time and effort All the best Mike
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    Sin city

    Hi Mick I think you don't need the because
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    Is it a rip

    Hi folks Song - the first few bars of the song when the children are asleep ect Sound similar to part of the tune from Peter and the Wolfe.? if you know any other examples please post all the best Mike
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    Heard You Leaving REVISION 3

    Hi Donna a great lyric held my interest throughout mabe a change to last bridge line - except when i was awake use or lose mike
  21. Hi all i find it hard sometimes to write a song, having the song idea is always difficult, as well as trying to make the song lyric something fresh and interesting. i wonder if others have problems too, and what do they do to get around them all the best Mike
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    Sock in Your Bed

    Hi ty I thought the rhyme was good and would suit as a rap good story line quite comic Good idea for a song, a bit like the rap - it wasn't me, great all round all the best Mike
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    In These Golden Days

    Hi Jonie by enlarge I like the lyric. There are a few small nits that will iron out when it's recorded so over all a good write, I would have liked some switch or twist that would throw a lift into the song lyric maybe something will come as it always seems to. all the best Mike
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    My issue with melody writing

    A few years ago I was discussing song writing with a classical pianist, they told me that when they first became interested in music they used to compose their own tunes and songs. But the further up the ladder they travelled the less this occoured untill she now writes nothing of her own. She plays all her music by the reading the dots, The dots killed off her creativity, maybe who knows Mike
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    Collaboration Contest Results - April 2018

    Wow some great songs generated in this collaboration, it would make a great cd, better than you see elsewhere for sale. congratulations winners, which we all are really, We have songs that we didn’t have before A great competition Alastair thanks for all your hard work and encouragement. I suppose I owe you a drink when I see you next, I look forward to that, all the best mike
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