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  1. Mutrins

    Feels Good

    Thanks!!
  2. Mutrins

    Feels Good

    Thank you!!
  3. Mutrins

    Feels Good

    @ABull Thank you so much. Really happy to hear that you liked it. Much appreciated
  4. Hey all, Posting a new track here called Feels Good. I'm not quite 100% finished it with (but it pretty much is done). Just wanted to get some critiques and thoughts if you'd like to take a listen. As I do with most of my songs, It's a build up to the end so I would appreciate a full listen if you have the time This is a song I wrote about overcoming depression and anxiety (or any hardship) and finally coming out on the other side. Thank you!! Lyrics: Lately I've been feeling so fine I've been toying the line between reality and fantasy Something 'bout my insides telling me forget all the fine print And throw away anxiety Pre-Chorus: And I don't know what's gotten into me but I've been Seeing every color so vi-vividly and I've been Whistling while I work and I don't even know it Yea, I don't even know it Chorus: It feels good walking out the door to sunshine It feels good looking all the people in the eye And I don't know what I was waiting for No, I don't know what I was waiting for I don't know what the hold up was I guess it was me, myself, and I I was in a cloud of dust Now I'm in a big blue sky I had more control than I ever imagined And when I let go I gave in to the magic Pre-Chorus: And I don't know what's gotten into me but I've been Hearing everything with positivity and I've been Skipping my feet on the street and I didn't even know it No, I didn't even know it Chorus: It feels good walking out the door to sunshine It feels good looking all the people in the eye And I don't know what I was waiting for No, I don't know what I was waiting for Bridge: And all of a sudden the weight of the world came off of my shoulders I'm part of the people No longer on hills Pushing up boulders And all of a sudden I'm free as a bird And all of a sudden I'm part of the world All of a sudden... Chorus: It feels good walking out the door to sunshine It feels good looking all the people in the eye And I don't know what's gotten into me but I've been Hearing everything with positivity and I've been Skipping my feet on the street and I didn't even know it No I didn't even know it (fading out) It feels good walking out the door to sunshine It feels good looking all the people in the eye I don't know what I was waiting for...
  5. I really love the melody in the chorus!! Production is clean, crisp, and top notch. Love your guitar playing and the solos. The chorus is so great to me. And I DO love the fast-slow-fast-STOPPING it completely and into a beautiful guitar solo. I think you did this all very effectively. I Really appreciate all you've done here, great job!!! Micky
  6. Mutrins

    fish guts

    Very pretty song. It seems you have a knack for melody and lyrics! And you've got such a nice voice. Very soothing. I would love to hear a nice recorded version of this. Do you have any equipment that you might be able to do that? Even a not too expensive mic could do. Either way, really love what you've got here. Micky
  7. Mutrins

    The Way You Make Me Feel

    Thank you so much!! Will def keep that in mind. I may go back and revisit this at some point. Thanks again
  8. Mutrins

    Take This City

    Thank you very much!!!!
  9. Mutrins

    May Song Contest

    Thanks all!!! So happy to have gotten 2nd place I did not expect that!! I appreciate the votes. Congrats to everyone in the contest! This was such a fun, diverse group of songs to listen to. Micky
  10. Mutrins

    The Way You Make Me Feel

    Thank you!! I love rap-singing also i think that phrase works haha. So glad you like the song and thank you for your compliments. I am not classically trained at all actually. but that's cool that you thought i was! LOL. I don't necessarily try to sing a specific way, I just kind of do take after take after take until I feel like it sounds right. Thank you again for listening and for your kind words. Also, I heard your cover of La Vie En Rose and you killed it! such a beautiful cover of one of my favorite songs! Micky
  11. Mutrins

    The Way You Make Me Feel

    Thank you, Paul!! Glad you like it and thank you for your input. Will take all of it into consideration Micky
  12. Mutrins

    May Song Contest

    The Way You Make Me Feel Music and Lyrics and Vocals by Micky Shiloah https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/the-way-you-make-me-feel/s-dQeD0Lyrics:It was the one night that we got to talkingI felt a connectionDefinitely not there beforeIt was your eyes on meIt was my eyes on theeIt was like suddenlyI felt this feelingYou hit me like an uptown bus in New York CityLike the first time I had 10 shots of whiskeyJust like the time I jumped out of an airplane into the skyAnd I fell like a piano coming down from the 40th storyRome when the Barbarians came for the gloryThe first time i heard Coldplay "Fix You" and I criedAnd I don’t wanna lose this feelingCuz I like the way you areThe way you areI don't wanna lose this feelingCuz I like the way we areThe way we areThe way you make me feel(Chorus)I like the way you make me feelI like it, I like it, I like itI like the way you make me feelCould it be destiny Could it be you and meYou’ve never given me a reason to be nervous around youIt could be the words you spokeIt could be this Jack and CokeIt doesn’t matter cuz i’m in itI’m in it with youAnd I don't wanna lose this feelingCuz I like the way you areThe way we areThe way you make me feel(Chorus)You give me butterflies I've never feltAll the stars in the sky They start falling around usI never thought it was possible I could be yoursAnd you could be mine(that's the way you make me feel)Bridge:You hit me like a calm before the stormHit me like the light at dawnAnd I fell like the rain dropping out of the clouds I fell for every word coming out of your mouthI fell like the rainI fell like the rainI fell like the rainI fell like the rainAnd I don't wanna lose this feelingCuz I like the way we areThe way we areThe way you make me feel(Chorus)And that's the way you make me feelYou give me butterflies I've never feltAll the stars in the sky They start falling around usI never thought it was possible I could be yoursAnd you could be mine(That's the way you make me feel)That's the way you make me feelThat's the way you make me feel
  13. Mutrins

    The Way You Make Me Feel

    Thank you!! I almost did another section similar to the "bus" rapid fire section, but decided against it and to slow it down for the bridge. It might be a bit too reverby. And I recorded so many vocals for it because I'm crazy and I feel like the more overdubs the better haha It was my eyes on thee was also a question in my mind, but after a while I got used to it and I kind of like it. It's meant to be a little cheeky, but that's definitely something to consider. If I could come up with a better line, would totally change it. I'll see! Thank you for your observations! Micky
  14. Mutrins

    The Way You Make Me Feel

    Thank you so much!!! This took a lot of work haha I still feel like I'm not done with it. But I really appreciate your words. Thanks! Micky
  15. Mutrins

    The Way You Make Me Feel

    Hey Gary! Thank you for taking a listen. I agree that the butterflies and stars line is cliche, but yea it does create a contrast and (in my view) I wanted it to be sort of a fantasy land. I tried to keep it more simple but I feel so married to these lyrics at this point. I will take that into consideration though! Thanks again! Micky
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