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LB76

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LB76 last won the day on June 17

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About LB76

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    Nick drake, cherry ghost, David Gray, the Beatles, jeff Buckley, stone roses, counting crows, rem
  1. Ear warmers (rough first draft)

    Sometimes. I'm a member of collaboration site called kompoz. I post lyrics and sometimes people turn them into songs. Sometimes I'll write words for a specific piece of music that has alreday been posted but needs lyrics. I've had quite a few done now with some really good results. You should check it out
  2. Ear warmers (rough first draft)

    Thanks for the feedback CJ. Yeah I get what you mean by the chorus. I could tidy that up. I have a melody in mind in my head that it fits to bit I'm more bothered how it reads because my own melodies never get used for my songs
  3. Looking

    Alright Simon. How come it took you so long to post this lyric. I thinks it's really good and it all strikes a nerve with me. I think all this internet social media stuff stinks (even though I'm an addict myself) When I used to be a young single lad we'd have to right a number on a fag packet and then have to ring their parents house to get them to come out with us, but I look back on this fondly. I feel sad for this youth and more so for my son's. I kind of agree with some of the advice but I think it's all very minor. All in all its pretty tops
  4. The Shape of You

    As clean a lyric as your gonna get. It all works perfectly. It's not exactly deep or emotional or anything but I think it's very well written and gets a big thumbs up from me
  5. Pardon Me

    I sometimes miss the point of some of your political lyrics mainly due to me not being on top of current American affairs. However I think this one is pretty clear and so are you feelings. I'm always happy to hear lyrics that try to show the powerful up for who they really are. The more the better I say. As for the lyric itself, standard you. Well thought out with plenty of humour
  6. Call Me

    Love the verses, like the pre chorus and don't mind the chorus either. Altogether pretty good, the opening verse is a good one which always helps. I'd like to know the genre
  7. "Self Medicate"

    Does self medicate mean what I think it does or have I just got a dirty mind. If it doesn't then maybe it should, it's the highlight of the lyric. I like the chorus and bridge. Not sure about the verses but then it's hard to tell without the music
  8. Not sure if this will mean anything to any one but me because it's just some personal memories of a specific weekend from my past. Anyway, as always, any feedback is appreciated Ear warmers We warmed our ears Turned our faces red And we didn't stop laughing When our noses bled No time for waiting We jumped the queue They said "Hey why are you laughing" You said "we're laughing at you" Chorus We had grey skies, grey skies But we had some music And we had a barrel of laughs And knew how to use it We had grey skies, grey skies But we had some music Yeah we had the time of our lives The headaches to prove it We warmed our ears When madness came on And we didn't stop dancin' And we sang along We liked our hats Took our time to choose Back then you didn't like payin' You said "you snooze then you lose" Chorus We had grey skies, grey skies But we had some music And we had a barrel of laughs And knew how to use it We had grey skies, grey skies But we had some music Yeah we had the time of our lives The headaches to prove it Bridge Well the day turned to night Then the night to day There was no talk of sleeping And eating was cheating When the clouds opened up To wash our spirits away And the cold came creeping We gave our ears a reheating We warmed our ears Again and Again And we didn't stop laughing Still see you laughing my friend Chorus 2 We had grey skies, grey skies But we had some music And we had a barrel of laughs And knew how to use it We had grey skies, grey skies But we had some music You had the rest of your life But knew how to lose it
  9. Paper Bee

    Typo🖕
  10. Paper Bee

    Haha screw you bob
  11. Paper Bee

    I really like this. I have to confess to not getting the meaning until I read your explanation but that never bothers me. In fact I see it as a plus point. I don't know what monolith means. I personally don't like words that the average person who didn't go on to higher education doesnt understand. Hope that doesn't make me sound think. Anyway I love the way this lyrics written, something different. Well done
  12. I Don't Like What I Learned This Year

    Good video is that
  13. Too Much Sugar

    I totally got the meaning of this song. Cleverly written and as always with a sense of humour. I gave it a good score but unfortunately for this lyric it was, imo, up against some extremely good competition in last month's contest
  14. I Don't Like What I Learned This Year

    Alright john i know what you mean. I'm sure it fits your music just fine but it's a hard one to read without it. We all know this though with how our lyrics are read in other peoples heads. Something is always lost. I very much agree with the sentiment of the song. I've been saying for a long time that its us against them and it's sickens me that a tiny minority own a massive majority. Having said that I'm not a massive fan of songs like this, I think that in these type of songs too much effort is put into making the message clear that it takes away from emotion and even something more simple like how the words actually sound together. This is clever how it's written and the message is one that I'm right behind but this kind of lyric just isn't really me. Sorry, you know I'm still a big fan though
  15. I've revised this thanks to some advice from some fellow musers. It's put a slightly different spin on it but I think it works. Hattys passing through V1 Her rucksacks her home Holds all that she owns Free of all shackles She travels alone There's a watch on her wrist But it no longer tics Never a lover of time She once was a lover of mine Ch Hattys only passing through Like in the autumn of my youth She blew in on the wind Like a feather she'll leave that way too V2 Her mood is her guide She owns the outside Travelling lightly With nothing to hide With every memory she makes Another heart breaks Hope she remembers the time When she was a lover of mine Ch Hattys only passing through Like in the autumn of my youth She blew in on the wind Like a feather she'll leave that way too Bridge She brings the warmth in like the sun Throws the light on everyone Like the weather she surrounds you Then like a storm she is gone Ch2 Hattys only passing through Like in the autumn of my youth She blew in on the wind Like the summer she'll leave that way too
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