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  1. In Topic: Black Ice

    Posted 1 Nov 2016

    Enjoyed this much-ly. Lyrics tell a clever story. Do have something to consider. Maybe open the story with something akinto, Your slippery slope was dark and deep. As a way to start the slide effects of black ice before you get to the chorus.

    Cool dark and definitely folky, Cindy. ...Posted Image
  2. In Topic: The Wedding of Ricky and Amber

    Posted 1 Nov 2016

    Whether redneck or harvest. This is further proof that you have hilarious skill in writing a comedy lyric. Enjoyed this as much as Hometown kings.

    You made me smile out load, again... Posted Image
  3. In Topic: Music in your heart.

    Posted 30 Oct 2016

    If you were Paul Simon, you would write this lyric and fans everywhere would sing and dance around its beauty. Sorry I can't be a roaring crowd of encouragement but I can be me and enthusiastic about how you touched my heart and left just a bit behind. As you intended. Actually, more than a bit.. 'cause I'm all about honest.

    Thanks, BigHappy.

    Till your congas beat about their horns... Posted Image
  4. In Topic: The Toreodor

    Posted 28 Oct 2016

    I don't hate it. Enjoy it quite a bit, actually, 'though it does have a poser vibe that takes some getting over. I may be wrong but I think Toreador is only a word that means bullfighter in Bizet & Merimee's Carmen (the french opera about sexy crazy Spaniards). And I also think Ole' isn't very Mexican either, but more of a cheer used (exclusively?) in Spain and Hollywood and at football games that look like soccer.

    Especially like the notion that this brave guy might only be a figment of imagination or intoxication... he did humorously consider bringing a gun to a bullfight.

    Best and more, Big Happy... Posted Image
  5. In Topic: Me time (revised with added bridge)

    Posted 27 Oct 2016

    As always, I'm enjoying one of your lyric stories. only nit involes the baby/baby bit of hmm in V1. Perhaps something like this could be worth considering:

    Lazy/Crazy to the point of ruthless
    Baby don't call me useless

    Other'n that, if even, I like it all and love the new bridge.

    Keep your keep on... Posted Image

    p.p. I really like Baby cries me a new tooth enough to enjoy getting lost on it. Is the meaning similar to Baby cut me some slack?

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