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cindyrella

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cindyrella last won the day on May 17

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About cindyrella

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    the Beatles, Simon and Garfunkle, Carole King, James Taylor, Alan Jackson, Martina McBride, Willie Nelson, The Eagles
  1. Pompous Ass (first rewrite)

    Thanks! Been crazy busy and my hubby's been sick so I haven't gotten back on here lately.
  2. Pompous Ass (first rewrite)

    Thanks all! I see what you mean about the different mix of my words. I will work on it some more (as I can since I am also doing 50/90:))
  3. La da dee

    I have trouble as well on understanding the verses. I do like the feel of it and the pre chorus especially.
  4. Pompous Ass (first rewrite)

    I changed quite a few things and then just got stuck. How is this one? Pompous Ass © 2017 indy Prince Always so arrogant Ego out of hand Why’d I even bother To try and understand? Always so self important Nothing that you wouldn’t say I wish now that’d I let you Up and fade away Chorus Cause stupid I don’t need to know Latin To appreciate a rose And honey I don’t need to know Chaucer To write some pretty prose Yeah jerk, I'll be fine Though you think you have more class I'm so tired of all your uppity ways You f*cking pompous ass! Always so egotistic Blowin’ your own horn I wish I’d not wasted my time Listening to your scorn I'll find some normal guy Who'll love me as I am So get lost you snobby pig I no longer give a damn Repeat Chorus
  5. Pompous Ass

    Thanks everyone! Great ideas and I want some more punch. I 'll rewrite it.
  6. SKIN DEEP

    Pretty nice throughout! I too am not crazy about the Ooh La La but that might change with hearing it.
  7. Pompous Ass

    An older one I dug out and changed quite a few things. I want it to have lots of attitude-does it have enough? Pompous Ass © 2017 indy Prince Always so arrogant Ego out of hand Why’d I even bother To try and understand? Always so self important Nothing that you wouldn’t say I wish now that’d I let you Up and fade away Chorus Cause baby I don’t need to know Latin To appreciate a rose And baby I don’t need to know Chaucer To write a pretty prose Yeah baby, I ain’t fragile So don’t treat me like I’m glass I’m tired of you talking down to me You prideful pompous ass! Always so egotistic Blowin’ your own horn I wish I’d not wasted my time Listening to your scorn Always so conceited The way you love to boast I wish I’d never known you But baby now you’re toast Repeat Chorus
  8. I Wanna Grow old with You

    I really like this! Great images in that pre chorus. It is romantic without being overly sappy. Nice one.
  9. Drive-Thru Baby

    Thanks for your comments and ideas. I think making it funnier would really make it relatable. Let me think on this.
  10. One love manchester

    I like the honesty it this. I do think maybe a bit of slower pace might work a bit better.
  11. I wrote this little lyric and a Canadian friend did the music and vocals with his sweet kids. It makes me smile! http://fawm.org/songs/70365/ I Love Animals (And they love me) © 2017 Cindy Prince I love to talk to animals And I'm sure they can tell That I like them just as they are All kinds of animals Like me as well From fish to pretty jaguars Chorus Oh, I love animals (and they love me) From turtles in ponds and monkeys in a tree I love to see them best when they are running free Oh, I love animals (and they love me) Bridge Which are my favorites? It's hard to decide I even love bugs And big birds that glide Animals out in Africa Like lions in a pride So which are my favorites? Couldn't do it if I tried Repeat chorus
  12. No Middle Ground

    I like the short but powerful lines Paul. It reminds me of a song I wrote called Labels. I do agree that the bridge could be improved.
  13. Drive-Thru Baby

    Thanks everyone! Great ideas for making this one shine. I do like the sugar high and the bridge does need work. I'll be looking closer at these great ideas.
  14. Drive-Thru Baby

    Thanks! Yes, I want it to be clear and fun too.
  15. Drive-Thru Baby

    I like the idea but it isn't very smooth. Ideas? Drive-Thru Baby © 2017 Cindy Prince Every day I come back Maybe it's those sparkling blue eyes Or maybe the way you say “Only a Coke, or just fries?” My heart starts to race I have to swallow to say “Just a Coke this time” Repeated four times a day Chorus Cause you’re a drive-thru baby You take my order You take my heart Yeah, you’re a drive-thru baby I want to love you But how do I start? I ask how you are But I want to ask you out Just when I get up the nerve I again start to doubt Why is this so hard? Around you I become shy I just look sheepish Then timidly wave goodbye Repeat chorus Bridge I finally asked for a date and it will be no fast-food chain Maybe all of my drive-thrus haven’t been all in vain Last chorus Cause you’re a drive-thru baby You take my order You take my heart Yeah, you’re a drive-thru baby I want to love you Maybe this is the start
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