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kon.sam

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About kon.sam

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    Muse In Training
  • Birthday 25/08/03

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    Don't have one but if collaborating, I would create one

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  • Gender
    Male
  • Location
    Saint Paul, Minnesota
  • Interests
    I've been playing guitar for 10 years and have added in drums, bass, and keyboard. I also have really gotten into producing lately so I want to write some songs that I can produce (not good enough yet to do it for other people). Also, I love baseball and am currently a freshman in high school.

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  • Lyricist, Composer or Both?
    I mostly write music but I've really been trying to learn to write lyrics so that I can create full songs.
  • Musical Influences?
    Prince inspires me but I like to go for stuff like Nirvana or Green Day (mostly American Idiot)
  1. Co-Write?

    If you're willing to move slightly more to a rock genre, maybe rock/pop, I'd be willing to collaborate
  2. Don't leave me behind

    ok great I'll try to come up with something like that
  3. Don't leave me behind

    Ok, though that's exactly what I was thinking- maybe it would include the broken home part
  4. Don't leave me behind

    My other idea was a Jesus of Suburbia type thing and this would be one of the slower parts-do you think that could work better?
  5. Let's Get Together

    Sounds good- how did you overcome writer's block? Wait for inspiration? Push through it?
  6. Don't leave me behind

    I envision it as classic or 80's rock, hopefully something like the 'Remember' portion of Green Day's "Whatsername"- do you know what I'm talking about?
  7. Winnemucca

    I think that this is really good, though one piece of feedback on the chorus: add a second-to-last line that rhymes with bet, something like: I lost it all in WinnemuccaLost it all in WinnemuccaI thought I was Romeo and she was JulietBut it was yet one more bad, bad betAnd now… I’m just another sucker With a deep sense of regret -or- a time(face,lover,memory, and of those would work) that you will never ever forget (Then, as the music starts to fade back into verse,)I lost it all in… Winnemucca (Small instrumental, drums loosen, then everything comes back together, drums tighten up, verse starts) Other than that small tweak though, I really like it. Great job!
  8. I've been playing guitar for about 10 years, and I have been getting into songwriting lately. However, I am really bad at writing the lyrics. Would any lyricist want to collaborate on a song/album, I was thinking an American Idiot/Nirvana/80's rock kind of style? I play guitar, drums, bass, and keyboard so all I need is help with the words.
  9. Don't leave me behind

    First full song, open to any feedback/criticism Note: I like the first verse but not sure it really fits with the rest of the song Verse 1: I look through your eyes. and see a difference through the lies. A dream that will never die is the best way to say goodbye. I see myself in every word, it’s both a blessing and a curse. A little bit of Heaven on Earth is a lifelong search. Pre chorus 1: When I look at it from your side, I know I’ll have to say goodbye You’ve stuck with me through highs and lows, I don’t want to let you go Just when I need you the most But isn’t that the way it always goes? Chorus: I know that you have to go But I wish you weren’t leaving me behind Your heart already knows I’ll remember you during the hardest times I wish that you could stay with me But I have to let the past rest in peace I know that you have to go But I wish you weren’t leaving me behind Verse 2: Do you remember what it was like before you left the first time? I thought that we were equals, I failed to notice the signs The signs that told me that you were tired of fighting for a spot in my life The signs that told me that It was all just a pack of lies Pre chorus 2: You said that you’d always be by my side I saw happiness whenever I looked into your eyes You’ve stuck with me through highs and lows, I don’t want to let you go Just when I need you the most But isn’t that the way it always goes? (Chorus) Bridge: (Guitar solo, lyrics scattered at times) Since you left, I may never be the same The only thing in life you can count on is change Only me and you and you and me remains I’m sick of having to play all these games You’ve got to stay! Chorus/Outro: I know that you have to go But I wish you weren’t leaving me behind Your heart already knows I’ll remember you during the hardest times I wish that you could stay with me But I have to let the past rest in peace I know that you have to go But I wish you weren’t leaving me behind I wish you weren’t leaving me behind (I may never be the same again) I wish you weren’t leaving me behind I wish you weren’t leaving me behind (I’ll remember you during the hardest times) I wish you weren’t leaving me behind I wish you weren’t leaving me behind.
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