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Mutrins

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About Mutrins

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    pop music, top 40
  1. Champion

    Thank you!!
  2. Champion

    I appreciate that! Thank you so much
  3. Champion

    Thank you!! It's one of those lyrics that just kind of came out and then for me it meant going to shock everyone with what they didn't expect. It might not make the most sense, but I kinda like it lol
  4. Champion

    Thank you!! Ryan Tedder comparison is a HUGE compliment
  5. Champion

    Aw thank you So happy you like it!!
  6. Champion

    haha ok so I won't say if it's a home studio or not then I went kind of back and forth with the distortion and I ended up liking the gritty feeling it gave it. Thank you for your feedback and kind words!! Micky
  7. Champion

    whaaaaaaaaaaat! thank you Glad you like it!!
  8. Hello hello!New song I've been working on called Champion. What it's turned into is sort of an uplifting, empowering "I can do it! bring it on!" type of anthem. The deeper context behind it is dealing with depression/anxiety, but can really fit into any situation (racism, sexism, LGBTQ, bullying, ageism, etc.) Would love any feedback. Thanks! (There are a couple of bad words, btw.)Mickyhttps://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/champion-7-2/s-aemmkLyrics:I've got a backbone for fuck's sakeI can take it a hit, take a shot yeaof anything you want (anything you want)You can throw me in the deep endwithout a paddle or a boator a mother-fucking floatI'll be alright (ooh i'll be alright)I'm full of shock, shock therapybaby you don't know meChorus:Oh, come and give it to me any way you wantI can take it like a manI can take it like a championGive it to meGive it to me goodGive it to meGive it to me goodI bet you didn't think you'd see me walking down this road againI guarantee double takes when I enter inYou've got another thing comingYou think you're slyThink you're slyThink you're slyBut I've got eyes in the back of my mindWell, surprise surpriseYou've got another thing comingCuz you don't knowI'm full of shock shock therapy baby, you don't know meChorus:Oh, come and give it to me any way you wantI can take it like a womanI can take it like a championGive it to meGive it to me goodGive it to meGive it to me goodBridge:Give me something good...Cuz I woke up this morning with the fire in my eyesBut by mid-afternoon I thought the flame had diedSo I picked up my chinI said "I've got one life"And starting right now I'm gonna do it rightRepeatI'm full of shock shock therapy baby, you don't know meChorus:Oh, come and give it to me any way you wantI can take it as I amI can take it like a championGive it to meGive it to me goodGive it to meGive it to me goodI can take it as I amI can take it like a champion
  9. Love songs like this! So fun to hear the story over the track. Only thing I might ask for is a chorus throughout. Like at the end when you're singing down for the count, but maybe something different that shifts gears a bit?
  10. So I can hear this as a Lorde song. I really like the simplicity of you and the piano. but I can hear this becoming a sort of alternative dance track (kind of like Lorde's Green Light). I am very interested to see which direction you go as far as production. You've got some chops!
  11. Sentimental

    I agree with febkebab....modern vocal with a "My Life" vibe. I would love to hear the vocal more, it gets very drowned out in the instrumental and I can't really hear the chorus at all. That synth comes in way too strong. It would work if the vocal was up. I love the idea here, it's got a 3OH!3 or Owl City type of vibe as well. Just needs a bit more tweaking and can be great! Micky
  12. Strong vocals and production right off the bat. Amazing Prophet has got some awesome production value here. Has anyone told you that you sound like Ciara? The only thing I would ask for is some more chord changes and a bit more variation in terms of the instrumental to accompany the vocals, but strong track, lyrics, and I do love the artwork for the single. Micky
  13. Summer

    Dancing in my seat to this one right now. Love that you added French into this. Woooo love that high note "summer is" And when all the vocals come in. This is like a modern throwback to the 60s beach boys era but also mixed in with Kokomo. And the ending coming in strong. I TRULY enjoyed this....super duper fun, well produced, and your vocals sound awesome. Literally the only note I have is the fade out at the end is a little weird and not as smooth as it could be. Well done, sir!!! Micky
  14. Lucky

    Hey guys! New track i'm working on called "Lucky". Feedback appreciated as always Thanks so much!Mickyhttps://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/lucky-6-24-3/s-mVdZPLyrics:It's 2AMAnd here I am againAll alone sitting here thinkin' boutevery single touch and all the ways you used to love meYou were my drugYou were the only oneI quit my life I needed you all day and nightAnd I didn't think I'd ever survive without youAnd now i'm like Oooh wondering whyOooh wondering whyYou decided I wasn't worthwhile after all this timeBut I like to close my eyes and remember whenChorus:You were the air inside my lungsI couldn't breathe without your touchYou were the blood inside my veinsYou made me laugh and drove me insaneAnd I was like How did I ever get you? How'd I ever get so lucky?How did I ever get you?How'd I ever get so lucky?It was 2AMWe were drinking againSitting roundMusic onTalking aboutEvery single dream and all the ways we'd try to catch themAnd now I'm like Oooh wondering whyOooh wondering whyYou decided it was way too much for you to try to love meChorus:But you were the air inside my lungsI couldn't breathe without your touchYou were the blood inside my veinsYou made me laugh and drove me insaneAnd I was like How did I ever get you? How'd I ever get so lucky?How did I ever get you?How'd I ever get so lucky?And I like to close my eyes and rememberHow did I every get you?How did I ever get you?And now I'm like Oooh wondering whyOooh wondering whyYou decided it wasn't worthwhile for you to try to love meRepeat chorus
  15. Dangerous

    Love this. You're a great lyricist as well as musician. And I actually like your voice on the track. This is super fun and perfect for the genre. I'm not the biggest country fan but I love this!! Micky
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