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Mr Distraction

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Mr Distraction last won the day on July 27

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About Mr Distraction

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    My own little world!
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    Love motorbikes!
    Martial Arts
    Enjoy cooking mainly Indian dishes and a couple of Chinese ones as well! Not great at it but usually edible lol!
    I love to write and I am always learning!

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    Lyricist
  • Musical Influences?
    Lots of stuff but love Deep Purple,I don't write like them but love the music! Brought up on it lol!

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  1. Mr Distraction

    Gravity

    Bravo bro! It is hard man! I wrote a heap of poems after my girl passed! And a lyric once I started writing them, it's on my blog and is way unstructured but it will never change! It is called The Smallest Things! No need to look just saying ok! πŸ‘Š Thanks for sharing πŸ‘Š
  2. Mr Distraction

    The world will never hear this song

    I like this and I am thinking on some parts and will try to offer ideas as they come! 2) A song that shows a fool Blinded by his vanity This writer tells himself....tells himself he's so/ is cool/it is cool... along those lines? It's coming on so well His friends could never fail To love this telling tale And with the chorus singing true The way he wants it to He's sure he's got a hit Bailey
  3. Mr Distraction

    Rhymes 8

    Elon Musk isnt real hell he didn't invent the wheel but he is trying to go to space Gotta give him credit to run that race fk no one else seems to try electric cars caught his eye bravo young man of for doing ya shit You will get ther just stick with it! next topic Alternative dimensions!
  4. I hear this for some strange reason sung by George Michael? Hell if i know why but a powerful voice with emotion! I Met! V I met a girl She changed my world I can't describe her beauty Even if you said you'd shoot me The most beautiful I have seen She was my Queen I met a girl V I met a woman Oh boy! Oh boy! What a woman I gave her all my heart The first I love you was the start Now that she has gone I don't know where I'm from I met a woman B I'm just a man I did what I could But the women that I love Is no longer in love With me V I have lost the power I've lost the most delicate flower I was such fool I broke every lovers rule Now I pay the price I can tell you it's not nice I lost the pow.........er Outro Now there nothing left............
  5. Hi here's another one not sure what you will make of it? Extra verse at the bottom! Am I a ghost She used say good morning She used to say good night Now shes says nothing to me at all I want to say good morning I want to say good night I dont think that she'll hear me Am I a ghost Tell me if I'm haunting you And I will fade away If you want me to be a memory Please tell me I will fade away Like a ghost in the night I'll fade away Like a ghost in the night I'll fade away She used to say she loved me She used to give me a kiss Now she gives nothing to me at all I want to say I love her I want to give her a kiss I dont think that she'll feel it Am I a ghost Tell me if I'm haunting you And I will fade away If you want me to be a memory Please tell me I will fade away Like a ghost in the night I'll fade away Like a ghost in the night I'll fade away I'm here right now In the flesh Feelings change thats a fact But it hurts inside Tell me if I'm haunting you And i will fade away If you want me to be a memory Please tell me I will fade away Like a ghost in the night I'll fade away Like a ghost in the night I'll fade away Fade away Fade away Extra verse! She used to hug n squeeze me She used to hold me tight Now she does'nt touch me at all I want to hug n squeeze her I want to hold her tight I don't think it matters anymore I am a ghost
  6. Mr Distraction

    New Collaboration Contest: Emotional Impact

    I would like to try if anyone is up for it? I have lyrics already if that's ok? Bailey
  7. Mr Distraction

    Roads Untraveled

    I like this TRS! There was one line I thought I would swap around but it's so minor apoint no worth mentioning. I can't nit this, I like it I had a melody in my head so that's a good thing as far as I'm concerned, well to me anyway. Solid! πŸ‘Š Boom! Hahaha I'm sure others with far better knowledge than I will chip in. Bailey
  8. Mr Distraction

    I've Turned The Light Off

    Thanks guys I will have a think and I like bits of each suggestion and may try to mingle them. Thank you all for your time always appreciated πŸ‘Š Bailey
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    I've Turned The Light Off

    Thanks Kuya Your bridge is beautiful! Serious very well written! I sort of go for non rhyme sometimes to break the mould if ya like, that's why I stuck with that couplet in the middle lines of the bridge, just to bust it up! Man you are good at pointing out stufff and that's why I post! I dont really understand beats n stresses I just go with what sounds right in my head haha the chorus had a different wording, I had like the bridge a 2 line match rhyme wise No point trying to hang on To a love that has gone i tried to get a near rhyme to "door" so changed it! Yuk I think! Bad move on my part! The bridge was inspired by something that happened recently! To some one I know wanting more but the girl did not want more! Thanks man! I will think on what u have said and again your bridge bloody good off the bat to thisπŸ‘Š I trust your judgement and if you have any ideas please feel free to help ok? Im in a bit of a rut lol! So help always apppreicated writing wise.
  10. Mr Distraction

    I've Turned The Light Off

    Hi guys Been a while and I have commented over the last few weeks just not to much lately sorry for that! I tend to only comment if I have something useful to say! Not that good at critique as you might have gathered haha This needs help I think? It's about trying to get over someone and finding away to do it! It's a little personal in away as I used to be able haha to flick a switch in my mind to block out stuff people, problems sort of in that vein! I hope that makes some sense? Please feel free to rip apart and as I said it needs help! Thanks for the read and any comments Bailey I've turned the light off V We used to have a good thing Oh God so beautiful together I let my jealousy take a hold Now I've lost her forever V Memories keep flooding in And the pain begins to grow It's time I woke up to the fact That I've got to let her go C So I've turned the light off Closed the door On a place once filled with love No point trying too hang on To a love that's not there So I've turned the light off Closed the door V I've taken down her pictures Gave away all her clothes Did she really love me To late now I'll never know ? It's time to go C So I've turned the light off Closed the door On a place once filled with love No point trying too hang on To a love that's not there So I've turned the light off Closed the door B I wanted a whole lot more Than she was willing to give And that's no way to live With the someone you love C So I've turned the light off Closed the door On a place once filled with love No point trying too hang on To a love that's not there So I've turned the light off Closed the door Possibly needs an outro?
  11. Mr Distraction

    Nobody Cares (Without Hope Or A Prayer)

    Very nice Kuya very nice good story and says a lot. I really like this line it is so true. "An anchor's an anchor n'matter how long the chain" Sorry not much else to add Bailey
  12. Hi here's another one, been a while and this is quite recent. Hope ya like it and the message comes across clearly πŸ™‚ Un-Breakable There is something about you girl That I just cannot define I feel your love and aura Across this distance and time My love for you will not waiver It will not twist flex or bend My love for you is un-breakable I will love it you until my end For such a small creature You are a force unto this world Radiating love and beauty You are truely an amazing girl If only I had met you earlier We could have made a life Who knows dare I even say it You may have become my wife I can imagine holding your hand As we stared out in to the night Seeing the stars shine in your eyes So beautiful blue and bright I can only imagine these things But I would be willing and be able So please remember this girl My love for you is.....un-breakable
  13. Mr Distraction

    Rhymes 8

    As kids we used to play with toys There we're different ones for girls n boys But in the end we all just played Used our imagination everyday I wish I could go back to those times This ones is tricky I'm running out of rhymes So SB let's see what ya got Go back to the times you thought you'd forgot Next topic Memories
  14. Mr Distraction

    The Turd That Got Left Behind

    I'm still smiling at this one Paul Hahahaha so friggin addictive I tell ya! Honest I'm ear to ear now πŸ™‚
  15. Mr Distraction

    Dear Hunter

    She doesπŸ™‚
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