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    El Paso TX

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  • Lyricist, Composer or Both?
    I really don’t consider myself much of a musician. I write the lyrics and compose in garage band as a hobby, but I don't play any instruments all my music is composed by the use of loops.
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    I have a deep interest in rock and classic country, however my musical taste are all over the place. there are few genres that I don't appreciate.

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  1. That is a nice one.
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    Air Guitar

    I love the lyrics to the song. This line especially, " But I know my friends all think I'm living such a lie But the lie they think I'm living gets me high" I can't help but think of my own songwriting whenever I hear it. I know I'm no pro and I really don't aspire to be. But creating something new gets me high and it doesn't matter what anyone else thinks I love it. and I think this song captures that feeling so very well. If you've never heard it I hope you enjoy it.
  3. This is a work in progress. I am trying to learn how to play the guitar. This song came to mind as I was practicing my chord changes. I know it is a simple song but I think it is pretty cool that I was able to get a complete song out of the little I have learned so far. The tempo is slower than I think it should be and the song is a little long. For some reason I can't seem to write a song that is not 5 minutes long. I don't think it's ready for a critique just yet (a lot to work on still) but , I thought I'd post it here to record my progress. your comments do help my future works. hopefully when this one is done it won't be just a 1+1. I have run into a local musician here in El Paso that would like to help with this one. She will be adding backing vocals and hopefully some violin. Which is why I left some spaces where I am just strumming one chord for several measures. I posted the lyrics here a while back, of course there have been some changes as I am sure there are more tho come. The song is about how proud I am proud of my children. Little bird Little bird, little bird, fly by my window Little bird, little bird, where do you go Little bird, little bird, fly by my window Little bird, little bird, I’ve gotta know just how it is that a tiny thing can do amazing things on little wings oh my little bird. I still remember the day you left my nest You may not know it but I was wishing you the best When I see you smile I know you past life’s test oh oh oh oh my little bird. Little bird, little bird, fly by my window Little bird, little bird, where do you go Little bird, little bird, fly by my window Little bird, little bird, I’ve gotta know just how it is that a tiny thing can do amazing things on little wings oh my little bird. You fly around without the help of the wind It makes me wonder of the places you have been whenever you’re away I can’t wait to see you again oh oh oh oh my little bird. Little bird, little bird, come to my window Little bird, little bird, I want you to know Little bird, little bird, come to my window Little bird, little bird, I love you so. If ever I find you with a broken wing I’ll do anything Just to ease the pain. Cuz here’s the thing oh oh oh You’re my everything Little bird, little bird, come to my window.
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    Foreigner

    That was great. although I have to admit, when I saw the title I was hoping for some Dirty White Boy, Waiting for a Girl Like You or Jukebox Hero references. what can I say I am Foreigner fan. But seriously, if you are new to this you did a great job. Much better than I can do.
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    Face Up - Rock Song Idea

    I really like that. The lyrics are great. definitely worth continuing forward with. I'd like to here some of the power you have in the "Yes it hurts, yes its dirt" line somewhere in the chorus. It comes off with a little less energy when compared to the verses. It's great to find another King's X fan. Nice cover. Back in 1991 I saw them in concert and they did an extended version of "Over My Head" that rocked my world. Great stuff man! 🤘
  6. I can see why this would be a personal favorite. There is lots to like in this one. Lovely song. Well done.
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    Tomahawk

    Another gem I almost missed. loved the lyrics and the guitar solo. I do think that the vocal performance lacked a little energy in the verses. overall a great tune.
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    Today Is Everything

    So glad I decide to go digging through the older post because I would have missed this Gem if I hadn't. Wonderful song.
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    Guilty Fingers

    Thanks for the listen and tips I'll keep them in mind as I continue my practice.
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    Face Up - Rock Song Idea

    It sounds good. Without a vocal melody though, it is hard to say just how good it could be. As it sits right now, it really needs the vocals to take it out of the nothing special category.
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    When You're Alone

    I like the piano, and those lyrics are great. Almost sounds like it would go well with Pink Floyd's The Wall. There are a few notes hear and there that sounded off but over all I really like this. Nicely done.
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    Guilty Fingers

    Thank you, I know the intro was too long but I could not get from my head to my fingers to cut out two of those parts with out fumbling it badly. It will take me sometime to work that out. I'll keep practicing.
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    Guilty Fingers

    I'm not sure if I should put this here because I am sure it will be quite awhile before I am capable of making this better than it is now. But I do want your feedback. This I my first 1+1. Not too bad for a beginner guitarist. It is a pretty rough recording but I managed to play it through in one take. I am still struggling to sing and play at the same time so I recorded the vocals separately. It needs a lot of polish but I'm quite proud of this one. Guilty Fingers Hey there black bird in my back yard what you looking for have you come looking for a soul to take to the devils door why you looking at me that way have you seen the guy next door Oh oh oh oh oooh I shift the blame once more. Hey there black bird sitting in my tree right out of Hitchcock’s film have you heard what I’ve done wrong and come to take me in why you looking at me that way there’s no way I’m as bad as him Oh oh oh oh oooh I shift the blame again. Guilty fingers point the blame Hounds of hell still know my name Only crimson rain can take my shame and wash away the stain Oh oh oh oh oooh I shift the blame in vain. Hey there white dove coming from above have you come at His command is it judgment that you bring or peace to a my waste land don’t be looking at me that way while His blood still stains my hands Oh oh oh oh oooh he takes the blame for man.
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    I Don't Mind

    I don't think I have anything to offer in way to make this sound better. I think you've got a great song here. For what it's worth, I thought the bass sounded dead center.
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    Where is the like button?

    Has the Like button been removed? Or is it just me that can't see it anymore?
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