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LARABIE10

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About LARABIE10

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  • Birthday 10/10/62

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    http://www.soundclick.com/RichardLarabie

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    write lyrics
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    country
  1. Just in Beaver I'm just in Beaver Yes my friend I need her I can't seem to leave her Though she broke my heart I'm just in Beaver She is the receiver This girl gives me fever When she rips my Bonaparte I can't stop...thinking bout her purty face I won't shop...cos no one could take her place I'd put a ring on her fing But that would end the fun The words I DO just seem to screw It up for everyone Chorus repeat As time flies...I will just enjoy the ride As I die...you won't see this ol boy cry It don't make sense to jump the fence The grass ain't all that green The one I got still pretty hot When I'm there in between Chorus repeat
  2. Read yours earlier and I would like to say that I like your style my friend Great ideas and sure more to come
  3. You have received some great responses and I would like to say that you did a great job
  4. Thanks all..just getting my feet wet again Trying to see if my writing has improved after a long hiatus
  5. Weve got the tools (CH) If you've got the job weve got the tools If you wanna save a buck well bend the rules Just provide the beers well find the fools So if you've got the job weve got the tools Ol Billy Bob looks like a slob but he can bang a nail And Bobby Joe, he always knows What others seem to fail Buds a stud at slappin mud with the finest of detail And Cletus prays to Jesus When he breaks a fingernail (CH) If you've got the job weve got the tools If you wanna save a buck well bend the rules Just provide the beers well find the fools So if you've got the job weve got the tools Big Rufus is a Dufus But stronger than an Ox And don't forget my cousin Rhett He'll haul them heavy rocks Jed and Ted could build a shed Like kids with building blocks And poor Tyrell, he kinda smells But some say its his socks (CH) If you've got the job weve got the tools If you wanna save a buck well bend the rules Just provide the beers well find the fools So if you've got the job weve got the tools (TAG) These ol fools aint been to school they got their smarts from life's hard knocks
  6. Time ain't on our side We live in the moment Look away... and everything's gone Can't stop that old clock on the wall It just keeps ticking on They say time can heal any hurt Love often creates But these wounds that we're trying to mend Has determined our fate (CH) We've cheated, we've lied, we've denied Never swallowed our pride We tried to reside but we couldn't provide what we eyed Our worlds did collide It untied what we both tried to ride There's no need to hide bad goodbyes Time ain't on our side An instant can change all the strange That we've both come to face But what's been said and done will forever case this empty space As days turn to nights and the seasons change four times a year These past wicked fights that we fought Will not dry up our tears (CH) We've cheated, we've lied, we've denied Never swallowed our pride We tried to reside but we couldn't provide what we eyed Our worlds did collide It untied what we both tried to ride There's no need to hide bad goodbyes Time ain't on our side
  7. Momma left me Daddy,why do you drink beer n' Smoke cigarettes don't you fear That you'll get sick And leave this world too early I'm old enough to know it's wrong I need you here where you belong Why don't you quit It's causing me to worry (ch) If it looks like I am scared to death Daddy, please don't be upset That momma's gone..it's just you and me I know you're drinking to forget But keep it up and you'll regret The same way momma felt when she left me Daddy, mom's returned again She comes to me every now and then When I dream And tells me she is sorry I told her you weren't doing well Living in a life of hell Your nightly screams Are causing me to worry (ch) If it looks like I am scared to death Daddy, please don't be upset That momma's gone..it's just you and me I know you're drinking to forget But keep it up and you'll regret The same way momma felt when she left me
  8. Pizza face Y'all call me pizza face But I don't care If these zits are a disgrace Why do y'all stare It only shows ignorance 'Bout life isn't fair Words from this pizza face I'm well aware Once I pass puberty I'll stun you all I'll look so damn purty Just like a doll You'll wanna hang with me Down at the mall But your past cruelty Will be recalled Y'all call me pizza face But I don't care If these zits are a disgrace Why do y'all stare It only shows ignorance 'Bout life isn't fair Words from this pizza face I'm well aware My skin's been growing thick From your abuse One day I'll steal your chicks Then cut them loose I know were gonna click Cos I'm so cute But now this ol' wooden stick Will make you bruise Y'all call me pizza face But I don't care If these zits are a disgrace Why do y'all stare It only shows ignorance 'Bout life isn't fair Words from this pizza face I'm well aware
  9. I chose God Got the devil and the angel on my shoulders And it's making my head spin outta control Both of them are laying down their orders With promises of saving my poor soul One's right and one is wrong Don't wanna go where I belong So I chose God (CH) I chose God and God chose me Screw the Devil My soul is free I chose God,now I foresee No more evil..so let me be Done some evil things this country boy ain't proud of I've sinned my way through a lifetime of regrets Tried to listen to that mysery man high above But the dude below controled me like his pet One harms and one forgives Don't wanna burn, I wanna live So I chose God (CH) I chose God and God chose me Screw the Devil My soul is free I chose God,now I foresee No more evil..so let me be
  10. Questioned Faith I pull the curtains, see the rain Running down the window pane and wonder why the world is crying What's the answer , who's to blame If that ol' sun no longer sets Would we al live with regrets Will echoes of the golden hours Teach us all to not forget (CH) Many fought Many died Some have given us our pride Broken rules Paved our ways Some of us have questioned faith When that day is at your door Will we beg the man for more If the best is yet to come Will it be the end of war (CH) Cos' many fought Many died Some have given us our pride Broken rules Paved our ways Some of us have questioned faith
  11. hahaha
  12. Exactly what you said..."Most of the songs" It's time to change the format as I think mine shows reality I don't want to portray...been there done that. Maybe morbid is what a smaller audience would accept I could be wrong but I have lost many pets and the memories that haunt me most is when I had to put them down and watch them take their last breath Cant get the images out of my mind But you may be right and I may be crazy (Billy Joel)...lol Fine, but if you intend to take a different tact on this, then take a different tact. The first verse is too steeped in cliched imagery. You say later it's summer, but you talk about bone chilling cold, and then just as you finish it starts to rain. Ugh. Strikes me as just a little corny and tired. If you're really gonna be different than don't give me something I've heard before. You have a fine idea, just trust yourself to be real about it. Keep writing. Well here's the problem...I never said bone chilling cold...I said bone chilling still...like an eerie type of feeling of tremendous loss...what's wrong with a cool rain in summer..I did mention that "Who knew summer could be so cold" I am real about it..the imagery is real..Have you ever written anything that was never said before...please go ahead, show me your hit songs
  13. Exactly what you said..."Most of the songs" It's time to change the format as I think mine shows reality I don't want to portray...been there done that. Maybe morbid is what a smaller audience would accept I could be wrong but I have lost many pets and the memories that haunt me most is when I had to put them down and watch them take their last breath Cant get the images out of my mind But you may be right and I may be crazy (Billy Joel)...lol
  14. Old Einstein We felt a bone chilling still where we stood that day Looking down at the hole where we dug his grave When we lowered him in the dark cold ground A light cool rain started falling down Then we all turned round and carried on To the sombre home from were he'd gone Who knew summer could be so cold My best friend was only 8 years old (CH) Old Einstein was a hell of a dog A cherished gift from the grace of God Everywhere I went he was by my side Sure gonna miss my ol Einstein ------------- -------------- -------------- --------------- (CH)
  15. Left here alone Sitting here in this neon jungle seeking shelter from the storm back home Ain't no Northwind there blowing But the aftermath's showing As I drown all my sorrows alone That thing that we had is now over Still the dark clouds won't seem to move on The cold rain keeps on falling As my thirst keeps on calling Me back to this old honky tonk chorus I'm back being single Shooting down doubles Tripping on sad country songs I ain't here to mingle Or looking for trouble Just wanna be left here alone My love life is shattered broken and battered We went where we both dared to go I ain't here to mingle Or looking for trouble just wanna be left here alone It's between her memory and my heart And it's spinning my head all around but as she fills up my mind It's getting easier to find The reason we didn't back down I know we should bury the hatchet But I feel that we've dugged deep enough that old Web we've been weaving Shows we've both been deceiving which proves were no longer in love Chorus