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      A place for members to post their lyrics if they're looking for constructive criticism.

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      Do you have music for the song you want critiqued? Purely instrumental creations also welcome! This is the forum to participate in.

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      Interested in creating music videos? Here is a place to get feedback on the video itself. If you want feedback on the song, post in Songs Feedback (or both places if you want feedback on the song AND the video).

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      Interested in joining a lyric contest to see how your lyrics measure up amongst your peers? This is the place to enter!

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      This is the place where you'll find the contests that don't fit in the other two categories.

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      Inside this forum, you'll learn the musical & lyrical crafts to help you develop your songs and lyrics.

    2. Music Theory and Melody

      A place to discuss questions about music theory and how to develop melodies for your songs.

    3. Songs In Development/Collabs

      Do you have a song that you'd like community help with? Got a good idea and nothing more? This is the place to post your idea, or a link to an audio idea. No critique, just ideas to make it better. A community place to throw your 2 cents in.

  5. General Creativity Area

    1. Artists' Cafe

      A place for you to post poems, short prose, lyrics, songs, and/or artwork. We're a creative bunch: if you're proud of it, we'd love to see it!

    2. Creativity Games & Challenges

      A place for discussions about the creative aspects of songwriting. Looking for inspiration? Would you like to pose a creative challenge to the rest of the creative community here? This is the place to do it.

    3. Songwriting Prompts and Exercises

      Let’s help one another kick-start the songwriting process! If you have an idea for a lyrical or musical prompt to inspire new songwriting ideas, or want to start a non-competitive group songwriting exercise, this is the place to share it. Stumped for a lyric topic? Stuck in a musical rut? Stop by here and get those creative juices flowing again.

  6. Performing, Recording and the Industry

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      Discussions on how to do your best in front of a live audience.

    2. Recording Tips & Technical Questions

      Information & recommendations about home recording & equipment you've been particularly impressed with. Also a place to post information about recording studios and tips for getting the most out of your studio experience.

    3. Music Video Production

      Want to make videos for your songs? A place ask questions and discuss all aspects of music video production (technology, software, hints, tips, etc.)

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      A place to discuss the business end of songwriting as a profession. Also a place to talk about PRO's and songwriting associations and any aspect of the business which you want to discuss, be it controversial or just an item of interest

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    1. Self Promotion & Advertisements

      A place to sell yourself. What do you need to do to make it big? What have you done to improve your exposure? New CD? Website? Let us know and discuss here.

    2. Off Topic Discussions

      This is the place to discuss all those things that don't really belong in any other forum.

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      These are threads that we're reluctant to delete, but that need to be moved into their own special place.

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    • Hope I'm not too late to the party, the flow on this is really good Paul, and I love the poignancy of it, the unique feel. Paul, the only tweak that jumps at me from the lyric is,  And gossipers happily feed it.  Great write. Love your versatility as a lyricist.
    • I love this one, very good flow to it. Can't wait to hear it with music. Sounds like something that has that country, country rock sound to it.. Once again really like it! 
    • Barneyboy Thank you, I am really glad that you replied to this topic, and I actually agree with a lot of the comments you make. Looking at this as a straight lyric, your points make sense. The present tense would be better, sounds like a forced rhyme for kill (which it is), the chorus is crap (my words) objectively that is all correct and I agree with you, I worked within the boundaries of another song and those are the weak points because of it. Your critical eye is really on point here and you took a lot of time on it, I really appreciate it. Thank you so much! One thing I will answer, the burqa could conceal bombs and other weaponry beneath it and therefore be used in terror strikes. (not my opinion, just answering).   =Bob= thank you for your colourful input   PaulCanuck, Should I stay or should I go now? Rock The Casbah, the good old days! Thanks for your comments, I tend to get tunnel vision, so it's nice when someone pulls me out of my own head to see broader options for my lyrics.  
    • Hello everyone, would appreciate your feedback on these in progress instrumentals I'm working on. Will kindly do the same for your tracks.                 
    • Hey everyone, looking to get some advice or some ideas to bounce off of for 3 tracks I'm finishing up. Let me know your thoughts. These are instrumentals so any criticism that is constructive is great. Would love to hear your ideas also.    1.)       2.)   3.)   https://soundcloud.com/gud4umusic/inprogress-91917/s-INTiu   4.)       
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