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About steve macneil

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  1. steve macneil

    I Feel It Because I Don't

    I feel it because I don't V1 That's what hurts the most I don't feel what we had I just feel sad Somewhere in between CHORUS Loving and losing I like to hold you again But it wouldn't be the same I feel it because I don't BRIDGE Feeling sorry is not enough Love wouldn't never stand for that Loving you out of pity I feel it because I don't V2 I want to but I can't Don't ask me why The feeling died Somewhere in between CHORUS Loving and losing I want to hold you again But it wouldn't feel the same I feel it because I don't V3 Let's leave it at that Some time's it can't be explained It's just the way thing's go sometime
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    When Do's The Next Train Leave

    Is their a train leaving for nowhere Or is their a train leaving for anywhere Theirs's always a train leaving for somewhere? Why ask Is their a train leaving for nowhere The guy doesn't really want to leave One of has to be right Is their a train leaving for somewhere Or is their a train leaving for nowhere? Happy hunting steve
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    Voices Inside Myself

    (chorus) Voices inside of me scream, I’m not good enough on the edge of a cliff, getting ready to fall When life got too hard and darkness called It wasn't much of a choiceTo live or dieSo I ended it all
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    Voices Inside Myself

    They’re your feelings so can’t change much I just thought the rhyme in the first verse was off so I gave a suggestion. But over all very melancholy which is what you are after (chorus) Voices inside of me scream, I’m not good enough on the edge of a cliff,getting readdy to fall When life got too hard and darkness called It wasen't much of a choice To live or die So I ended my life life
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    Constant Friend (or The Blues)

    When I was born they tell me it stormed When i was six my daddy died But i stayed strong I said to myself it won't last long It's just a blue thing When I was a kid way back in school I got in trouble for breaking the rules And I said to myself it won't last long It's just a blue thing
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    There's Nothing Sweeter Than A Dream

    Hi Ashley Thank you, very good advice
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    There's Nothing Sweeter Than A Dream

    I totally agree with you Thank you steve
  8. steve macneil

    Forget

    Bridge Forget all the pain And all the hurt Forget the memories That bring back too much Forget all the loss Forget what was but remember these words I loved you Forget the memories That bring back too much What a great line Title I loved you and write the verses to match the bridge keep or sweep
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    Gone Gone Gone

    It' early morning I can hear a rooster crow Think its time for me to leave To be gone gone gone Time for me to say goodbye Because I can't take any more I'm gone gone gone I tried to make it work, but it didn't work out I never said I love you, but neither did you I never made no promises Cuz I'm not good at that Now I'm gone gone gone
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    You can't, I can't (edited 06/13/18)

    You can't, I can't I saw you from across the room I try my best to be cool The look of your eyes, played on my mind And I became hipnopzined This is so crazy I feel like a fool I not out for a fling, I’m a go by the rules girl I want you to kiss me and say you love me, I want to melt in your arms But you can’t and I can’t Because it would be wrong You're married and so am I You can't, I can't You're married to Mary I'm married to John
  11. There's nothing sweeter than a dream V1 Especially when I'm dreaming, about you Now all I have to do, is make it come true But that will depend mostly on you. There's nothing sweeter than a dream V2 I hope you feel the same, if you don't It's time for me to cry, and say goodbye, too There's nothing sweeter than a dream. Please please please say you feel the heat CHORUS Please, please, please say you feel the beat Your heart and my heart on fire Beating away, to the dream of love. There's nothing sweeter than a dream Bridge Don't stop me from dreaming Make the dream be true Nothing else will do. There's nothing sweeter than a dream V3 Especially when I'm dreaming, about you Now all I have to do, is make it come true Or say goodbye to love and hello to the blues
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    Wishful Thinking Is For Fools

    Wishful thinking is for fools And I've been the biggest one of all I took her for granted How stupid was that And now I think wishful thinking Will win her back how crazy is that Called her last night But she didn't call back ut!t
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    The Turd That Got Left Behind

    David Allen Coe would love it
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    When Do's The Next Train Leave

    When Do,s The Next Train Leave When do,s the next train leave for no where v1 Tell me station master what time it leaves I need to find a place any where from here To get away from the tears When do.s the next train leave chourse I need to get away far away Far away from here When do,s the next train leave When do.s the next train leave Bridge Did you say it already left? Guess I missed it again Maybe I just like the rain When do,s the next train leave for no where v2 And after it leaves will I still be here Or have I alreddy found no where On a train that never left When do,s the next train leave for no where I need to get away far away Far away from here When do,s the next train leave
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    Heard You Leaving REVISION 3

    Watched you leaving Heard the door close But as softly as you left I heard you tip-toe away Down the old verandah stairs I heard each step you took And the creaking of the wood Spoke louder than words
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