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Rerry33

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About Rerry33

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    Terry Kelly

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  • Gender
    Male
  • Location
    Calgary, Alberta
  • Interests
    According to my ex is building patio decks to high. So this is why I write.

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  • Lyricist, Composer or Both?
    I play guitar and write lyrics.
  • Musical Influences?
    My father

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  1. Shades of Violence

    Thanks, nothing sir is set in stone. They may change the lyrics so who knows. I never signed the contract yet, I always wait because they always keep offering me a little more when they return their offer. Never just sign because you want it, down the road you maybe sorry for it. That's my 6th song I have been offered a contract for. That one I got last week.
  2. Fall Down

    I like the story your telling but it isn't smooth as it should be. I think if you just changed a few words so you have a good rhyme pattern it would be awesome! Over all it's very good for your first lyric posted. Good job man.
  3. I Didn't Do

    Ok thank you WB. Sometimes I forget how you the reader interprets what I write. Being I know the back story I forget that you don't and I fail to say directly what going on and sometime go around it without ever say it so thank you I will revisit it.
  4. How to Be a Man

    Hi Patty, I like your lyrics and how you made it easy for me to visualize your story. Great job!
  5. Gentle Giant (For Don Williams)

    I think I might. Would you be willing to read it while I'm writing it to let me know if it's going ok. I think Kayua is pissed off with me. He's aggravated that I can't spell and I know that. I told him I almost died when a guy assaulted me with a 6 lb pipe and the guy was 6"8 400 lb and the doctor said I should be dead. I told him I have my spell check on but if it doesn't pick them up I miss them. I will take living over not being able to spell and I thought that's why I post my stuff on here and I besides I have no one to proof read it. He said bullshit and isn't very nice. I'm ok with that I like happy better.
  6. Gentle Giant (For Don Williams)

    I want to write a tribute song to Don Williams like you but go through his lyrics and use just his lyrics for one complete song. I think that would be interesting.
  7. Kaleidoscope Baby

    I like the way this song flows. What type of music did you have in mind when you wrote this song.
  8. Shades of Violence

    My spelling is horrible and there's no cure. I try and try to improve but it's a flaw. I got hit with a 6 pound pipe over the head so I try lol. That is with spell check so that's why it good to have awesome ppl like you.
  9. I Didn't Do

    Here I'm am playing the part of a fool Trying to hold on to what we had but it's no use Was it those secrets we shared or that evening glare that made it hard to see Why you cry late at night when you think that I'm asleep Chorus But you said Would you catch me if I were to fall Would you come running if I were to call You said I would never ever lose sight of you Oh but you didn't do what i wanted from you Oh you didn't do what I wanted from you Is it love or hate Can we separate the two I wasn't on elevated ground but emotionally drowning with you Every time I put my heart on the line it gets torn in two So I'm gonna take this stance forgo this chance of getting hurt by you Chorus But you said Would you catch me if I were to fall Would you come running if I were to call You said I would never ever lose sight of you Oh but you didn't do what i wanted from you Oh you didn't do what I wanted from you Your miles away I still don't know what to say to you I can try again and let you in That's all ever tried to do If I put my heart on the line just one last time will you tear it in two Here I am ready to start again Can you please tell me where we should begin Chorus But you said Would you catch me if I were to fall Would you come running if I were to call You said I would never ever lose sight of you Oh but you didn't do what i wanted from you Oh you didn't do what I wanted from you Copyright 2017
  10. Gentle Giant (For Don Williams)

    Very nice! I like how you write, very positive. My uncle's name is don Williams my father was Gene Kelly, funny about name. I like some broken hearts never mend.
  11. Shades of Violence

    No I'm not offended at all. Sorry if it appeared that way. I actually signed a recording contract for that song today as is so it can't be changed now anyway. I always like to hear what people think, I do value you opinion so thank you.
  12. Shades of Violence

    My vocabulary is fine if you read any my other stuff it isn't like that. It's how the words flowed and I can't control that. It took 30 mins to write so I never was searching for words. That line you were talking about is about bullets fired out a guns and when they hit its the chaos that follows and he's denied that because he's dying. He does know who shot him as he see people lying there same as himself so the line works well.
  13. Shades of Violence

    My song about the Vegas Shootings.
  14. Shades of Violence

    Shades of empty silence softly displayed on parade Soaked in pain and violence, gentle hands your charade Ohh I can't be the man who's happiness seems Calmed by brush stokes of incandesce dreams Mounting substantial casualties soon to start again Lost in all the sadness aggression-less begins Can I blame emotionality, isn't it the same Played trough earthen tiles of self-harming blame Ballistic beauties in shotgun shoes misaligned with partial truths Don't look at me I'm occasionally in this self-imposed suit Wearing the aftermath that can't be seen like a ring Uncaring empty hands carring photographs that they bring Chorus A narrow man with empty hands turning back Whispering words that can't be heard turning black Now I'm looking back through emptiness glistening From the blood soaked violence I'm witnessing Influenced by the dress, Softy stressed, she's a mess Attitude mildly a prosthetic hypothetic reality of carelessness Cannons of colliding catastrophes willfully deny me Can't unseal the raptures of depressing hands I cannot see All I have is this hurt inside that I wear Like suit of armour people stare fully unaware Now I'm looking back trough the aftermath ruin everywhere Chorus A narrow man with empty hands turning back Whispering words that can't be heard turning black Now I'm looking back through emptiness glistening From the blood soaked violence I'm witnessing Socially inapt fantasies washed away trough distain Can't forsake the silence hating all who remain And when it's all said in done I'm unaware Rustic piles of nothing everywhere I forget to share I'm undone by the violence blood like rain Like everybody else I can't be helped lifeless I remain Chorus A narrow man with empty hands turning back Whispering words that can't be heard turning black Now I'm looking back through emptiness glistening From the blood soaked violence I'm witnessing Copyright 2017
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