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mick70 last won the day on January 31 2017

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About mick70

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    A Muse's Muse

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  • Gender
    Male
  • Location
    Australia
  • Interests
    Cartooning, writing, nerdy stuff

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  • Lyricist, Composer or Both?
    lyricist
  • Musical Influences?
    bob dylan, billy bragg,

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  1. mick70

    Collaboration Challenge: Emotional Impact

    I gave Dino rider some lyrics but I feel sorry for him, my ideas are never that straight forward but cross fingers.
  2. mick70

    My Biggest Fan

    Right up my alley...... loved it
  3. mick70

    Geriatric rock

    9th don’t get the wrong idea this was just a humourous lyric so I had bend reality a little bit, I actually respect elderly.
  4. mick70

    I'm losing you

    The sentiments are right but there is no reason to focus on it definitely needs at least a verse of back story and the chorus maybe im losing you but I can’t let go im losing you im losing you
  5. mick70

    Elevator Music

    True words I think you’re right it needs a bridge or a middle verse and is elevator music supposed to be in both verses.
  6. mick70

    Geriatric rock

    That’s good I like that if you can hear me say, heeeeeeey! turn on your hearing aids and say, heeeeey! put in your dentures and say, heeeeey
  7. mick70

    That Girl In The Polka-Dot Dress

    I really love the style i think it would sound great but it just might be me but verse 1 has me a bit confused. I had to look up tom collins but that appears to be a cocktail, so does that means she's having drinks with a guy with a better voice than you? thought there was also room for a little bit more story but to be frank if the music comes out the way it sounds in my head it probably wouldn't matter.
  8. mick70

    Geriatric rock

    I liked the suggestions and i made changes where applicable. I didn't change much on the bridge because i purposely wanted the memory loss line to trigger a repeat in the verses
  9. mick70

    Geriatric rock

    Thanks for the replies I enjoyed this one but I already thought the chorus was weak just wasn’t sure where to go with it and I was iffy about using the word dementia might change it to memory loss
  10. mick70

    Serenity

    I really enjoyed these lyrics my only thought is that one more erratic verse would help break the flow for a moment
  11. mick70

    Lonely Man Blues

    Yeah I like this one got a good feel to it and love the "Got no game, no dollars, no use" line
  12. mick70

    Geriatric rock

    Back to weird and wacky ..... not sure if the chorus works........ and I actually do like old people I’ll be one soon enough Geriatric rock (Intro) There’s a new dance sensation That’s taking over the nation And giving palpitations To the older generation And it goes like this (V1) Dislocate your hip like you just don’t care Shake till the pink rinse comes out of your hair Jump round in your Arch supported feet Dance till ya Pacemaker skips a beat (C) Oh yeah Do the geriatric rock Yeah the geriatric rock The biggest dance craze For the peeps with greys It’s time to rock And tap your toes And forget all Your nursing home woes So get up for So off your easy chair The new dance craze For the new dance craze The old age rock It's a fountain of youth For the peeps folks with greys (V2) Swing your walking stick in the air Dance around in granny underwear Stomp till your dentures all fall out And your saggy skin flaps about (C) Oh yeah Do the geriatric rock Yeah the geriatric rock The biggest dance craze For the peeps with greys It’s time to rock And tap your toes And forget all Your nursing home woes So get up for So off your easy chair The new dance craze For the new dance craze The old age rock It's a fountain of youth For the peeps folks with greys (Bridge) Let the dementia If your memory loss kicks in So we can do it all again We can just do it all again (V3) Dislocate your hip like you just don’t care Shake till the pink rinse comes out of your hair Jump round in your Arch supported feet Dance till ya Pacemaker skips a beat (C) Oh yeah Do the geriatric rock Yeah the geriatric rock The biggest dance craze For the peeps with greys It’s time to rock And tap your toes And forget all Your nursing home woes So get up for So off your easy chair The new dance craze For the new dance craze The old age rock It's a fountain of youth For the peeps folks with greys (V4) Swing your walking stick in the air Dance around in granny underwear Stomp till your dentures all fall out And your saggy skin flaps about (C) Oh yeah Do the geriatric rock Yeah the geriatric rock The biggest dance craze For the peeps with greys It’s time to rock And tap your toes And forget all Your nursing home woes So get up for So off your easy chair The new dance craze For the new dance craze The old age rock It's a fountain of youth For the peeps folks with greys
  13. mick70

    Lipstick stain

    Thanks glad you liked it
  14. mick70

    Roads Untraveled

    be interesting to hear how it would come out musically. i like the lyrics
  15. mick70

    New Collaboration Contest: Emotional Impact

    Don’t know if I’m worthy but I’d give it a try
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