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Qindfish

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Qindfish last won the day on October 14 2017

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  1. let it die I won't say it once more I don't care if it's how you really feel Let it die I won't say it again I don't care if you can't find your next meal and it's hurts to say that I have always felt this way and it brings me pain that you don't always feel the same about this I don't know you I don't know you Let it die I don't why you try even when your so sure that you will fail Let it die It will not bring you life even though it's not really how you feel And i don't know why you are like this I never cry and it makes me blue that you would choose to do this I don't know you I don't know you I don't know you I don't know you
  2. smoke in your eyes

    I can tell you have a good sense of melody but most lines fall apart a bit. If you want my advice listen back to yourself and focus on the melodically interesting parts and try think about why they're interesting. There's something there though! Keep it up.
  3. Fighter's Eyes

    Some hooky melodic lines at the beginning, I'd think about starting again with the first section and building on that. It's good as is but those parts felt special. Beautifully recorded too.
  4. The Story of a Hermit

    Wow two things I like a lot! People don't give enough credit to the stuff he wrote as a recluse. Thanks!
  5. Age Gracefully

    Cheers! Was written for someone else. Juries still out if he'll use it!
  6. Romantic Comedy (Produced)

    Cheers! Thanks for listening!
  7. The Story of a Hermit

    Thanks a lot! The breath was not my intention, that would be the cigarettes! I'm going to play it on my local radio in a month, I'll see if I can work the breath in. Thanks again!
  8. The Story of a Hermit

    Wow! Thanks. It's my first "funny" song so I'm glad some of it hit!
  9. The Story of a Hermit

    Thanks! You got me listening to her again!
  10. The Story of a Hermit

    Oh cool thanks!
  11. The Story of a Hermit

    Thanks man! Regina Spektor! not too shabby! As a kid I was in a studio where she was live on the radio once and mocked her piano playing by mimicking it. She was not enthused, now she's one of my favourite artists! Thanks again
  12. The Story of a Hermit

    Cheers! Yeah i agree it's not really something you'd hear on an album. Thanks for listening!
  13. The story of a hermit it goes like this you leave it to the other kids till you feel you don’t exist and maybe you don’t the story of hermit it’s one to tell got to say you doing well got to keep it to your self and maybe you will a singing bird without the melody write yourself a book of sonnets build a scrapbook filled with pizzas The story of a hermit is never never heard but it’s lived on his own terms loneliness is only learnt so how about that Prank call a priest with out regret fall down a well just to get wet mail yourself cards to the wrong address order some knives get the full set Buy yourself a robin reliant put up signs that say no thanks start cashing pennies at the big bank claim the titanic never sank
  14. Age Gracefully

    Cheers! I'm writing it for someone who's a better lyricist then me, so hoping he can come up with better lyrics.
  15. I’m beginning to age gracefully Though the love that I once new has all abandoned me Now i’m sitting in a world of my creation no-one wants to get old unless you make them I’m beginning to age gracefully I just sit at home and watch the tv no-one really comes to bother me what am I to do when I don’t see Don’t rock the boat Don’t rock the boat Don’t rock the boat Don’t rock the boat I’m beginning to think I have it made I just sit at home and call on my three maids there’s no-one I rely on ‘cept myself here I am looking through the shelfs Don’t rock the boat Don’t rock the boat Don’t rock the boat Don’t rock the boat Don’t rock the boat Don’t rock the boat Don’t rock the boat Don’t rock the boat
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