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  1. gator 1

    A Summer Place- Demo

    Thanks N-R-N Jim for looking in
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    A Summer Place- Demo

    Thanks for all the comments and all the help from the members in my many revisions.
  3. If you click on a summer song it will take you to soundcloud where the lyrics are posted right below the song

  4. gator 1

    A Summer Place-Final unless I get more help

    Thanks Steve for the help
  5. Summer was gone, fall was in full color I woke up to the sound of a cold rain Wrapped in a memory as tears grip my face Like raindrops hugging the window pane Pre-Chorus An image embedded in my head still remains and keeps coming back Keeps coming back in a song A Summer Place Chorus Every time I think about that song I picture you and me on that beach Strange how a song sounds like a memory Like a recording of a summer’s day Somewhere, somewhere only we know. I go back to when I first saw you Swayin’ to the rhythm of the waves On that lonely stretch of sand I caught your glance, and got lost in your eyes You said hi and in that moment, I was captured I found a love for me hidden in the sand I go back to when we walked together Barefoot in the sand, hand in hand We stopped at the water’s edge The soft sensuous touch of the breeze embraced us and we had our first dance listening to the song a summer place I go back to when we were sitting On that lonely shore, the sun dipping Into the sea, the scent of jasmine Filling our senses, we got high, Then we kissed. In that moment, I knew we belonged together I didn’t want this day to end I didn’t want this day to ever ever end Every time I think about that song I picture you and me on that beach Strange how a song sounds like a memory Like a recording of a summer’s day Somewhere, somewhere only we know. Somewhere, somewhere only we know.
  6. gator 1

    A Summer Place--New Revision

    Thanks RepeatingZero- I have rewritten my lyric and like you mentioned cut some fat Thanks
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    A Summer Place--New Revision

    Thanks Malice 95 for looking in
  8. gator 1

    A Memory

    There’s something about a memory How it keeps coming back Remaining vivid and heartwarming for no-one knows the heartache that lies behind my idle tears I remember when I first saw you Swayin’ to the rhythm of the waves on a lonely stretch of sand I walked up to you, Iooked into your eyes my heart beating like a baby’s first heartbeat saying hello I knew I’d met the girl I thought I’d never find Whenever I hear that song I think about you and me Strange how a song sounds like a memory, Somewhere, somewhere only we know. I remember walking together barefoot in the sand, hand in hand whispering under my breath I’ve found the love for me We stopped at the water’s edge The soft sensuous touch of the breeze embraced us and we had our first dance In the sand listening to the song A Summer Place Lost in that moment I was totally consumed binding our love with a kiss As daylight faded a perfect sunset gave life to a perfect day I didn’t want this day to end I didn’t want this day to ever ever end Whenever I hear that song I think about you and me Strange how a song sounds like a memory, Somewhere, somewhere only we know.
  9. Summer was gone, fall was in full color I Woke up to the sound of a cold rain wrapped in a memory as tears grip my face like raindrops hugging the window pane I think about that song,a summer place and picture you and me on that beach I remember when I first saw you Swayin’ to the rhythm of the waves On that lonely stretch of beach. I walked up to you,looked into your eyes, You said hi and in that moment,I was captured I found a love for me hidden on that beach I remember walking together Barefoot in the sand,hand in hand We stopped at the water’s edge The soft sensuous touch of the breeze embraced us and we had our first dance listening to the song a summer place Every time I hear that song I picture you and me on that beach Strange how a song sounds like a memory Like a recording of a summer’s day Somewhere, somewhere only we know. I remember when we were sitting On that lonely shore, the sun dipping Into the sea, the scent of Jasmine Filling our senses, turning us on, And we kissed. In that moment We knew we belonged together I didn’t want this day to end I didn’t want this day to ever ever end Every time I hear that song I picture you and me on that beach Strange how a song sounds like a memory Like a recording of a summer’s day Somewhere, somewhere only we know. Somewhere, somewhere only we know.
  10. gator 1

    Another for review - "Moments"

    I really like the lyric and also would like to hear this put to music The only thing I would change is take out on a Monday night and only have Met you for a drink -for the first line
  11. gator 1

    A Summer Place(Revised)

    Days when the wind blows so cold It tears at my bitter soul I wanna close my eyes and picture you and me in that song A summer place Looking back on the memory When I first saw you Swayin’ to the rhythm of the waves on a lonely stretch of sand I walked up to you Iooked into your eyes my heart beating like a baby’s first heartbeat saying hello I knew I’d met the girl I thought I’d never find We walked barefoot, hand in hand whispering under my breath I've found the love for me At the water’s edge The sensuous touch of the breeze embraced us and we had our first dance in the sand listening to the song, a summer place Every time I hear that song I picture you and me on that beach Strange how a song sounds like a memory Somewhere, somewhere only we know. Locked in an orbital embrace The alluring sunlight reflecting the sparkling water cast a blue glow upon us letting off energy with a passion and we kissed Lost in that moment with you I was totally consumed binding our love with a kiss As daylight fades a perfect sunset gave life to a perfect day I didn’t want this day to end I didn’t want this day to ever ever end Every time I hear that song I picture you and me on that beach Strange how a song sounds like a memory Somewhere, somewhere only we know.
  12. gator 1

    A Summer Place

    Yes, you were right Arius ,and thanks again for that last suggestion
  13. gator 1

    A Summer Place

    Thanks Peko for your suggestions- I have used some and working on how to make changes using others Thanks Arius- I have taken out most of the on that beach
  14. gator 1

    A Summer Place

    I Woke up to the sound of a cold rain wrapped in a memory as tears embrace my face like raindrops hugging the leaves. I think about that song, A summer place and picture you and me on that beach I remember that lonely stretch of sand watching you swaying to the rhythm of the waves I walked up to you and When I looked into your eyes my heart felt like a baby’s first heartbeat saying hello I knew I’d met the girl I swore I’d never find We walked along barefoot in the sand hand in hand all along whispering under my breath I've found the love for me We stopped at the water’s edge The ocean breeze brought a soft sensuous touch as we embraced and had our first dance in the sand listening to the song, a summer place Every time I hear that song I picture you and me on that beach Strange how a song sounds like a memory Somewhere only we know. Locked in an orbital embrace Our bodies exposed a blue glow from the sparkling blue sea releasing energy with a passion and We kissed Lost in that moment with you I was totally consumed as our hearts were binding love with a kiss As daylight fades a perfect sunset gave life to a perfect day I didn’t want this day to end I didn’t want this day to ever ever end Every time I hear that song I picture you and me on that beach Strange how a song sounds like a memory Somewhere only we know. 

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