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Paula De Macedo

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About Paula De Macedo

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  1. Traveler

    I just read all of your comments! Some mistakes were kinda stupid (like "...is this world" instead of "...this world is", I don't how I missed that one). I loved every piece of advice and I'm taking everything you guys said into consideration to write a better song. Thank you all!!!!!(:
  2. Traveler

    Hello! this is my first post on this forum. I hope you guys can give me some feedback since my first language is not English and I really want the songs that I'm writing not to be grammatically incorrect and sound stupid because of that. The song I'm posting today already has music, so the how the lyrics are written might be confusing but I did it that way so they would go well with the music. Enjoy (: I left To find a part of me I thought I’d lost. I learned How beautiful, yet cruel, is this world. Now I wanna come back into your loving arms, back to you. I can’t Afford to waste another minute, no. I gotta go back To the only place I can call home. To where I find my peace, where there’s only me and you. [PRE-CHORUS] I know it’s easy to get lost, But your bright stars will lead me to you. And I’ll go through anything, through everything, to make you see that I’ll remain by your side. [CHORUS] I want your sun to shine down on me, I Want your cool breeze to blow my hair, and I Can’t wait, can’t wait, can’t wait to travel every corner of your body. I want to watch your seasons go by, Dive in your ocean, fly above your sky. All that I ask from you is for you to wait for me, baby, baby. ‘Cause you were that missing part I was looking for, all along If you let me into your heart I promise there will be no more goodbyes. I have Learned so much from every life I lived You are The one I want to share these lessons with And after all I’ve seen, the only thing I missed was you. I can’t Afford to waste another minute, no. I gotta go back To the only place I can call home. To where I find my peace, where there’s only me and you. [PRE-CHORUS] [CHORUS] I want your sun to shine down on me, I Want your cool breeze to blow my hair, and I Can’t wait, can’t wait, can’t wait to travel every corner of your body. I want to watch your seasons go by, Dive in your ocean, fly above your sky. All that I ask from you is for you to wait for me, baby, baby. Trust me, I’ll go through anything, through everything, and you will see that you belong by my side. *GUITAR SOLO* [CHORUS] I want your sun to shine down on me, I Want your cool breeze to blow my hair, and I Can’t wait, can’t wait, can’t wait to travel every corner of your body. I want to watch your seasons go by, Dive in your ocean, fly above your sky. All that I ask from you is for you to wait for me, baby, baby. ‘Cause you were that missing part I was looking for, all along If you let me into your heart There will be no more goodbyes And no more running away I finally found my place In the universe, and here I will stay.
  3. Maybe the next time

    Such shitty friends lol. I guess that's what the song is about: how some people are your friends till they're asked for help. I like it, I just feel like it isn't complete, like you could add something more to really finish the story. Still, it's just a suggestion, the song is good (:
  4. Alice the Camel

    I know you explain the reason for the title, but I think it doesn't do the lyrics justice. It's very good, tho
  5. Come Back to Me

    These lyrics are very poetic, it made me imagine a nice setting. And yeah, the title could be anything like My lonely lover, Waiting for you, Our song of old, etc... but honestly Come back or Come back home is the title that suits the song the best, in my opinion. The only part that got me wondering about it's meaning was: "I'm losing all control of you" I don't know if you were trying to say "I'm losing all control because of you" or not, but I'm having trouble understanding that last line. I loved these lyrics, regardless
  6. LOVE Moans

    I like that it says a lot using few words. You've done some modifications and I think it turned out great
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