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  1. Hi J.Pump, Welcome to the Muse. I enjoyed your song "Inside This Place" a lot. Great captivating music. Performance seems quite professional. True talent is showing. A star is in the making. Well done
  2. House Of Movies

    Hi Iggy, Great lyric. Concise and relatable. Keep as it is. Well done. Cheers
  3. Every Step

    Lucky you,you've got all ingredients for making a star... captivating voice and performance,ability to write both meaningful lyrics and good music. "And if I dive in I'm never resurfacing" great imagery Wow,I can only say you're no good,you're no good,Alex you're no good.
  4. Can't Get Enough

    Greetings Alex, I just can't get enough of your "can't get enough". Charming distinctive voice and good music.Definitely, I see a very promising talent emerging .Awaiting complete song. Best wishes and good luck.
  5. You'll Never Be My Girl

    Greetings Bob, A real good lyric. I like it. I dig the clever double meaning title. Verse 1 is crystal clear,telling us about a self assured guy. Who said he was sad? Was he? "You could never make me sad". It doesn't bother that rhymes were a bit simplistic.What really matters is the structure,concept, and meaning of the lyric which makes good sense. It's quite amazing that some are trying to find faults with this lyric while they don't exist.It's irrelevant whether the events are taking place in a small town or in New York City.I guess the writer is entitled a bit of license . "going down" is simply going down,and in the context of the lyric it means (girl you're a loser). In fact, this lyric is coherent and glaring,that people with Down's syndrome can certainly understand. I'm not implying that this lyric is perfect,but surely NOT walking on crutches. All in all well done,just my thoughts,keep or sweep. Cheers.
  6. M A S T E R

    Greetings Kuya, As usual,appreciate your valuable time and kind comments.Insightful. Thanks a lot
  7. M A S T E R

    M A S T E R I'm the master I've got the word I'm the lord I've got the chord Naturally I mesmerize All girls and guys As they hear the news They rush and stand in queues Bright stars gonna rock the ground Boy,tonight I'll be crowned I'm the master I've got the word I'm the lord I've got the chord Naturally I mesmerize All girls and guys Once I start the beat On and on it goes wild and sweet Again I hear the cheers See broken hearts and lots of tears I know sometimes your love is tragic But you heal as you feel my magic In your heart you've engraved my name And posted it on the wall of fame I'm the master I've got the word I'm the lord I've got the chord Naturally I mesmerize All girls and guys
  8. Me, Myself & I

    Greetings Mblack, Welcome to the Muse forum.This is TERRIFIC.Believe it or not,I could not wait till I finish listening to your very well done song which urges me to declare my true admiration.Can't find a nit...lyric is quite meaningful,music is great,your voice and vocals deliver the message neatly.Title is just FANTASTIC. What a unique repentant.Go ahead invest your money nothing to worry about. Best of Luck.
  9. Beer and Cigarettes

    Garyhale's ALABAMAS BEST goes to heaven teeporter's Beer and Cigarettes goes to hell Poor tee how UNFAIR It's just sheer blindness that "Beer and Cigarettes" is reviewed not according to its own merits as a lyric, but based on moral criteria . Well tee,please know that I like it especially the chorus. You managed to deliver the feeling of the imagery in a clear,simple and natural way. "Baby we're good together" said millions of times before and still generates the good shivers when said to one's baby. Yes,smoking cigarettes is a health hazard,but when I listen to a song about beer and cigarettes,I never think of the health effects.Heck... Your unjust preachers overlooked to deal with Garyhale's SINS found in his ALABAMAS BEST.He committed three grave sins according to their logic: 1- He grew drugs. 2-He smoked drugs which is worse more than smoking cigarettes. 3-He spoiled the cop and made him join the gang. Come on guys we are talking art... To make it clear I do love both "Beer and Cigarettes" and "ALABAMAS BEST". I hope that Gary is generous enough to send me two joints,one for me,and one for my"baby" to go with the case of beer you have already sent.Thanks a lot. All in all very well done tee,just remember your song "You Shine" I'm saying it to you. P.S. Sorry that I had to mention ALABAMAS BEST in order to make my point clear.
  10. Watch My Back - Chris Johnson

    Greetings Chris, BLIMEY, so good,so good. You really caught me Chris... Thanks a lot for this gift of fine artistry. A manly and heavenly voice singing instinctively just like breathing. Your song brought Joe Cocker (Unchain My Heart) to my mind.Also when other instruments entered the scene,again that reminded me of Skyfall music by Paul Epworth. Please don't get me wrong,you are not in anyway a copy of anybody else. You do have a distinguished elegant style of your own,which I like very much. I simply mean that your craftsmanship as well as the quality of your music is equal to theirs. "Watch My Back" is definitely Radio Ready. It won't be long till I see you holding the Academy / Grammy Awards. So promise to let me take a shot beside you. Although I am not music expert,I realize there are a few seconds of silence within the stream of music,perhaps if the tempo is a bit faster it would remedy that. All in all well done job. I guess many wannabes envy you lucky man . P.S. I listened to "My Baby's Gone" and I like it too.
  11. Dirt in My Eyes

    Hi Paul, Another very good one. I really enjoyed reading this lyric. The title is a hell of hook,takes one straight to the point. It's a very touching theme and the lyric is loaded with fine imagery.Just good stuff. You did it again.
  12. It Was A Monday

    Greetings fabkebab, Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. I do appreciate your input. Regarding the "details" you are missing in the school/cool/fool part,don't you see that the kids had nothing in their minds except the"date" and the "first experience" they were eagerly anticipating... Perhaps details may interrupt the sequence of the "moment". I don't write music,and in case somebody collaborates,I am flexible and open for the music writer's suggestions,as it's got to be easy for him as well. Thanks for the VISIT and hope to see you again
  13. You Shine

    Hi teeporter44 It's really a good song,clear and simple ,penetrates fast. I like you singing Shine/Mine a lot. Good stuff. Best of luck
  14. She's In Love

    Greetings IornKnee, I honestly would like to thank you for this Very bad song that I keep listening to. Simply a fine piece of artistry " no compliment " it's true.You made me feel riding the train and also put me in your shoes.I like it especially when you sing"she is in love" as it delivers the message just right. This song is really RADIO READY. Just good stuff.
  15. Greetings ecasasmusic, Very well done song,real piece of artistry. Music,lyrics and S I N G I N G all great. Yours is a promising future . Special regards to Ingrid,her good style reminds me of one good old song " Angel Of The Morning " by Juice Newton. Looking forward to listening more of such a good stuff.
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