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DinaDraz

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About DinaDraz

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    Muse In Training

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    https://allpoetry.com/Dina_Draz

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  • Lyricist, Composer or Both?
    lyricist
  • Musical Influences?
    celin dion, savage gardan, back street boys.
  1. I Wanna Grow old with You

    i like the chorus, and the tale you have expressed. my only suggestion will be that some lines are longer than they should be.
  2. Call me

    i like the emotions behind it, it's truly heart felt, but i think you over did the rhyme.
  3. friend zone

    You call me "friend", I'm always therein all the times you needYou call me up, to think out loudexpose your heart to meYou call to speak of other girlsthe love that fails to meetI listen up and wonder whenyou'll settle down for meYou call one day and ask me outwe settled on a date I search my closet for " the dress"the one that holds your gazeYou call in time to call it offyou said you need to laze"Some other time we can go outwhy rush when this can wait?"Chorusyou ask me out, you stand me upyou took the easy wayyou labelled me your "comfy friend"and thought a date can waitYou call someday and still complain you always wonder why You never settled with miss rightthe one who makes you flyYou always try and always fail and never met "the one"You wanna live the "dazzling tale"and wonder where she's found..Chorusyou ask me out, you stand me upyou took the easy wayyou labelled me your "comfy friend"and thought a date can waitAnd now I'm hurt, I'll turn my back no longer wanna stayDon't call me then or ask againif we can have a way!Chorusyou ask me out, you stand me upyou took the easy wayyou labelled me your "comfy friend"and thought a date can wait
  4. In my dreams

    i like the lyrics, you drew a picture there, but the music doesn't give me the feeling that you are flying
  5. Dear sweetheart

    Dear sweetheart you gave me more than any woman will dream just as if a fantasy was coming real as beautiful as a lie that came to an end don't question why the last chapter has already been penned chorus: Dear Sweetheart, we must breakup you wanna hold on, I know but your wants cannot make a lie come true Dear Sweetheart How many days of Tintagel have we dreamt and up the cliffs our lips turned soft and melt How many nights have you wrapped me till I fell deep in sleep and whispered promises we know neither you or I can keep chorus: Dear Sweetheart, we must breakup you wanna hold on, I know but your wants cannot make a lie come true Dear Sweetheart maps point out the countries but you made up my home and as I left I have felt all your pain inside my bones all the promises that we shared are broken now except for one the love we shared is not replaced but the heart will move on chorus: Dear Sweetheart, we must breakup you wanna hold on, I know but your wants cannot make a lie come true
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