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    Tyler Porter

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    Raleigh, North Carolina
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    Country music, Southern rock, and heavy metal

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    Country, rock, pop, metal, rap
  1. tomcat

    I like this as well. Very different and unique something about it just resonates with me. I agree with the other a dirty guitar would sound good on this. Nice lyric!
  2. California Beauty (Carolina Roots)

    glad you liked it i actually had another verse I decided to cut from the song black dress and em high heels slow dancing to some vinyl little Conway, little George Strait twerk it to some 2 chains Got the donk for the tonk Sipping bub In the club Got that,
  3. California Beauty (Carolina Roots) Tee Porter Chorus California Beauty, Carolina Roots Daddy's Money N' Momma's attitude California Beauty, Carolina Roots Purse with a puppy, and a pair of old boots California Beauty, Carolina Roots Verse 1 Ray bans and a ball cap Bikini and it's unstrapped You lean in and ask me if i can help you with ya sun screen It's so crazy how ya do me when ya do me like ya do me in the backseat of ya pink jeep With a lift kit jus' the mirror ply' ya lipstick hand on my thigh when i'm sitting to you're right you got that, Chorus California Beauty, Carolina Roots Daddy's Money N' Momma's attitude California Beauty, Carolina Roots Purse with a puppy, and a pair of old boots California Beauty, Carolina Roots Flannel and a white T blue jean and em' Nikes You lean in and kiss me and i get a little trippy i start spinning like the ceiling when i'm trippin I aint kidding girl them kisses are addicting girl them kisses are addicting girl.....girl....girl (Echoed) Chorus California Beauty, Carolina Roots Daddy's Money N' Momma's attitude California Beauty, Carolina Roots Throwing back Natty's, with a butterfly tattoo California Beauty, Carolina Roots Daddy's Money N' Momma's attitude California Beauty, Carolina Roots So damn sexy, in a pair of Daisy Dukes California Beauty, Carolina Roots California Beauty Carolina Roots
  4. Kiss Me in the dark

    Think you guys for the feedback. It seemed none of you were crazy about the gas line so I made an edit to the chorus which I will put below. I also don't like the tumble weeds line gonna tweak with that as well. If I come up with anything decent I'll revise it. Thanks again. Revised Chorus So take off that dress Let down your hair Slip into bed I'll take it from there All we need is a spark A kiss in the dark Wanna make it last As long as I can Kiss me in the dark Kiss me in the dark
  5. Kiss Me in the dark

    Kiss Me in The Dark Tee Porter Intro Kiss me in the dark Kiss me in the dark Opening riff Verse 1 3 A.M., we left our friends Finally alone Jus' me n' you, the bedroom lights Down low Candles lit, a romantic scent And glow Chorus So take off that dress Let down your hair Crawl into bed I'll take it from there All we need is a spark To burn like gas A kiss in the dark Wanna make it last As long as I can so, Kiss me in the dark Kiss me in the dark Verse 2 Hide and seek, you know where will be Found Underneath, this satin sheets Rollin' around Like tumble weeds, from a breeze In some old ghost town Chorus So take off that dress Let down your hair Crawl into bed I'll take it from there All we need is a spark To burn like gas A kiss in the dark Wanna make it last As long as I can so, Kiss me in the dark Kiss me in the dark Bridge Fuel my desire I'll give ya what ya need We got No where to go And no where to be Chorus So take off that dress Let down your hair Crawl Into bed And and girl I swear All we need is a spark To burn like gas A kiss in the dark Wanna make it last So Take off that dress Let down your hair Crawl into bed I'll take it from there All we need is a spark To burn like a gas A kiss in the dark Wanna make it last As long as I can Kiss me in the dark Kiss me in the dark It feels so good to be your man Kiss me in the dark Kiss me in the dark
  6. She Lied

    I love this This! Love the bumpkin line. Great lyric. I got no suggestions on this. I think it is well written and you found a way to get humor into a song about a girl cheating her man. Sounds like a country song to me lol. Nice write!!
  7. How love dies

    I like the idea, it reads very personal and I feel most listeners will be able to connect with the general message. But it gets real repetitive and I lost interest by the second verse. It all kinda flows together and sounds the same. I think this is missing a chorus, and I also think you could trim this down a little bit. The way it is now o ce music is to it it's gonna be close to a 6 minute song it is very difficult to keep a listeners attention for that long. My suggestion is to cut at least one of those four verses out. Create a solid chorus the express the emotions and feelings well. As always stash or trash. I think you have a solid foundation just needs a little work. Thanks for sharing.
  8. I Want You

    Thank you both for the feedback. I never thought about it as I might be coming off as a stalker. Thanks for pointing that out. I am gonna try to add something to this to make it seem like the girl he is referring to wants him like he wants her and maybe that will take away the crazy guy issue. Thanks.
  9. Cloud gazing

    Hey really like this song idea! And I thinknyou have a good foundation to start with. In the first set of verses instead of repeating lifting our head to open the sky. What if you changed it then we cloud gazed, yeah we cloud gazed I think that reinforces the title and sets up the chorus. Your chorus and pre chorus wasn't my favorite I think it needs to really hit he listener with great imagery. When your cloud gazing you can imagine those clouds are anything. Maybe you could dive into that a little more and hit the listeners a little bit more. All in all I really like the lyric and I think you have a great foundation to start with. As always stash or trash good luck with this one.
  10. I Want You

    I Want You Tee Porter This song is hard to get the rhythm without hearing the music i have for it, but I wanted to put it on here to get some advice on the lyric portion. The general flow of the chorus to help get a feel for the lyric and the rhythm is Like a junkie (pause) wants a dime bag (pause) That's how bad I want you, Like a drunk girl (pause) wants a tattoo (pause) I want you, I want you Any help on this would be much appreciated Thanks! Verse 1 Out of my mind (repeats soft in the background) Out of my head (repeats soft in the background) Out of the body experience Pre chorus My friends try to cut me off I buy another round They say I've had enough I say let's shut it down Tag I can't help the things I do When I want you Chorus Like a junkie, wants a dime bag That's how bad I want you Like a drunk girl wants a tattoo I want you, I want you I want you round 2 A.M. When i get that craving For your lips, your kiss Your love, is my drug And I can't help the things I do When I want you Verse 2 My reckless, behavior Has gotten quite the reputation The cops have, a cell block Waiting like a reservation Tag Ain't no telling what I'll do When I want you Chorus Like a junkie, wants a dime bag That's how bad I want you Like a drunk girl wants a tattoo I want you, I want you I want you round 2 A.M. When I get that craving For your lips, your kiss Your love, is my drug And I can't help the things I do When I want you Pre chorus My friends try to cut me off I buy another round They say it's time to go I say let's burn it down Tag I can't help the things I do When I want you Chorus Like a junkie, wants a dime bag That's how bad I want you Like a drunk girl, wants a tattoo I want you, i want you I want you round 2 A.M. When I get that craving For your lips, your kiss Your love, is my drug And I can help the things I do When I want you When I want you No I can't help the things I do When I want you.
  11. Another for review - "Moments"

    I really like this, one suggestion I could offer up is the first verse when you go out on a Monday off a drink, that's a little off to me. You change that to Friday and then the second verse use Saturday. The weekend seems more appropriate for a date night. Other than that I really like the lyric. The hook is great.
  12. Permanent

    Thanks for all the feedback guys. I think a common issue is the bridge, and that definitely needs to be re written, and I need to correct my grammar errors. I think all of you for the feedback and advice on this one.
  13. Permanent

    Permanent Tyler Porter Verse 1 Your a house with a couple acres and a, White Pickett fence Your a home cooked dinner and a, Couple of kids Your two wooden chairs rocking, On the front porch Remicising, talking bout Who loves who more Tag When I see you I picture A good long future Chorus Your the tattoo on my right arm Your a part of me Your initials and a heart carved Into an old pine tree Girl you've never been temporary, No you've always been permanent to me Verse 2 Your the woman I want walking, Down the aisle Holding that bouquet and, Making me smile Saying I do, I love you And honey mooning in Cancun Tag When I see you I picture A good long future Chorus Your the tattoo on my right arm Your a part of me Your initials and a heart carved Into an old pine tree Girl you've never been temporary No you've always been permanent to me Bridge Honey I know it's our first date And I don't wanna scare you away But as good as your looking tonight I can't help but wonder what ya' d look like Pushing 85... Tag When I see you I picture A good long future Chorus Your the tattoo on my right arm Your a part of me Your initials and a heart carved Into an old pine tree Girl you've never been temporary No you've always been permanent to me No you've never been temporary Girl you've always been permanent to me When I see you I picture A good long future
  14. Disco

    Disco Tyler Porter & Josie Allen Verse 1 You’re a super freak you’re super freaky I love the way, the way ya shake ya booty I wanna rock your boat I want on your love train I wanna boogie oogie oggie likes it’s 1978 C’mon Verse 2 Every dancing queen, needs a macho man So let’s groove baby, like we don’t give a damn There aint no stopping us now, that’s for sure DJ keep it spinning I want more, more, more Chorus You walk in, sit down right beside me Order up a coke and whiskey Throw it back, you’re getting’ tipsy Whisper hey boy come dance with me Well I’d be a fool, if I said no You took me by the hand, Now we’re spinnin’ like a disco Verse 3 Your dance moves are hundred proof Like a junkie, I’m hooked on you You got that hot stuff, that night fever You make me a true believer Tag Line Cause heaven’s right here, where we’re gettin’ down Girl your body rocks me like funky town Chorus You walk in, sit down right beside me Order up a coke and whiskey Throw it back, you’re getting’ tipsy Whisper hey boy come dance with me Well I’d be a fool, if I said no You took me by the hand, Now we’re spinnin’ like a disco Bridge Nah, we aint don’t yet Check it Long day, workin’ hard Stiff drink, at the bar Brown eyes, there you are Turnin’ heads like a movie star Bright lights, neon glow Long legs, shinin’ gold Stole my heart, got my soul Think I’m losin’ all control Tag line Had a shot of jack, Had a cold beer Nothing’s got me buzzin’ Like you dear Chorus You walk in, sit down right beside me Order up a coke and whiskey Throw it back, you’re getting’ tipsy Whisper hey boy come dance with me Well I’d be a fool, if I said no You took me by the hand, Now we’re spinnin’ like a disco Outro Dancing here with you, thinking to myself Tonight, heaven must be missing an angel Chorus You walk in, sit down right beside me Order up a coke and whiskey Throw it back, you’re getting’ tipsy Whisper hey boy come dance with me Well I’d be a fool, if I said no You took me by the hand, Now we’re spinnin’ like a disco Yeah we’re spinning like a disco Like a disco
  15. I tell them I love fishing

    This is Hilarious!!! LOVE this one hahaha. This reminds me of something Adam Sandler would sing back in the day during one of his comedy skits lol! Nice one
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