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MKaden

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About MKaden

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    Muse In Training
  • Birthday December 2

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  • Gender
    Male
  • Location
    San Antonio, Texas

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  • Lyricist, Composer or Both?
    Lyricist and music
  • Musical Influences?
    Alt. country, Rock, Indie
  1. Chorus: Bright and early is when your love shines through I wake from the darkness and reach out to you Possible bridge: As I lie in bed the sun hits your body and cast long shadows on your peaks and valleys Thanks for any help
  2. This is a folk rock type song any help is appreciated Verse: we talk of freedom we talk of peace but neither seem to share the same space Verse: We talk of loving, and empathy but neither seem to share the same space Chorus: What can we count on what can we find that's gonna want to share the same space Verse: We talk of wanting we tak of need but neither seem to share the same space Verse: We talk of honor and righteousness but neither seem to share the same space
  3. any help is appreciated these would be my choruses Chorus: Just like the dragonflies we stick together through worse or better and the river keeps flowing and time stands still Just like the dragonflies we soar as one joined together and the river keeps flowing and time stands still
  4. an unfinished song, looking for help and suggestions Chorus: Let me tell you a story filled with courage and fear with some truths hard to handle but every word said is sincere Verse: I wound up in the service wasn't all it's cracked up to be got twenty years and a pension it almost sucked the life out of me Verse: A few of us went crazy some were victims of fate a few of us made some money a few of us say Jesus is great
  5. A rough draft. any suggestions or inspirations are appreciated. Matt Verse A tear stained face since the day I left you no one to turn to feeling out of place Chorus I've fallen from grace I left without warning on a beautiful morning without a trace Verse Haunting late nights and stark early mornings guilt comes torturing me like a blinding light
  6. Starr, Some thoughts were... I fake but can't pretend I fight but can't defend When will this madness end I'm living but I'm dead I'm guiding but I'm led I sleep in the devil's bed I sleep but I can't dream I cry but I can't scream My soul has been picked clean respectfully, Matt