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Posted 28 Oct 2016I don't hate it. Enjoy it quite a bit, actually, 'though it does have a poser vibe that takes some getting over. I may be wrong but I think Toreador is only a word that means bullfighter in Bizet & Merimee's Carmen (the french opera about sexy crazy Spaniards). And I also think Ole' isn't very Mexican but more of a cheer used (exclusively?) in Spain and Hollywood and at football games that look like soccer.
I especially like the notion that this brave guy might only be a figment of imagination intoxication... he did humorously consider bringing a gun to a bullfight.
Best and more, Big Happy...
Posted 27 Oct 2016As always, I'm enjoying one of your lyric stories. only nit involes the baby/baby bit of hmm in V1. Perhaps something like this could be worth considering:
Lazy/Crazy to the point of ruthless
Baby don't call me useless
Other'n that, if even, I like it all and love the new bridge.
Keep your keep on...
p.p. I really like Baby cries me a new tooth enough to enjoy getting lost on it. Is the meaning similar to Baby cut me some slack?
Posted 26 Oct 2016I'm up too late for details but this made me 'ah' in awe. Brava, Tammy...
Posted 26 Oct 2016I read this earlier, Emily, and had the same pre and chorus contradiction as Liam. But now, after enjoying a few reads more, I like that I won't dig my grave, oh, because I'm gonna drown and float away. This is so smartly, sadly and beautif'ly written. I do love the comfort of your misery, here and in "Touch Me", so I'm gonna hope this feeling is more about fiction than my autobiography.
Oh'n I didn't ask permission, didn't have time, but I kinda read with the vibe of The Weepies song "Gotta Have You". Sorry if this akins-to blaspheme.
Cheers in a forward looking way...
Posted 26 Oct 2016I've enjoyed this enough to come back and re-read on more'n a few occasions. It being Voyager specific didn't matter me much. (Cool to know, though.) I just liked the words and way you wrote this story with all it's near & outer space-y images. Very Cool!
Cheers and more, before the end of time...
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