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About NuclearWinter

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    Muse In Training
  • Birthday 23/10/2001

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    Both
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    My ex, Jasmyne

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  1. NuclearWinter

    Paper Angels

    Sung to the music of "Iris" (Goo Goo Dolls) Intro/Chorus: I'll fold you a thousand paper angels To guide you on your way back home 'Cause the real ones are bloody and broken And their hearts have all turned to stone Verse: And it's hard for me to say this But I don't think you'll last through the night Your body is spent and you're weary Of this life you've been living, all right Chorus: I'll fold you a thousand paper angels To guide you on your way back home 'Cause the real ones are bloody and broken And their hearts have all turned to stone Verse: And I'd give up the world to save you 'Cause I don't wanna miss you right now You wonder how you're gonna make it Just believe me when I tell you how... Verse: Just follow my army of angels As they break down Heaven's front door They'll drop you in my mother's arms So she won't have to cry no more Chorus: I'll fold you a thousand paper angels To guide you on your way back home 'Cause the real ones are bloody and broken And their hearts have all turned to stone Chorus: I'll fold you a thousand paper angels To guide you on your way back home 'Cause the real ones are bloody and broken And their hearts have all turned to stone Outro/Chorus II: Yeah, I'll fold you a thousand paper angels 'Cause I really don't want you to go I know that you're spent and you're weary But please, just come back home Please, just come back home...
  2. NuclearWinter

    Born To Burn

    Ha haha.... Thanks for this. This made my day. Don't change it, but change up the music behind it. Make it sound kinda static-y and you'll be good
  3. NuclearWinter

    Tempt

    Dude, that chorus needs to be part of a drawn out violin/guitar duo. Seriously. If it plays the way I'm hearing it, that would be awesome
  4. NuclearWinter

    I know.

    Also, I went ahead and wrote a version of your song. If you like it, keep it. It'll be my gift to a somewhat new muser. Verse: You're standing in the dark Down these empty lanes Between the two of us This has gotta change We've made some mistakes And have felt the pain Never having learnt What to give and what to take... Chorus: Yeah, it's kept me up at night Thinking of you and I Of how it should've been And all the trouble That we're in... Verse: Oh it hurts me every time Your name goes through my mind I'm sorry, for everything. You're crying in the street As you run away from me And the sky is weeping Mourning for the us, that will never be, Now tell me, can't you see Chorus: It's kept me up at night Thinking of you and I Of how it should've been And all the trouble That we're in... Outro/Verse: Wish I could forget it Always will regret it 'Cause I can't stop these tears Can't leave the past behind You never should have tried To fill all those empty years...
  5. NuclearWinter

    Lyric Idea

    Hey, peoples. I came up with this but don't know where to go with it, so I'm handing it off to you. Change it up, do whatever, I just want to read the finished version, so tag me, aight? Oh now, It's the end of the day And you're waiting for your Horseless carriage To come take you away (But you wait in vain) Intentionally very Panic!-y, so... Have fun!
  6. NuclearWinter

    Songwriting Opportunities

    Coolio, man. Let me get my band together.
  7. NuclearWinter

    Songwriting Opportunities

    Hey, Rob. You've got me interested. Where can I sign up to start writing for you guys?
  8. NuclearWinter

    Marry Me? Revised 7/30/18

    I, unfortunately, cannot. However, I can make my guitar sound like one. Or I could learn.
  9. NuclearWinter

    I know.

    Would your name happen to be Tyler Cordeiro? Just wondering. If it is, I'm sorry. I'm pretty sure I know who this was written about, but only if your name is Tyler Cordeiro.
  10. NuclearWinter

    Marry Me? Revised 7/30/18

    It's supposed to be a proposal song, and I know, it's not ready yet. That's why I want help.
  11. NuclearWinter

    Marry Me? Revised 7/30/18

    Thanks, Paul. Truth is, I'm kinda scared to sing and play it for her. I just need an honest opinion on if it's good enough.
  12. NuclearWinter

    Gone Gone Gone

    Dang, kuya. I love this song, but I have to agree with an earlier post: don't use now so much. It breaks up the song, unless you intended this as a power ballad.
  13. NuclearWinter

    Black Star

    Okay, I love the title. I've been trying to write a song title Black Ibis, but I just don't have the inspiration necessary. Maybe you could do something with it? Anyways, the song is good, but how did you intend it to be sung? If it's slow with lots of pauses it'll work, but not if it's medium to fast paced. Love your work man, it's always pretty good. See ya! NW
  14. NuclearWinter

    Marry Me? Revised 7/30/18

    Alright, I'm keeping the semi-original below, but here's the new one. Shout out to kuya for the help. Verse: Your hand in mine Footprints side by side Walking together through The sands of time Waves splash your feet And I'm on bended knee Offering my love As well as this ring Chorus: Baby, will you marry me? I know that you're the one for me Together we'll pass life's greatest tests, Oh, baby, please say yes Verse: Baby, I'm hoping that You feel this is right You know that I love you; Will you be my wife? It's true that we'll go through Good times and bad But just think of all the Fun we could have... Chorus: Baby, will you marry me? I know that you're the one for me Together we'll pass life's greatest tests, Oh, baby, please say... ††††††††††††††††††††††††††††† I wrote this for the love of my life, but it seems kinda shallow to me. Please help! Verse: Your hand in mine Footprints side by side Walking together through the sands of time Waves splash our feet as I drop to my knees And you gasp as I Pull out a ring Chorus: Baby please, answer me, Will you spend Your life with me? One plus one always equals two, So let's tie this knot Let's make this true Verse: And I say, Baby, I'm begging you Don't reject me tonight You know that I love you and I think I'm right When I say it's time Chorus: Baby please, answer me, Will you spend Your life with me? One plus one always equals two, So let's tie this knot Let's make this true Chorus: Baby please, answer me, Will you spend Your life with me? One plus one always equals two, So let's tie this knot Let's make this true
  15. NuclearWinter

    Valerie

    Okay, "Wolfe"-ram (LOL), this is pretty good, but I have to agree with John: I don't know how to criticize this without hearing it. It's just one of those songs, ya know? Anyways, keep up the good work.
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