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Posted 1 Nov 2016Enjoyed this much-ly. Lyrics tell a clever story. Do have something to consider. Maybe open the story with something akinto, Your slippery slope was dark and deep. As a way to start the slide effects of black ice before you get to the chorus.
Cool dark and definitely folky, Cindy. ...
Posted 1 Nov 2016Whether redneck or harvest. This is further proof that you have hilarious skill in writing a comedy lyric. Enjoyed this as much as Hometown kings.
You made me smile out load, again...
Posted 30 Oct 2016If you were Paul Simon, you would write this lyric and fans everywhere would sing and dance around its beauty. Sorry I can't be a roaring crowd of encouragement but I can be me and enthusiastic about how you touched my heart and left just a bit behind. As you intended. Actually, more than a bit.. 'cause I'm all about honest.
Till your congas beat about their horns...
Posted 28 Oct 2016I don't hate it. Enjoy it quite a bit, actually, 'though it does have a poser vibe that takes some getting over. I may be wrong but I think Toreador is only a word that means bullfighter in Bizet & Merimee's Carmen (the french opera about sexy crazy Spaniards). And I also think Ole' isn't very Mexican either, but more of a cheer used (exclusively?) in Spain and Hollywood and at football games that look like soccer.
Especially like the notion that this brave guy might only be a figment of imagination or intoxication... he did humorously consider bringing a gun to a bullfight.
Best and more, Big Happy...
Posted 27 Oct 2016As always, I'm enjoying one of your lyric stories. only nit involes the baby/baby bit of hmm in V1. Perhaps something like this could be worth considering:
Lazy/Crazy to the point of ruthless
Baby don't call me useless
Other'n that, if even, I like it all and love the new bridge.
Keep your keep on...
p.p. I really like Baby cries me a new tooth enough to enjoy getting lost on it. Is the meaning similar to Baby cut me some slack?
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