Thank you very much...again!!! It's been a great year so far!!! I'm so glad you guys like the song. For whatever reason it is that we write, at the end of the day all we can ask for is that somebody like what we do. It's the ultimate compliment and means the world to me. Thank you!
Congrats also to ClintLeonard, GaryHale and all other competitors. Great line of songs this month, again.
My comments are as follows:
Seduce me : Eric Borgos
The verse is really good, like really really good, and I think it is far better than the chorus in this song. The chorus does not succeed fully holding my attention. The lyrics are good and gets the message across but only that. In lots of places they’re close to being borderline cliché, too many rhymes/words in there that I’ve heard before makes this song not stand out. IMHO! Production and vocals are superb as always!
Friends of Richard Perkins : ScenesFromPalacio
Good song but leaves me hanging with quite a strong taste of the fab four, which does your song no favour. I’m referring to, partly the intro, but mostly the tempo change part, it’s still good but sometimes when you so strongly make the listener think of another artist in the middle of your own song it’s not always a good thing. I’d say you should’ve killed your darlings! Without the tempo change part the song would be stellar! IMHO. Lyrics as always are great and the vocal performance is one of your better ones.
Damn This Field - PaulCanuck
Fantastic intro. Through the whole song, you leave me wanting more power, the power you show at 2.40, I think I’d like that through out the whole song?!?! Hehe! Great lyrics (as always) and great song but I think you can do wonders if you brush up the production some towards the dirty and loud stuff. More is more, crank it up and add power!!! I wanna hear it powered up!!! =)
Rolling On : Jambrains
I dig it! It’s a mix of a lot of songs yet none. The production is top notch but what might give the song that extra flare would be to tone down those drums, make ’em less busy, especially the toms which sound just a tad too artificial. Toms and cymbals, more than other sounds, are what gives you away when you’re dealing with computer drumming. IMHO.
Mexican Wind : GaryHale
I like this song and the lyrics a lot. The song has grown on me after a few listens. Idk, I might be wishing for some change in the chord progression or something, sorry for being vague, it’s just a feeling and I can’t be more precise than that. This song is truly good as is but there’s something needed to make it great. The vocals and production are really good. Also as I've mentioned before, be careful with those toms and how computerised they sound. Sometimes it's better just to leave 'em out if you know what I mean?!! IMHO.
Get Gone : The Nameless Untold
I think it has potential and the foundation is solid. Right now it lacks dynamics and variation, the various sections sound too much alike. but as i said, it has a lot of potential. Thumbs up on the whistling! Good stuff!
My Baja Bug : neuroron
A timeless and classic production and song which you do superbly. The overall sound is exactly right for this kind of song. Love your vocals on this and if anything, I thought at some places you lost a bit of sincerity in your vocals, just a few lines and words here and there, a sincerity which you otherwise managed to capture perfectly throughout the song. Good stuff! =)
Alpha Dog : RoadDog
Close but this song still needs work IMHO. Mostly because the guitar, drums and vocals don’t blend together sonically for me. There’s also a few timing issues in your vocal delivery and personally I would've preferred a little less distortion on your vocals, you've got a good voice sir, show it!!! ;-) Ahhh I guess it’s just me being too hard on you RoadDog, especially after you wrote ”Falling”. That song gave you away buddy, now I know what you’re able to do you know!!! =D What I love though as always with your stuff is the lyrics and the truly awesome attitude you put on display. Keep it up!!! =)
Out of time : ClintLeonard
Wow! Hold on to this singer, he’s fantastic. What a voice!!! This is a really great and catchy pop song. I love every aspect of it, absolutely top notch songwriting! Music, lyrics and performance, all of it! I tip my hat sir! Good job!
I was the one : chazmataz
Oh, this is Crosby, Stills and Nash, just without as many harmonies, good to see they made it in the end of the song. I dig it! Especially the vocals and your voice. Good production and the bluesy piano is a nice touch.