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Theresa

Rhythm

Yes Yes

Sun shine upon my face

Soft breezes bathe my skin

Transporting me to places

That I've never been

Yes Yes

Let me feel the glow

of moonbeams in the night

illuminating pathways

Of everlasting light

Yes Yes

lets dance along the shore

with wings upon our feet

Stepping to the rhythm

as distant drummers beat

a primal longing call

that echoes in our heart

Reverberating splendor

Of which we all are part

Yes Yes

sun shine upon my face

Let me feel the glow

Lets dance along the shore

Yes Yes Yes

The last part of this poem is about the drum circle on Sundays

on the beach at sunset. Everyone takes part and dances or plays an instrument ..or

you can just watch. There are drums, flutes, etc. A beautiful happening.

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That's very lovely Theresa. :)

The Rhythm of Life comes shinning through your metaphors on this one.

We had friends here from Germany last summer that wanted to see Siesta Key

but we never got there because we spent too much time at the Ringling Museum and

Selby Botanical Gardens.

But now you've given me a reason to visit on a Sunday evening.

It sounds very inviting to say the least. :rolleyes:

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I can relate so much to this Theresa. Beautifully written.

Drummers on the beach...must be amazing to take part in such a musical/spiritual collaboration in such a setting.

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Am wistful myself too ... I've done a few sit-ins where several artists are doing whatever they want and just jamming. Sometimes at places like bluegrass festivals, or folk festivals, or fiddle conventions there are ample opportunities to join in with whoever. I've never had the chance to do it on a beach though ... oh yeah ... I've never had the chance to see the ocean ...

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I just love the lines:

illuminating pathways

of everlasting light-

You know there's a song in here somewheres. Thanks for sharing..................peace!

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When I posted this I had little time for replys as hubby had just got home from hospital..

I appreciate all the comments

Jim..yes Florida is gorgeous and hopefully you will return someday

oxe57..thank you for the comment..yes I see there could be a song here

Duane..thank you for commenting..I sincerely hope you have the chance to take part in a musical happening on the beach..life changing for sure

Desertrose...thank you for the comment..I can see from listening to and reading your work..you can relate..lovely work...a real talent

DannyDep...do hope you get to experience a drum circle on Siesta Key..they do this all around the world..

Take care

Theresa

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