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Zritch1015

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About Zritch1015

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    Wide variety of rock and metal
  1. The Same

    THE SAME: V1 Mesmerized by lucid dreams Contemplating what they mean Close my eyes it seems I'm falling into sleep Waking brings another chore Another day, another bore I just can't figure out How to break the cycle Ch Repetition fills my mind The same routine The same old life I know I need to make a change I'm waiting on the same old things Waiting for my time to begin can't go on another day Knowing everything stays the same V2 It appears fate has left me in the dust I am forgotten, I'm stuck inside this rut I would give anything to break free Won't somebody help me I believed things happened for a reason Why can I not find mine I have nothing to show for my wasted fucking time Ch Repetition fills my mind The same routine The same old life I know I need to make a change I'm waiting on the same old things Waiting for my time to begin can't go on another day Knowing everything stays the same Bridge It's driving me mad I'm going insane Lost in my head No one else to blame I let it slip Out of my sight I only find My peace at night While I'm asleep Nothing can hurt me And when I dream I escape reality Ch bridge Repetition fills my mind The same bullshit The same goodbyes Why is it everything must end I'm wishing for A better life Where everything will be alright But wishing is how I got here in the first place Ch Repetition fills my mind The same routine The same old life I know I need to make a change I'm waiting on the same old things Waiting for my time to begin can't go on another day Knowing everything stays the same
  2. Baby Bird

    Although I can’t picture what the age and story of the person singing this is, I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme and flow of the lyrics
  3. Ungrateful

    Very good input, I agree and will have to take another look into it
  4. Ungrateful

    Hey everybody, could use some help finishing up this piece that’s got me stumped. Any critiques are helpful! contains swear words UNGRATEFUL: Maybe it’s okay if you’re unhappy Maybe it’s okay if you’re in pain I can’t believe what you’re saying to me It’s like wires are crossed in your brain I never would’ve thought That you feel like you deserve Everything I brought as yours Like you rule my world Never been so confused Question my own sanity The way you twist my words And hold them against me You don’t own me It’s funny how you think that you’re entitled And gain leverage by using your child Sunken so low like a bottom feeder Hateful disgraceful you are ungrateful Remembering to breathe so I don’t lose my temper Your reasoning is fucked and I know better I won’t waste my time on a never ending loss The end wasn’t worth the cost My investment will not be returned All in all it’s just another bridge burned It’s funny how you think that you’re entitled And gain leverage by using your child Sunken so low like a bottom feeder Hateful disgraceful you are ungrateful You are ungrateful Time I will never get back Trying to reason with a lunatic Your heart is barely beating You have no future your life has no meaning It’s funny how you think that you’re entitled And gain leverage by using your child Sunken so low like a bottom feeder Hateful disgraceful you are ungrateful It’s funny how you think that you’re entitled And gain leverage by using your child Sunken so low like a bottom feeder Hateful disgraceful you are ungrateful Look at me now I’m better than ever Look at you now Your free ride is severed Look at me now My lifeblood is flowing Look at you now Your real self is showing Look at me now Look at you now Look at me now Look at you so fucking ungrateful
  5. Damage Done

    That’s good, I like the dark themes but I feel like it could use another verse or even a bridge with more lyrics for how many times the chorus plays
  6. A Summer Place(Revised)

    I like this! You paint a vivid picture of the beach, I feel like I’m missing a piece when I read this of what happened to create that longing/losing feeling but very well done overall.
  7. Narcissist

    Thank you!
  8. Narcissist

    Self righteous and justified Invalidation is control in disguise I’m not out of my mind Just made to feel it by the look in your eyes Hey, narcissist No longer will I live to serve Your purpose Or die in your name You, narcissist You’re dead to me and all your lies Are worthless They fall on deaf ears The moment that I realized this was wrong I should have left but I played along To see how far you’d go, I didn’t know It’s pathological from the way you’ve grown Hey, narcissist No longer will I live to serve Your purpose Or die in your name You, narcissist You’re dead to me and all your lies Are worthless They fall on deaf ears You said you’d never be like her The one who raised you with an iron fist and fear You claimed you’re different all along I thought you were strong but I was wrong You’re just like the monster that raised you Hey, narcissist No longer will I live to serve Your purpose Or die in your name You, narcissist You’re dead to me and all your lies Are worthless They fall on deaf ears Hey, narcissist No longer will I live to serve Your purpose Or die in your name You, narcissist You’re dead to me and all your lies Are worthless They fall on deaf ears
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