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About steve macneil

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    ottawa ontario

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  1. steve macneil

    Best Mates

    I was extremeal emotional on the drive down Not knowing what to expect I couldn't stop thinking about us And when we first met Many years have passed sience then Give or take a memorie Now it's time to pay a visit Even though I know I'm late Best mates were what we were Best mates me and you And best mates we'll always be Best mates you and me
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    Tonight I gonna tell her

    I agree the last line is not good Go lazy and just wanted to end it It's country I have no problem singing it and my guitar doesn't complain Thank you for your good advice steve
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    Tonight I gonna tell her

    Tonight I'm gonna tell her V1 How much I don't love her But it will be the biggest lie I ever tell I know she woun't beleive me V2 Cus she's got me wrapped around her finger And I can't convince my heart She's only playing games My heart is just her play toy CHOURS Just a spin thing she wings up And I dance to her music And I don't miss a note Tonight I'm gonna tell her V3 I wount take it anymore But it's gonna a be the biggest lie I ever tell Because she got my heart wrapped around her finger v4 Like a fly in her web But tonight I'm gonna tell her How much I really love her
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    Who Loves You? updated 08/03/2018

    Who Loves You? I'd like to ask your heart to testify No need to swear her in - she doesn't lie I only have one question I hope she doesn't mind.. Who loves you? Who loves you? Who loves you? I do Love's just a game so they say Is that the way you really feel I need to hear it from your heart You love me like I love you
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    Home

    Hi Anna I like it but it is a little to wordy I've been running away from myself Fighting hard to win the fight Hiding from time. trying to stay hidden Searching for home, and where to find it When I looked into your eyes What was hidden came alive My sky without stars Became brighter then fire Just from the look in your eyes
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    I feel It Because I don't

    I feel it because I don't V1 And that's what hurts the most I don't feel what we had I just feel sad Somewhere in between CHORUS Loving and losing I'd like to hold you again But it wouldn't feel the same Feeling sorry wouldn't be enough Bridge Love would never stand for that Loving out of pity Would only make it worse When it's gone it's gone Time to move on That's just the way it is I feel it because I don't V2 I want to but I can't Don't ask me to explain What good would that do I feel it because I don't And that's what hurts the most
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    I Feel It Because I Don't

    Took you advice on the bridge like your idea on the bridge I revised it Thanks' leaky Feeling sorry wouldn't be enough Bridge Love would never stand for that Loving out of pity Would only make it worse When it's gone it's gone Time to move on That's just the way it is I feel it because I don't V2 I want to but I can't Don't ask me to explain What good would that do
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    I Feel It Because I Don't

    Hi Paddy Glad you liked the hook you got me back at it I posting a revise Thank's
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    I Feel It Because I Don't

    I feel it because I don't V1 That's what hurts the most I don't feel what we had I just feel sad Somewhere in between CHORUS Loving and losing I like to hold you again But it wouldn't be the same I feel it because I don't BRIDGE Feeling sorry is not enough Love wouldn't never stand for that Loving you out of pity I feel it because I don't V2 I want to but I can't Don't ask me why The feeling died Somewhere in between CHORUS Loving and losing I want to hold you again But it wouldn't feel the same I feel it because I don't V3 Let's leave it at that Some time's it can't be explained It's just the way thing's go sometime
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    When Do's The Next Train Leave

    Is their a train leaving for nowhere Or is their a train leaving for anywhere Theirs's always a train leaving for somewhere? Why ask Is their a train leaving for nowhere The guy doesn't really want to leave One of has to be right Is their a train leaving for somewhere Or is their a train leaving for nowhere? Happy hunting steve
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    Voices Inside Myself

    (chorus) Voices inside of me scream, I’m not good enough on the edge of a cliff, getting ready to fall When life got too hard and darkness called It wasn't much of a choiceTo live or dieSo I ended it all
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    Voices Inside Myself

    They’re your feelings so can’t change much I just thought the rhyme in the first verse was off so I gave a suggestion. But over all very melancholy which is what you are after (chorus) Voices inside of me scream, I’m not good enough on the edge of a cliff,getting readdy to fall When life got too hard and darkness called It wasen't much of a choice To live or die So I ended my life life
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    Constant Friend (or The Blues)

    When I was born they tell me it stormed When i was six my daddy died But i stayed strong I said to myself it won't last long It's just a blue thing When I was a kid way back in school I got in trouble for breaking the rules And I said to myself it won't last long It's just a blue thing
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    There's Nothing Sweeter Than A Dream

    Hi Ashley Thank you, very good advice
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    There's Nothing Sweeter Than A Dream

    I totally agree with you Thank you steve
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