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Do you have an artistic effort you can't find a place for anywhere? a poem, a greeting/anniversary/birthday card that you made yourself....whatever? This is the place for all art. If you desire criticism of your work please let us know. We will try to help you out. Or if you wish to just to share your creativity in the verbal, visual or aural media without in-depth criticism we'd love to experience it. There are no mandatory reply to post ratios in this forum but the social muses do suggest that giving response to the work of others will be rewarded tenfold.

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#1 User is offline   Theresa Icon

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Posted 03 May 2012 - 08:43 PM


I see a star twinkle
in the jet black winter sky
it reminds me we're connected
You and I

Streaking through the universe
In many shapes and forms
We are cosmic dust
Created to be born

Patterns by billions
yet some how the same
Staring out, riding through
Wondering how we came

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Posted 05 May 2012 - 12:48 AM

"Patterns by billions" - Oh yes indeed! :)


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Posted 05 May 2012 - 05:35 PM

Very lovely indeed Theresa.
Reminded me of the movie Contact.
Carl Sagan would be proud of you. ;)
My most spiritual encounter happened under a jet black winter sky as well.
(so what are we doing down here in Florida?) :blink: :lol:
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that take the trip with you."

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Posted 06 May 2012 - 05:07 PM

Good stuff here especially:

'cosmic dust created to be born'
a poem begins as a lump in the throat-
Robert Frost

Music with meaning at:

Lyrics, poetry, screenplays etc. at: http://www.storymani...o...nsR&alpha=E

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Posted 10 May 2012 - 04:34 PM

Ah yes, Theresa ... there-in layeth content asking to be changed from a poem to escape the lips of a singer ...

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Posted 18 May 2012 - 09:29 PM

Makes me feel big and small and the same time! Very nice job.
Love, John Kaniecki

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Posted 18 May 2012 - 10:01 PM

"in the jet black winter sky"


perhaps, a trilogy ehh? :huh:


"inner connected"

"outer connected"

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