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ozarkbluefox

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About ozarkbluefox

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    http://https://soundcloud.com/ozarkbluefox

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    Male
  • Location
    Missouri
  • Interests
    Keyboard, photography.

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  • Lyricist, Composer or Both?
    both
  1. Forever In My Heart I felt that you were beautiful The moment that I met you And when I felt your first caress I never could forget you Forever in my heart You'll always be Always be No matter where you are My love for you Always lives inside me For you are Forever in my heart No other girl I've ever known Has given love so sweetly When day is done and we're alone Your tender touch completes me I thank my lucky stars That you are mine Ever mine Whether near or far My love for you Always lives inside me For you are Forever in my heart copyright 2016
  2. I thought both your posts were great. Very talented.
  3. I liked it. Good job.
  4. As the last fading rays Lights the fresh-dug grave And the evening air begins to chill Today we laid to rest The one who loved me best And always will She was the first one who ever loved me And the last one who'd turn away They say that Heaven gained an angel An angel who prayed As I walk away from this graveside There is one thing I can say I love you, Mama And I will love you Until my dying day
  5. In a later version, I changed walk me home to walk with home. I copied and pasted the wrong version. I have most of my songs on Blogger as Crooked Fire and also on my computer. Now that I've read both comments, I see that it is confusing.
  6. I thought about that when I wrote this. The song was originally about a cousin who died. She loved Native American lore, thus the reference to Buffalo. She wasn't my sister, but the fraternity to which she belonged saw her as their leader until the day she died. Very beloved. As I wrote the song I included all sisters, especially my own who is one the most courageous, strong survivors I know. Hardship makes us tough, but character makes us gentle with those that need kindness. I really appreciate your input and praise, and your criticism is equally welcomed.
  7. I liked it, Greg, you have a unique way of writing songs.
  8. These are the lyrics I've written so far Well, the band is playing To the bodies swaying as the neon glows The neon glows For the night is young But the time will come When the bar will close Yes. the bar will close Well, some are them hoping that they can take somebody home Somebody home Some of them are hoping that they don't spend their life alone Their life alone Love is in the air tonight They're looking for someone who's right There's no way for them to know Now is it love or is it just touch and go Is it touch and go Touch and go Well, there was a time when his words and wine Would her lead to bed Lead her to bed And if he was fine, well, there was a time He'd turn her head Yes, turn her head But now these days she's hoping that she can find so much more So much more Now-a-days she wanting someone worth living for Worth living for Love is in the air tonight She's looking for someone who's right There's no way that she knows Is it love or is it just touch and go Touch and go Touch and go Oh yes - that will work perfectly I think ! Since hearing your track the other day it's been on my mind. Your lyrics so evocative, late night, going home, and that brilliant line "is it love or just touch and go" are just right. Thanks, Greg, I appreciate your comments.
  9. I really liked the dulcimer music and the message. I once had a dulcimer, this makes me wish I had learned to play it better.
  10. These are the lyrics I've written so far Well, the band is playing To the bodies swaying as the neon glows The neon glows For the night is young But the time will come When the bar will close Yes. the bar will close Well, some are them hoping that they can take somebody home Somebody home Some of them are hoping that they don't spend their life alone Their life alone Love is in the air tonight They're looking for someone who's right There's no way for them to know Now is it love or is it just touch and go Is it touch and go Touch and go Well, there was a time when his words and wine Would her lead to bed Lead her to bed And if he was fine, well, there was a time He'd turn her head Yes, turn her head But now these days she's hoping that she can find so much more So much more Now-a-days she wanting someone worth living for Worth living for Love is in the air tonight She's looking for someone who's right There's no way that she knows Is it love or is it just touch and go Touch and go Touch and go
  11. This is a dance instrumental I am writing, still haven't written lyrics.I have been hoping to write a great theme song or partner with a singer-songwriter but have had no luck. Starting to lose optimism and motivation.
  12. Thanks, I appreciate your comments.
  13. I Dreamed a Demon's Dream Last night I dreamed the whole world obeyed me I got what I wanted, there was no hand to stay me And all the world was now mine to own But in the end, I walked the world alone It was a dream An evil dream The kind of thing That demons dream And when I awakened My conscience was shaken By last night's demon dream For there are those who now walk among us Who rob and kill, and steal and plunder The only things that ever will save us Are simple things our fore-fathers gave us Like peace and love And liberty Like truth and faith And dignity Forgiving our brothers Loving all others Will cease the demon's dreams
  14. Is This the Way Every time I think that I have gotten over you There's nothing I can do But say good-bye I toss and turn and long and yearn And hurt the whole night through Sometimes I'm so blue That I could die Is this the way that our love ends Sad and broken-hearted Barely even friends Is this the way that true love dies Fallen from the heavens Like angels from on high Is this the way Is this the way That our love dies I can still remember When I first saw your face I felt your warm embrace Your arms about me Now there are things So many things That time can't erase even if you choose life without me Is this the way that our love ends Sad and broken-hearted Barely even friends Is this the way that true love dies Fallen from the heavens Like angels from on high Is this the way Is this the way That our love dies