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About Tex

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    Contributing Muse
  • Birthday 09/08/1961

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  • Location
    Arkansas

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  • Lyricist, Composer or Both?
    little of both
  • Musical Influences?
    Country
  1. Hey Derek. Sorry to have taken a zillion years to get back to you on Like The Fool I Was. I've been so busy with projects that I havn't been on the forum in a couple months. Thanks for the great revision in the chorus. Of course, that's much better....Ooh what a fool I was.

     

    Nice to hear from you....hope you are feeling well....and have a great holiday season!

  2. Hay Joey, I know that this isn't much but I'd think about changing the last line of your chorus to (Oh, what a fool I was) you wouldn't have to change the title at all........... Tex
  3. Very Good Joey................I like this a lot...............
  4. When I'm With You

    Hi Ninja, I've got one by the same title..............I'm one that uses cliches as well.............guess I don't know what is cliche and what isn't..............when I first posted this I got bashed as well but I went ahead and stuck with what I had...............here it is......... https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11225481
  5. Disappearing Dirt Roads

    I think James beat me to it...........but I also think it should be (Dirt road dust) smoke just doesn't fit............ This time of the year as we're cutting rice there is dust from dirt roads everywhere....... Tex
  6. Somewhere(demo)

    I agree with the others.......nice demo Good Luck Tex
  7. Jokes

    Well that's the thing eh, there are no new jokes, new tellers, new listeners, but no new jokes. "I fell off my dinosaur when I heard that one." Probably has more validation then most folks realise, for instance. "What do you call 40 dead (fill in current disparaged group)_______ at the bottom of the sea ? A start. Anyways. A horse and a chicken are playing in a meadow. The horse falls into a mud hole and is sinking. He calls to the chicken to go and get the farmer to help pull him out to safety. The chicken runs to the farm but the farmer can't be found. So he drives the farmer's BMW back to the mud hole and ties some rope around the bumper. He then throws the other end of the rope to his friend, the horse, and drives the car forward saving him from sinking! A few days later, the chicken and horse were playing in the meadow again and the chicken fell into the mud hole. The chicken yelled to the horse to go and get some help from the farmer. The horse said, "I think I can stand over the hole!" So he stretched over the width of the hole and said, "Grab for my penis and pull yourself up." And the chicken did and pulled himself to safety. Moral of the Story: If you're hung like a horse, you don't need a BMW to pick up chicks. Always wondered why I didn't like BMW's................guess I know why now..............
  8. Hi Sean, I'd love to give some feedback but my computer just won't let me listen to soundcloud............but I will say this much it's always better if you post the lyrics with your post........ Good Luck Tex
  9. Wouldn"t End This Way

    Thanks Esa...........made a bit of a change there.........
  10. Slow rain

    Hi Esa, The one thing that sticks out to me right off is the title.........most of the time it's the hook........I would say here it's (Feel My Love).......maybe that's just me though....... Good Luck Tex
  11. Wouldn"t End This Way

    I've got this as 1st vr, ch, 2nd vr, ch, Instrumental. bridge, ch and tag...........just a thought ....what if I did this as 1st vr, 2nd vr, ch, instrumental, bridge, and then two ch's.........would it be getting too deep into the song before getting to the hook?
  12. Wouldn"t End This Way

    Thanks Big Jack, Glad you took the time to read this. Tex
  13. I posted the lyric to this a week or two back........told Joey M that I had sent the lyric to a girl from my past and she wanted to hear this one........He said he did too....so here it is guys....... http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13393347 Someone Here Still Loves You (Spoken) Darling, though we parted ways, many years ago My heart, never found a way, to let you go (Sing) So Darling When your smile's, been turned upside down And you friends are nowhere to be found When there's no one, standing by your side And your ship, has sailed on the morning tide When you feel, you can't trust anyone again And you ask, will this bad luck ever end Darling.....don't be blue Someone here, still loves you Maybe it's crazy, but it's true Someone here, still loves you (sing) We can never go back, it's been said many times But Darling, I never left, in my heart and my mind So Darling When you start thinking life's unfair And your pockets, seem to be so bare When you're hoping, he'll come through But he breaks your heart, not thinking of you And when the hurt, won't let you sleep, at night As you're needing, someone to hold you tight Darling.....don't be blue Someone here, still loves you Maybe it's crazy, but it's true Someone here, still loves you (spoken) Darling, someday, sometime, somewhere down the line When someone here, happens to cross your mind (sing) Darling.....don't be blue Someone here, still loves you Maybe it's crazy, but it's true Someone here, still loves you (spoken) Yes....Someone here (sing) Still.....Loves.....You
  14. Wouldn"t End This Way

    Thanks Paul, Maybe Sweethart or Honey in the ver's and bridge and keep Darling in the cr...... As far as shouldn't or wouldn't goes.....I'm thinking if he could write a new ending it wouldn't end this way.........might just be me........ Thanks Again Tex
  15. Wouldn"t End This Way

    Thanks LB.........Sorry I don't know your name
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