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About RealKevM

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    Hull, UK

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    The Verve, The Courteeners

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  1. Hello! Here's a brand new song I started writing this morning, in fact this is what I've cobbled together in ten minutes. Please let me know what you think 👍 https://youtu.be/X3VyHQMGH7Q
  2. Hi, here's a cover version i've done of what I think is a great song, 'Pumped Up Kicks' by Foster The People. Please let me know what you think though as usual my voice is a disgrace!
  3. Well i've tweaked the lyrics and been toying with playing this in a different key, hoping it suits my voice a bit better. Please let me know what you think and if i'm going in the right direction https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9siclrz3cCc
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    "Maybe Tomorrow"

    I like it mate. It sure is a throwback to the shoegaze era. I think there is something missing in the chorus, I think it needs "beefing up" even more, maybe more brash or heavier in your face guitars. Nice produced and catchy guitar hook, good work.
  5. Interesting idea for a video and I like the whole vibe of your song. Welcome to the forum matey.
  6. Thank you so much for having a listen. I am rushing the tempo a bit aren't I? The song does have a second verse, it's similar to the first with just a few words changed if that makes sense. You're right about the chorus it is pretty generic but I wanted it to be like that, i'm going for a mainstream almost cheesy feel with it. I can see the 'Just Enough' line not fitting with the rest of the chorus and something i'm aware of, I just get stubborn with my ideas but i'm going to have a think about that. Thank you once again for taking the time to listen and also offer me some great advice.
  7. Hi everyone, here's a rehearsal version of what i'm hoping to be my next single release towards the end of the year, If you would be so kind to have a short watch and listen and please let me know what you think. Any thoughts on structure or well anything would nbe really appreciated. As ever my voice is a work in progress, i'm well aware i'm not very good at singing lol Lyrics Here I am just trying to say Everything that's come my way And here I am still trying to do Everything away from you God only knows how long i've been waiting For you to say to me And God only knows how long i've been waiting For you to set me free Chorus I can fly with these broken wings I can touch my shattered dreams I can climb high above What ever I do is just enough https://youtu.be/fF0X_jtcKT4
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    'How Did You Know' (Live at Jaz Bar, Hull, UK)

    Thanks man, that's a great idea about playing with others. Thanks for taking the tme to have a watch and it's encouraging you can hear a bit of an improvment in my voice but yeah a way to go yet loli
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    'How Did You Know' (Live at Jaz Bar, Hull, UK)

    Hi Neal thanks for watching and replying. I do normally dress less casual for performances but thought i'd try a more casual style, my music is indie rock so I think it fits but point noted. Yeah my voice isn't the best but i'm improving slowly, you should have heard me a year ago lol (or maybe not!) Thank you once again.
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    'How Did You Know' (Live at Jaz Bar, Hull, UK)

    Ah brilliant, thank you so much!
  11. Hi this is a video of me playing live last Sunday, i'm new to it, maybe done about 12 or so gigs. Please let me know what you think and offer any advice :) https://youtu.be/U3hDff-WQKg
  12. Thanks for taking the time to have a listen and offer amazing feedback. The song has evolved a bit since I first posted this. The lyric in the first version is now "torn and bruised, that's my heart" though I like your suggestion. Really like your suggestion about changing the chorus, it does sound a lot better changing it to "I" - thank you! I'll look at the "when" in the last verse, good pick up! Thanks again for taking the time to listen and offer some helpful feedback.l
  13. Cheers, i'll take a look :)
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    Should I Believe

    You've got a special song there mate. Love this newer version.