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Mutrins last won the day on July 2 2017

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  1. Dreams

    Thanks so much! Yea it goes from talking about dreaming of them, to the dream, and then to what they want to happen in real life but are too afraid to say. Glad you like it. And I agree, working on something too much can possibly take away. This one, I'm working more on the arrangement and the production. Possibly shortening it and also fiddling around with the title. Thank you again!
  2. Dreams

    Working on shortening the song and possibly getting rid of the "you unfold me" part. It's about dreaming of being with the one you want but not able to say it in person, or in real life. Talking about dreaming of this person, seeing them in the dream, what they experience together, and what this person wants to experience with them in real life.
  3. Dreams

    Thank you, Tom!! So glad you liked it. Thank you for all of your compliments. I get what you mean about the title....and that is something I will think about. Thanks again! Micky
  4. Dreams

    Thank you for your feedback! Working on making it shorter, get to the chorus quicker, and also adding some more interesting effects. Thank you for the awesome constructive criticism!
  5. Dreams

    Thank you!! And thanks for that song reference. Working on drums
  6. Dreams

    Hey all, I think I posted this song over a year ago, but I've updated the production on it a bit. Wanted to get some feedback on it because I really like this one, but for some reason feel like I can't stop working on it. Would love to hear thoughts. Thanks so much! (updated link) Micky Lyrics: Tossing and turning fever is burning last night I dreamed of you last night I dreamed of you Under the starlight watching you take flight I had a dream of you I had a dream of you And we were walking down the same road I started running to you trying to get close And then I reached out my hand for you to see but you just kept on running kept on running away from me running away from me You unfold me Chorus: Don't you wanna come in my bed tonight? I don't wanna live the rest of my life without your love without your love Get out of my head and turn off the light Say you're gonna stay with me tonight Give me your love Give me your love I'll never say it Not to your face only when I dream of you Only when I dream of you And we were falling in a black hole And I was struggling to pull you close And then you reached out and took my hand and we Just kept on falling kept on falling eternally falling eternally You unfold me Chorus: Don't you wanna come in my bed tonight? I don't wanna live the rest of my life without your love without your love Get out of my head and turn off the light Say you're gonna stay with me tonight Give me your love Give me your love Don't you wanna come in my bed tonight? I don't wanna live the rest of my life without your love without your love Get out of my head and turn off the light I just wanna get you alone tonight Give me your love Give me your love
  7. Whatever I need to find

    Sounds great! You've got a Smashing Pumpkins kind of voice but better. Love the harmonies coming in. You've also got an Ed Sheeran quality to your voice. Great guitar playing as well. This is top notch stuff!!
  8. Kick it all day! on the beach

    Hey! This song has lots of potential. I agree, vocals are barely heard. they definitely need to be more up in the mix and should be front and center. Would love to hear that version.
  9. Thank you! Still going to play around with this. A piano and vocal only version sounds like a good idea. Thanks again! micky
  10. Thank you! Still might be working on this one.
  11. Thank you so much for your thorough critique. I truly appreciate it. Glad you liked it. Still might be working on some instrumentation and changing things, possibly adding a beat. Thanks again! Micky
  12. Thanks so much, Paul! Will be experimenting with adding drums and more instruments. The ending with the vinyl sound is just kind of a personal choice and sort of serves a different purpose as far as thoughts in my head about a music video. I appreciate your input and glad you liked it, in your humble Canadian opinion
  13. Hey TC, Thanks for your feedback. I did want to keep the instrumentation to a minimum, using mainly strings and piano. I do appreciate your input, though, and I will definitely experiment with more and see what I can do with it. Thanks again! Micky
  14. Hey folks, Working on another track, currently titled "I Thought That Would Be Me". It's a more ballad-y type, end of love, you can't help someone they can only help themselves sort of song. I appreciate any feedback! Thanks so much Lyrics:I don't wanna leave thisI feel like i've fallen too deep nowToo deep nowBut I keep giving chances Only to end up the fool again somehowAgain somehowAnd I know it's had believe me I've been thereBut once in a while, you've gotta let goAnd give everything you have to someone you knowChorus:And I thought that would be meI thought that would be meI thought that you'd be mineIf I gave you a little timeI thought that would be meI thought we were on the same damn roadBut you're headed somewhere on your ownGod, I was wrong all alongAnd I've been done so many timesI can't rememberI can't remember when it felt rightIf it even ever felt rightBut you were never mine, never mineNever mind, I was out of my mindHoping I could help you find all the answers in this short whileAll the answers in this short whileAnd I know it's hard, believe me i've been thereBut you've gotta give everything to someone you knowChorus:And I thought that would be meI thought that would be meI thought that you'd be mineIf I gave you a little timeI thought that would be meI thought we were on the same damn roadBut you're headed somewhere on your ownGod, I was wrong all alongAnd I know it's hard believe me I've been thereBut you've gotta give everything to someone you knowChorus:And I thought that would be meI thought that would be meI thought that you'd be mineIf I gave you a little timeI thought that would be meBut, I know that you're not mineI know that you're not mineI know that you're not mine
  15. Before Love Comes

    Got sort of a Leonard Cohen vibe happening which is super cool. I do agree that there is not a distinct enough chorus, especially for my pop ears. I would also like to hear more instruments come in. I do like this simple version, but I think the song could benefit from something more, maybe even strings or something. Drums and a full band would be awesome. But, that's just my opinion. I really like your delivery here and the theme of the song. Nice work!
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