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About iloveadamruinseverything

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  • Lyricist, Composer or Both?
    Composer first and Lyricist second
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    video games like Final Fantasy
  1. Reach Out

    I love the intentions!!! I think it might be more effective if you took a more indirect way of showing this, like by telling a story, than by using command sentences where you just tell the listener what to do. The music definitely shows potential too. I'm no expert at recording or mixing/mastering, but it sounds like it needs some polishing in that area. I don't understand enough ins and outs of that to give any specific advice, so hopefully someone with more experience in that area will post something.
  2. Singing and Illness

    First thing to mention: It could be a ton of things. Anything from Mononucleosis to Chronic Lyme Disease to bacterial infections to fungal infections to parasitic infections etc. For example, when you've taken antibiotics, they can kill the good bacteria in your body (in the gut, sinuses, etc.) making you vulnerable to fungal infections. Another example, when you've been sick with any kind of infection for a while, you become vulnerable to parasitic infections, and there are so many different parasites that can cause so many different symptoms. Most doctors won't look into these possibilities, even though they really really REALLY should. Antibiotics only work on bacterial infections! Anyway, you've got to find a great doctor who will really investigate everything until he finds the cause(s) instead of just spending 10 seconds with you and immediately writing an antibiotic prescription without any thought to it. You have my sincerest best wishes on this. It could be allergies, but you need a doctor who will investigate it. You may not have to just learn to live with it, even if that's what a lazy doctor tells you. As for allergies getting worse, everyone with an allergy to pollen has seen their allergies get exponentially worse over the last few decades because the pollen amount has increased exponentially, and most scientists think it's because of climate change btw. I'll come back and maybe edit this post after I read more in the topic. I just wanted to get this typed up quickly. edit: I'm glad you figured it out! I've had mold-caused problems before too, and they're terrible! Glad you got it fixed!
  3. second post to introduce my self and talent

    I love the music and the intentions of the song! It seems like English is your second language. Some of the lines are a little awkward in ways that a native English speaker wouldn't write it, like this line for example: "Can you see it how pretty those colors with breeze" The "with breeze" is the awkward part of that line of the lyrics. I'm not sure how to really give advice for this since fixing lines like this would entail becoming fluent in English or spending enough time around native English speakers to learn the intricacies of the language, which is way more than I could do by just posting a few messages here. It may be best to just take a shortcut and ask someone else to write the English lyrics for you too, if this is the case, or write the lyrics yourself in your native language. Anyway, I enjoyed it. Thank you for posting it.
  4. Collaborator

    I enjoyed it a lot. It's excellent! I could write English lyrics, but I can't sing so um, good luck I guess. Hopefully someone else here who can sing as well notices this gem.
  5. "Save the earth"

    I'm not surprised some people think nuclear power is safe, because the corporate media never covers stuff like this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PXrQlluhby4 It's the same reason a lot of people don't know that Obama also approved the production of nuclear power plants. Most recently, this was caught on tape: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0TFcJX4Mp0 (skip to 11:50 on the video) The only real way to stop destroying the Earth is to switch to green energy. That's my foremost point to make - that the corrupt democrats and corrupt republicans both do what the special interests bribe them to do, and the only way we'll ever change things is if we hold both sides accountable instead of giving whichever is your side a free pass. The irony is that what Nicaragua said is absolutely correct: the Paris Climate Agreement didn't actually have anything in it to force countries to change, which is why people like Rex Tillerson (CEO of Exxon) supported the Paris Climate Agreement, and why it was completely pointless anyways. It was the perfect sort of thing to trick people into thinking Obama was the "change we can believe in" vehicle he pretended to be when he ran in 2008 while having his campaign funded by special interests. I don't want what I posted here to be interpreted as "let's let Trump get a pass on this because Obama did it too." Trump has done exactly what Obama did in 2008 - say he'll do progressive things like give every American healthcare while taking tons of money from Big Pharma and the health insurance corporations, say he'll cut our military spending and spend that money fixing America instead while taking tons of money from private military contractors, say he'll drain the swamp while taking tons of money from Wall Street, etc. (The irony is that Trump has made good on all of Hillary's campaign promises, hence the Hillary voters are the ones who ought to be rejoicing.) Key points about the Paris Climate Agreement: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gd-l3EwFmFE Change will only come from clean money candidates like Bernie Sanders, Tulsi Gabbard, Jill Stein, Kashama Sawant, Nina Turner, etc. In order to tell whether a candidate will actually do what they say they're going to do, reference either of these sites to look up from whom they've taken tons of money: https://www.opensecrets.org/ https://votesmart.org/ Also, draftbernie.org !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ... I love the intention of the song. These are my suggestions for the song, to hopefully make it more effective. Truth to power! Smash the establishment! Switch to PAPER BALLOTS ONLY!!!
  6. What the Mainstream Media Isn't Telling You

    When Jill Stein gets 5+% of the vote in November, the Green Party will get federal funding and automatic ballot access (in most states). This will make the Greens able to run a stronger presidential campaign in 2020 as well as able to run stronger local and statewide campaigns for other offices. Numerous states will only allow the Green Party to run candidates for other offices if the Green Party also runs a presidential candidate that year. The Green Party has over 250 candidates running for office across the U.S. in this year alone as well as an unprecedented surge in donations and volunteers. The Democrat Party will only try to earn progressives' votes if progressives withhold their votes away from the Democrats in at least some elections. WikiLeaks has revealed that Hillary knew Saudi Arabia and Quatar were funding ISIS when she sold them weapons as Secretary of State (in exchange for donations to the Clinton Foundation, which only spends 10% of its donations on helping people). WikiLeaks also revealed that Hillary has both a "private position" and a "public position" on whether to regulate Wall Street. WikiLeaks also revealed that Hillary thinks certain races of people ("whites," "asians," and "jewish people") will succeed no matter how much hardship they face while other races of people ("blacks," "muslims," "latinos," and "roma" whatever "roma" means) will fail no matter how many opportunities they're afforded in life. I could post more WikiLeaks revelations, but I'll instead just implore everyone to do their own searching online for WikiLeaks info. I just posted what I think are the three worst things revealed in the leaks to my knowledge. (And btw, WikiLeaks has never printed anything false before, so they're actually far more credible than any politician or other news outlet. WikiLeaks has even won Peabody awards for its exemplary journalism.) We can get Jill Stein to that magical 5+%!!! This is our chance, because turnout for Hillary and Trump will be so low!!! Your vote for Jill Stein is so much more than just a protest vote!!! Voting for the lesser evil will never actually be good enough!!! This is the only way to NOT waste your vote!!!
  7. Party Unity, People!

    Here's the juiciest parts of the Democratic Convention... During Hillary Clinton's first speech: The Bernie delegates protested by walking out on Hillary's first speech. The next day, before Hillary Clinton's second speech: Hillary responds by kicking out as many Bernie delegates as she could, filling their seats with paid seat fillers, and blocking any remaining Bernie delegates' booing with white noise machines. Of course, the mainstream media didn't cover any of this. Instead, the mainstream media insisted that Democrat voters have united behind Hillary. Needless to say, I'll be voting for Jill Stein in November. Here's a speech of hers and an interview for you to enjoy:
  8. Party Unity, People!

    1) WikiLeaks released over 23,000 emails marked as having classified information from Hillary Clinton's private email server this week. Upon examining the emails, it's painfully obvious that they're classified. 2) WikiLeaks also released 20,000 emails showing the Democrat National Committee rigging things against Bernie. There's now a class action lawsuit against the DNC for fraud over this. Since Bernie raised $22 million in small donations, the DNC could end up having to pay a lot of money to Bernie's supporters. I suppose $22 million is just pocket change to Wall Street though. Here's a good video on both: And the lawsuit: I know these are both things we suspected, but now we have proof. Also, look at how corporatist/conservative the Democrat Platform is: And we're supposed to fall in line this week...
  9. Every Liberal and Centrist American Needs to See This

    Sorry, Ilove, I tried to listen but the video kept freezing up right after he started to get into his iib talking points about universal health care etc. Probably nothing I haven't already heard from the lib manifesto. I tried listening on google but the same thing happened. I think this Jimmy Dore video may be too full of lib propaganda that even the servers won't let anyone listen to what this guy is selling. That's odd. The video works for me. Does it work for everyone else? (And you'd be surprised if you watched the whole video. It's slamming people like Romney - establishment Republicans that opposed Trump.)
  10. Every Liberal and Centrist American Needs to See This

    This perfectly explains Trump (and Brexit): (You'll like this video, BarneyBoy.) So both of those videos combined will give everyone a solid understanding of U.S. politics.
  11. This video covers it VERY well: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a4YJRRdVHhg (I know he says "why Bernie won" early in the video. He clearly meant "why Bernie did so well relative to Dennis Kucinich in 2008, Lawrence Lessig in 2012, etc." Don't let that stop you from watching the whole video!) This also very succinctly explains and sums up what is happening, politically, in the U.S. So if you don't follow politics, this is an excellent starting point. So much for "incremental change..."
  12. 49 More

    This one sounds better, because there's bonus assonance between lines 1 and 3 (Has and Madness, lost and thought).
  13. 49 More

    I love it. Very powerful, indeed. Neat guitar composition, too, I should add.
  14. Wouldn't That Be Nice

    It's very interesting, and you do have the perfect voice for it.
  15. President Trump

    I just came back to post this. A few posts back, I mentioned how Hillary Clinton is taking money from Bush donors, but I didn't look up the sources at the time. Well, I found this video that covers the sources very well, as well as providing all the nuanced details: (Nowadays, you need to look through the internet to be informed. None of the mainstream media covers stuff like this - stuff that shows how terrible Hillary is.) Voting Clinton or Trump guarantees abuse. Voting Jill Stein or Gary Johnson gives you a chance of actually not getting abused.
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