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Tex

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About Tex

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    Contributing Muse
  • Birthday 08/09/1961

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    Arkansas

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  • Lyricist, Composer or Both?
    little of both
  • Musical Influences?
    Country
  1. I agree with the others.......nice demo Good Luck Tex
  2. Well that's the thing eh, there are no new jokes, new tellers, new listeners, but no new jokes. "I fell off my dinosaur when I heard that one." Probably has more validation then most folks realise, for instance. "What do you call 40 dead (fill in current disparaged group)_______ at the bottom of the sea ? A start. Anyways. A horse and a chicken are playing in a meadow. The horse falls into a mud hole and is sinking. He calls to the chicken to go and get the farmer to help pull him out to safety. The chicken runs to the farm but the farmer can't be found. So he drives the farmer's BMW back to the mud hole and ties some rope around the bumper. He then throws the other end of the rope to his friend, the horse, and drives the car forward saving him from sinking! A few days later, the chicken and horse were playing in the meadow again and the chicken fell into the mud hole. The chicken yelled to the horse to go and get some help from the farmer. The horse said, "I think I can stand over the hole!" So he stretched over the width of the hole and said, "Grab for my penis and pull yourself up." And the chicken did and pulled himself to safety. Moral of the Story: If you're hung like a horse, you don't need a BMW to pick up chicks. Always wondered why I didn't like BMW's................guess I know why now..............
  3. Hi Sean, I'd love to give some feedback but my computer just won't let me listen to soundcloud............but I will say this much it's always better if you post the lyrics with your post........ Good Luck Tex
  4. Thanks Esa...........made a bit of a change there.........
  5. Hi Esa, The one thing that sticks out to me right off is the title.........most of the time it's the hook........I would say here it's (Feel My Love).......maybe that's just me though....... Good Luck Tex
  6. I've got this as 1st vr, ch, 2nd vr, ch, Instrumental. bridge, ch and tag...........just a thought ....what if I did this as 1st vr, 2nd vr, ch, instrumental, bridge, and then two ch's.........would it be getting too deep into the song before getting to the hook?
  7. Thanks Big Jack, Glad you took the time to read this. Tex
  8. I posted the lyric to this a week or two back........told Joey M that I had sent the lyric to a girl from my past and she wanted to hear this one........He said he did too....so here it is guys....... http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13393347 Someone Here Still Loves You (Spoken) Darling, though we parted ways, many years ago My heart, never found a way, to let you go (Sing) So Darling When your smile's, been turned upside down And you friends are nowhere to be found When there's no one, standing by your side And your ship, has sailed on the morning tide When you feel, you can't trust anyone again And you ask, will this bad luck ever end Darling.....don't be blue Someone here, still loves you Maybe it's crazy, but it's true Someone here, still loves you (sing) We can never go back, it's been said many times But Darling, I never left, in my heart and my mind So Darling When you start thinking life's unfair And your pockets, seem to be so bare When you're hoping, he'll come through But he breaks your heart, not thinking of you And when the hurt, won't let you sleep, at night As you're needing, someone to hold you tight Darling.....don't be blue Someone here, still loves you Maybe it's crazy, but it's true Someone here, still loves you (spoken) Darling, someday, sometime, somewhere down the line When someone here, happens to cross your mind (sing) Darling.....don't be blue Someone here, still loves you Maybe it's crazy, but it's true Someone here, still loves you (spoken) Yes....Someone here (sing) Still.....Loves.....You
  9. Thanks Paul, Maybe Sweethart or Honey in the ver's and bridge and keep Darling in the cr...... As far as shouldn't or wouldn't goes.....I'm thinking if he could write a new ending it wouldn't end this way.........might just be me........ Thanks Again Tex
  10. Thanks LB.........Sorry I don't know your name
  11. OK guys I think I'm ready to demo this but thought I'd run it by you guys one more time and see if there is anything else suggested..... Thanks Tex Wouldn't End This Way Darling, since that moment you slipped away It's all I can do to make it day to day I dream you're lying next to me at night But you're gone with the morning light I know it's been a while since I've dropped by But that's because it always makes me cry Wish I could go back to our story's beginning Pull out my pen and write us a new ending Then girl, you'd have never slipped away And it wouldn't end this way No, it wouldn't end this way Me? well, I guess I'm doing OK But I miss you more and more each day Sometimes I stare at your picture on the wall And think I hear your foot steps down the hall My friends tell me, I'll find someone new But Darling I can't seem to get over you Wish I could go back to our story's beginning Pull out my pen and write us a new ending Then girl, you'd have never slipped away And it wouldn't end this way No, it wouldn't end this way (Instrumental) I've got roses in my hand, and tears in my eyes Cause Darling, you know I'll love you till the day I die Sorry, but I've got to go now, it's getting late And the groundskeeper's waiting to close the gate Wish I could go back to our story's beginning Pull out my pen and write us a new ending Then girl, you'd have never slipped away And it wouldn't end this way No, it wouldn't end this way No, it wouldn't end this way
  12. What are you trying to say here??? I'm confused......I think you're trying to tell her your nothing more than a one night stand, but I can't say for sure........ Best of Luck Tex
  13. I agree with Steve.......if you have to explain it maybe you need to go a different way with it.....but I've been there before myself......what I thought should be understood others questioned me about....don't know if this helps at all..... Best of luck Tex
  14. Sorry not me on either.........I've got some friends in Nashville that I went to high school with......he wrote songs like (Two Sparrows in A Hurricane) (Where Corn Don't Grow) and (One Boy One Girl) they help me out with demo's.........
  15. 1st VR Pre-Ch CH 2nd VR Pre-Ch CH Bridge Ch Tag May need to be......(might of been) but I'll leave that up to you Sorry but it should be......make things right.......sorry typo on my part