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Mutrins

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  1. Mutrins

    I'm Fine

    Thank you for listening and for your critiques! Totally listened to them and worked the song a bit more. I am including the new link in this post, but will also paste it for you here: Thanks so much again! Micky
  2. Mutrins

    I'm Fine

    Thank you so much for your thorough critique ! I really appreciate it. I've gone in and made some changes ( a lot of what you said). and have the new link posted up here. I'll also share it here: I made it a quicker start and an earlier build up. Would love to hear your thoughts on this new version if you have the time Thanks again! Micky
  3. Mutrins

    I'm Fine

    @sumonicky Troye Sivan -- I'll take it!! haha thank you for all of the kind words! Glad you enjoyed. @songbird52 Thank you!! I'm such a stubborn one when it comes to lyrics so I think I might keep them but I am still working on this one a bit so things may change. Thank you for listening!!
  4. Hey all! I have a song that I started writing in 2012. It took a bunch of different turns and I finally came back to work on it again. Would love to hear your thoughts. As always, this is a build up and a listen from start to finish would be greatly appreciated. Comments on the production side would be helpful as well. Would love to see how this sounds on your systems (professional and not), especially the ending half which has given me the most trouble. Thank you so much! Micky Updated version here: Old version: https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/im-fine-demo-1/s-yTYjb It's three o'clock again and I'm here waiting for you I should have known You'd think I'd know better by now But I feel like I'm drowning in you and I can't go back I didn't ask for this And you couldn't give me that I feel a shift now Guess it's a thing now Chorus: And I'm not afraid to be alone I just didn't want to let you go And I kept waiting for the night You'd say you wish that we were more But now I... I'm fine I'm fine I'm broken but I'm gonna survive I just need a little time I'm fine I'm fine And I'm not gonna fight back I'm gonna walk instead And I'm not gonna tell you That you make it impossible Not to love you But I'm not gonna love you If you don't love me too Cuz if you want this Then you've gotta make time Or else I'm gonna miss The chance to make you mine I was waiting every day For you to come around But now my stars have fallen And my lights have dimmed down (repeat) I feel a shift now Guess it's a thing now Chorus: And I'm not afraid to be alone I just didn't want to let you go I kept on waiting for the night You'd say you wish that we were more But now I... I'm fine I'm fine I'm broken but I'm gonna survive I just need a little time I'm fine I'm fine
  5. Mutrins

    Even Though

    Love the melody from the beginning. got a cool 60s sort of beach boys type of vibe. also 80s....if that makes sense? lol so catchy, great harmonies and backing vox. "Even though" this song is sad...it's making me happy. and sad. I make sense, right? lol. I really enjoyed this!!! Micky
  6. Mutrins

    Sea Smells

    This is a cool beat with a nice ambient vibe. Would love to hear some vocals on it. But I appreciate what you've got here!
  7. Mutrins

    We're in Love, So...

    @kuya lol i see where he is coming from it's all good!!
  8. Mutrins

    We're in Love, So...

    Hey Gary! Thank you so much for your thorough critique. You made a lot of valid points and those are definitely things to think about. I still want to go in and fiddle around with this one a bit and see what else I can pull out of it and perhaps make it a bit more fun and interesting. Will be back to review your notes! Thanks again! Micky
  9. Mutrins

    We're in Love, So...

    Wow thank you so much!!! It's so hard to get noticed in this biz and get it in the right hands, but I'm trying to do that someway somehow ! I really appreciate your kind words Micky
  10. Mutrins

    We're in Love, So...

    Thank you so much!!!
  11. Mutrins

    We're in Love, So...

    Thank you!!! That "friends collect my records and then change my number" line is taken from the Gotye song Somebody That I Used To Know. I just thought it could fit perfectly! So glad you like it
  12. Mutrins

    We're in Love, So...

    Lol I intended it for it to be a typical silly love song and then change it up a bit by surprise Glad you like it! Thank you for listening!
  13. Mutrins

    We're in Love, So...

    Thank you so much, Paul! I'm trying, I'm trying! haha Thank you for listening!!
  14. Hey all! I've been working on a track and would love some feedback. It kind of came out of nowhere and turned into a sort of wedding/engagement/proposal/couples type of song. I imagine a flash mob happening? lol. Either way, would love to hear some thoughts. https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/were-in-love-sodemo/s-d3t4y Thanks so much! Micky Lyrics: Every day's a holiday when I'm with you Every day the sky is a perfect blue Every day I thank my lucky stars Cuz I don't know where I'd be without you Probably unhappy somewhere all alone Sitting on a park bench on my phone Watching all the couples and thinking There's something missing in my life But I am so glad I'm not dying by myself Unless you go first, then I'm dying by myself Yea but statistically speaking we've got some years left So let's go be in love... Chorus: We're in love so you can touch my body now And I can touch your body now We can touch our bodies now And if you feel like it We can dance to the rhythm in the pale moonlight Or we can catch a movie tonight Or go to bed and call it a night (we can do anything, cuz we're in love...) I'd be really sad if we ever broke up I couldn't come over and retrieve my stuff You would be my Gotye And I would have my friends collect my records and then change my number Cuz I can't imagine a life without you I'd definitely be in a support group Telling everybody I think there's something missing in my life But I am so glad we're not dying all alone I'll have my tombstone next to your tombstone Cuz realistically we have a limited time here So let's go be in love... (Come on) Chorus: We're in love so you can eat as much as you wanna I'll eat as much as I wanna We'll go to the gym tomorrow And if you feel like it I would like it if we spend the rest of our lives Giving kisses when we say good night Even after a really big fight Cuz we're in love... We're in love so you can touch my body now And I can touch your body now We can touch our bodies now And if you feel like it We can dance to the rhythm in the pale moonlight Or we can catch a movie tonight Or go to bed and call it a night
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