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    Lyric/Poetry writing, travel, jogging, walking, swimming, nature & the outdoors, taking care of Jet the cat, helping my mom, reading, getting away from the rat race going on around me.

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    Lyricist who often has a melody in mind when writing.

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  1. Racist

    I don't think I could have said it better myself. Thank you very much, Tongue-tied. I'll keep.
  2. Racist

    Hi, Patty Re-read it again and see what you come up with. Thanks for commenting
  3. Racist

    No, there's no isolation. Category is fine. Thanks for offering your suggestions.
  4. Racist

    No offense to you Neal but I hate censorship.
  5. Racist

    Hi, Songwolfe: Never heard of the tune above prior to you posting it here. Good tune but nothing other than my own thoughts about what I see going on around me influenced this one. Must admit, I found your dissection of each line as this or that to be amusing. Thanks for expressing your thoughts and commenting.
  6. Racist

    Yes, I could picture this as rap. Don't know about old school though. Thanks Moso for sharing your thoughts.
  7. Racist

    Paul, Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
  8. Racist

    Try singing it then. Thanks for commenting, Mike.
  9. Racist

    Thanks Barney
  10. Racist

    Thanks for sharing your thoughts and commenting, Ashfi. Appreciate it.
  11. Forever journey is my destiny

    Again, another write with some very good ideas. This one (in my observation) repeats pretty much the same thing with different ways of saying it. If life is a forever journey or an endless journey then let the journey begin. Take us for a ride down the point of view's road in greater detail. I like the attitude which comes across as carefree, laid back. There is so much pressure and emphasis placed on people these days that the attitude that says fuck it, I'm going to do what I want, peacefully, calmly, no worries, smoothly enjoying myself and not losing oneself in the societal vacuum that's out there is right up my alley. I guess this could be a blues tune though I wasn't particularly focused on that aspect of the write. I like blues but perhaps others can help you with this more if blues in the intended genre.
  12. Racist

    Comment on the lyric only Modertor
  13. Love In Peace

    While Barney's comments are good I do like what you've now got but question whether in this case a bridge is necessary at all. Not sure you need one. Love your picture (above) by the way. Heehee
  14. Racist

    It's been a while since I've posted something here in feedback. I wrote this a year ago but have played around with lines and altered things over the course of the past year. I'm looking for line suggestions that could make this stronger but I am also open to constructive comments on the material. I realize the content contains a number of different issues of the day, but I am comfortable having more than one issue at hand, but if that is a problem then by all means let me know why. What motivated me to write this is the constant attention I see given to the use of the word "Racist" mainly on TV among the media, which has turned me off to the point where I don't watch much in the way of any television news. Again, line or word suggestions are the goal and focus for me but I am open to and interested to get a reaction to the content of what I wrote because as the writer it may come across or project one way to me and come across quite differently to someone else. Please weigh in. Oh and if this were to be sung I can't imagine too many genres that could or would encompass it. Rap? Hmm Lines may be too short. Hip Hop? Anyway............Here it is. Have at it folks. Racist (Revised - 2nd posting) Original is below this. CHANGES ARE IN PURPLE. If you don't believe the fake news Then you can't be for what is right You'll be placed in a category Along with the other whites Your education must be lacking Your mind stuck in the past tense And to firmly go against the grain May be viewed as a capital offense You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist To the herd You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist That's the word So you think all lives should matter Immigration's out of control Blacks are as bigoted as the whites Third world countries are shitholes The cops are described as vicious pigs Statues should remain intact The nation is losing its culture And if you speak out you will be attacked You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist To the herd You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist That's the word Anyone who questions or challenges the strategic plan set on a course Is a threat to the media hype that exploits with all its force You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist To the herd You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist That's the word Carl B © 2017 Racist (Original post) If you don't believe as some do Then you can't be for what is right You'll be placed in a category And of course you must be white Your education must be lacking Your mind stuck in the past tense But to firmly go against the grain May be viewed as a capital offense You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist To the herd You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist That's the word So you think all lives should matter Immigration's out of control Blacks are as bigoted as the whites Third world countries are shitholes Cops are being painted as bad guys Statues should remain intact The nation is losing its culture And if you speak out you could be attacked You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist To the herd You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist That's the word Anyone who questions or challenges the strategic plan set on a course Is a threat to the media hype that exploits with all its force You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist To the herd You're a racist You're a racist You're a racist That's the word Carl B © 2017
  15. The last of Us

    Honestly, I think it's pretty good. Words are fairly generic but not a problem. I can hear a similar beat and or musical accompaniment (in my head re: the lyric) to the tune on the link above and I can hear and visualize an edgy defiance in the vocal delivery as well in your lyric. Please share the next stage of development on this one with us. Off to a good start. Cheers
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