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Mutrins

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Mutrins last won the day on April 19

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About Mutrins

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    pop music, top 40
  1. Thank you!!
  2. Thank you so much!
  3. I truly do appreciate it!!
  4. Thank you
  5. Thank you so much for your feedback !!! Appreciate it!
  6. Glad you enjoyed it. It's kind of random and just kind of fun and weird. At least I think it is haha
  7. Thanks so much!!!
  8. Entering my song If I Told You into the April contest. Thanks! Micky https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/if-i-told-you-8-30 Song Title: If I Told You Music and Lyrics by Micky Shiloah We only talk when the lights go down We only see eye to eye When we're both looking at the ground And if I told you it was killing me to breathe Killing me to breathe Killing me to breathe next to you What would you do? Would you tell me that you want me The way that I want you? Is there a possibility of our worlds turning one from two? Chorus: And if I told you I like you Would you tell me you like me, too? Would you take a chance with me? A simple dinner and a movie And if we ended on high notes Could we do like the Eskimos? Would you let me hold you tight? And give you a kiss good night? 'Cause I could see us walking down by the water Or driving out to anywhere Happier than anybody else I swear I'll take good care of you And if I told you it was killing me to breathe Killing me to breathe Killing me to breathe without you What would you do? Would you tell me that you want me The way that I want you? Is there a possibility that I won't make myself a fool? Chorus: And if I told you I like you Would you tell me you like me, too? Would you take a chance with me? A simple dinner and a movie And if we ended on high notes Could we do like the Eskimos? Would you let me hold you tight? And give you a kiss good night? And if I told you I love you Would you tell me you love me, too? Would you spend your life with me? Run away and marry me? And we'll always have high notes We'll do just like the Eskimos And I'll always hold you tight And give you a kiss good night
  9. Thank you so much! Will try my best
  10. Thank you!!! I won't stop you! haha
  11. Hm seems to be working on my end..
  12. Hey all! I have a song called "Killer" and would love some feedback. It's an interesting little ditty lol Thanks! Micky Lyrics: I'm getting kind of wasted looking at you Won't you take me up to your hotel room We can have some fun not knowing me and you So let's give it a run give me 4, 3, 2... (one, one, one) Now we can keep it classy if you really want to Or we can f*ck around if you're feeling in the mood baby sit down in this chair and let me blindfold you Now don't you peak I'm a freak like you Didn't your mama tell you not to trust strangers? Especially strange men who are looking at you With a drink in their hand This was a bad idea but it could have been worse I'm not gonna hurt you--But I'm taking your purse Chorus: Cuz I'm not a killer I'm just a bad bad boy Currently unemployed So I gotta do what I gotta do But I'm not a killer I just take what I need to take And I make sure to mind my P's and Q's I apologize and thank you I'm not a killer You're smoking a cigar walking in NoBu Malibu I'm looking at your car dipped in that baby blue You know that color would go perfect with my Golden Goose shoes I'm making me a plan gimme 4,3,2 (give me one, give me one) I approach with a smile "Hello sir, how are you?" "Leave the keys in the car i'll park it safely for you" I sense a hesitation for a second or two But he gives me a nod and I tell him "Thank you" Now didn't your daddy tell you always trust your gut? Listen to your belly cuz it knows what's what It's super f*cking telling It said "bad idea", did you listen? No. But it's ok...you can Uber home. Chorus repeats
  13. electronic

    Solid production.! Would love to hear some vocals on this track and see where it can go
  14. Beautifully played!!
  15. Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed. Micky