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AlexVIII

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About AlexVIII

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  1. No not at all, thanks @RGMixProject - I completely forgot!!
  2. New song "Every step" -> looking for critique on structure, melody, instruments etc, lyrics...please do critique/suggest anything though! Thanks
  3. Thanks @watts, I totally agree that I need a better mic - mine currently pics up all the background noises and hisses a bit - but just working with what I have! The chords were done on a midi keyboard and I find it hard to make it sound smooth without having any floor pedal, but I will work on this! @daryl1968 - thanks! Thanks I will do this, I tend to write quite repetitively so am working on this. I will post the lyrics on the recording now! Thanks again for taking the time to listen and give feedback
  4. This is just a small part of a song I started today, looking for criticism and suggestions of how to take it forward. Thanks in advance
  5. Hi everyone, This is my original song, "Make you stay". It is singer-songwriter/pop in genre. I am looking for critique about how to improve my songwriting skills. I am not releasing anything commercially, just trying to develop my ability and learn how to make my songs more interesting. Anything from critique on lyrics/melody/structure to mixing tips/voice etc. I really would like your to be brutally honest as I know I have a very long way to go and I am going to really use the criticism as I go forward to develop more content. I hope the song means different things to different people, but to me it's simply about missing your opportunity with someone and only realising it once it's too late. Thank you in advance. Lyrics: So this is how the story ends Decided we were better off as friends The way you look tonight with your sorry eyes and your goodbye smile Nothing I can do to make you stay Same old you and same old me Beginning to see things differently From the moment that we met you were saying things that I won't forget There's nothing I can do to love you less Am I wasting time trying to make you feel the same So I'll try and try change my mind cause I can't change the rules of your game but I'll still try Can we go back To when we were more than friends Can I be the one you love again Cause I can't bear to watch you walk away Darling I would do anything to make you stay Such a feeling such a rush It started off as little more than a crush and it's the way you look tonight with your sorry eyes and your goodbye smile there's nothing I can do to change your mind Am I wasting time trying to make you feel the same So I'll have to change my mind cause I can't change the rules of your game but I'll try So can we go back to when we were more than friends can I be the one you love again cause I can't bear to watch you walk away darling I would do anything to make you stay Back to when we were more than friends can I be the one you love again cause I can't bear to watch you walk away darling I would do anything darling I would do I would do I would do anything I would do I would do anything to make you stay